Once Illuminated by the Sun

Overall it's pretty good, but I have a few small comments: 1. The accident in the male protagonist's family is too sudden. You can lay the foundation in the early stage. For example, everything is not going well for the male protagonist this year, as if there are unknown signs. 2. You can take care of it before and after, for example: The sun rises slowly at the beginning, shining on my life. It is the light I want to chase in my life. Ending: Unfortunately, the sun is not my sun after all. He crossed the sky and disappeared again. As the sun sets for me, it rises for others. The sun cannot be kept. 3. You can add some high-intensity scenes, because the plot is a little short,! The lack of a certain sense of substitution can also have a certain impact on the subsequent text. 4 It is best to add a group hide-and-seek session, and sublimate the theme at the end, saying: Some people disappear after playing hide-and-seek.

The sunset returns to the mountains and seas, which hide deep meanings. No one doesn't regret it, but some people don't complain about it.

The author is great. I want to read the perspective of the male protagonist or make a side story, or write about the male protagonist's future life. It's such a pity. Is there a prototype for this book? How are they in reality? They should meet again [crying][crying][crying]

This article is pretty good, but it doesn't seem very abusive🤔? The emotional details are also quite good. The heroine initially had acne on her face and she had a low self-esteem when she had a crush on the hero. But after puberty, the acne disappeared and she started to become brighter. But in the last chapter, my mood was like a roller coaster. When I saw He He and Yang Zhi kissing, I almost twisted into maggots on the bed. It only took a few chapters. The hero could not return to the country temporarily because of his father's affairs. The heroine didn't want to be implicated, so they separated in the end. Well... Anyway, the author's writing is quite realistic.

Perhaps in that unknown youth, it became a bright light in Yang Zhi's gloomy life, but youth is full of regrets and regrets. People always have to look forward, and stories will always move forward with the passage of time. There will always be people waiting for you in the not-too-distant future. Of course, meeting each other is fate, and knowing each other will follow.

He Xu is very good, and Yang Zhi is also very good. I hope they can meet again, and I also hope the author will write a sequel.

It's pretty good. It's a pity that we didn't end up with the male protagonist.

Teacher, can you write a side story? I want to see if the male protagonist comes back to find a girl, because I really can't let go [crying]

It's pretty, really. Regret is the normal state of life! But I always feel that the story is not finished. Maybe it's because I've read too many novels where the two parties meet and put it down in the end. But in this one, the two parties never met in the end. It's a pity.

Can there be some kind of extra story? Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, I'm really going crazy! ! ! !

Fortunately, it's not very cruel to me, it's more of a pity. I really want to see it from another perspective.

The ending is a bit sloppy, but good

My life is still going on, and time will never stop for anyone, so looking forward, he and I will not be together after all.

Looks good, maybe that's what secret love is

A story full of regrets appears on the page. Life is always full of regrets. I hope they will have a happy ending in another world.

Personally, I don't think it's particularly cruel.

Let's do a side story [Making faces] I want to see what options there are and whether they will meet again.

It's really easy to cry, the author's emotional description is very delicate.

It's really easy to cry, I think family love is the best to cry about, I miss my grandma [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]