Immortality: Immortal Court Relationship Household Fishing in the Lower Realm

It is rare to see a book on Tomato that describes normal people. There is no obscenity, no fantasies about middle school, and no show off of IQ. The plot of the story is logically developed, and the quality is worse than the ten on the recommendation list. Many of the titles of Tomato's books have the air of a street gangster who has never gone to school, and the storyline feels like he has been mentally polluted after reading it. In this environment, this book is simply a breath of fresh air. Although some settings are borrowed from Xuanjian Xianzu and other online works, it doesn't matter, these are not important. If you can tell the story clearly and refreshingly, it is better than 99% of online works. Author, please keep working hard and hope you can become a god.

I like the style very much. I feel that it is better not to have a heroine CP in the longevity novel, but to have a Taoist couple (this Taoist couple is not a male and female Taoist couple, but a fellow Taoist, companion, and like-minded person). I hope the protagonist does not want the Virgin, but currently there is no such thing. Of course, the above are just some personal suggestions. The author can just follow his own ideas. [Like post][Please update][Like]

I've only read half of it now, and I can't help but comment. The author's portrayal of characters is so good. This novel has some group portraits, but the main plot is still the protagonist. Every supporting character is really portrayed with flesh and blood, which is particularly exciting. It may be okay at first glance, but the more you look at the characters, the more vivid they become. This kind of writing style is rare in the world of online literature. [Like][Like][Like][Like] I really want to deduct one star, but I still hope the author will work harder, so I still give it five stars. The details of the plot in the latter part are not as good as the previous one. There are no particularly outstanding people and things, which aggravates the description of the protagonist. However, the description of the protagonist is really average. I prefer the original protagonist as an immortal who observes the changes in the world and understands human feelings. This is also the pitfall that I first encountered after reading the introduction. Although the protagonist still behaves steadily in the later description, the psychological description of the protagonist highlights the arrogance of being protected by a god-level destiny, a feeling of being superior to others and looking down on others. First, he looks down on Han Tianzun, who is two levels higher than himself, and then does not take the one who is one level older than oneself in the eyes, and even feels that one level one level above oneself cannot hide from his own spiritual thoughts. The protagonist in the back has a feeling of Long Aotian, but in fact, apart from his innate cultivation qualifications, destiny and Taoist resources, the protagonist has nothing far superior to others. Whether it is planning or character, he can only be considered above average, but the protagonist seems not to notice it at all. Yes, you need to know that there are people outside the world, and there is a sky outside the world. They all see that the "ordinary" Han Tianzun can transcend his imagination (even if he is a Taoist reincarnation, but the protagonist does not know), he should also understand that fate is not everything, and he should not look down on people in the world. But the protagonist has always been like this. If it weren't for the protagonist's halo, he would have fallen down long ago. Forget it, let's deduct one star. Let's deduct another star. Later on, the protagonist's thoughts become more and more shameless and villainous, and he gets more and more involved. I feel that the protagonist has nothing but fate and the tricks given by Daojun Dao Zun. If someone else is given these tricks, he will be no worse than the protagonist. The protagonist himself has average intelligence and average understanding. Even his personality charm is getting less and less. Apart from good luck, he has no redeeming qualities.

I glanced at the plane when it was about to take off Seeing Sichuan from Xinjiang So enjoyable Good book, good book First class writing Reasonably paced The plot is compact It's really a waste to put it on tomatoes

Fairy grass, nine point six cents. The writing style of this book has the feel of Water Monkey from Next Door. It is not like ordinary novels that are straightforward and the whole story is spoken in vernacular. The plot is highly original. It opens with a story about the centuries-old practice chosen by the immortals, and then the protagonist's path to immortality, which is very novel. From the vicissitudes of the years of immortality and immortality, the difference between immortals and mortals, and watching the protagonist step by step until he is about to form a pill now, it can be said that the plot is compact and interlocking. There are no old tricks or poisonous points, it is an absolutely excellent work on cultivating immortality.

This book has limits. This book is quite good. Its subject matter is different from the current mainstream books such as Shuangwen Xiuxian and Long Aotian. The author carefully depicts the characters. Including the mortal dynasty at the beginning, the Xiuxianfang City later, and the battle between good and evil later, the method of cultivating immortals is downplayed, and the people who cultivate immortals are strengthened. Most of the plots are written to serve the portrayal of characters, which has the flavor of mortal flow. After all, it captures the key point that people are the core. The writing and plot are actually not redundant. For example, there is a lot of writing describing the imperial sister in the middle, which also highlights the feeling that mortals are also wise and have a strong obsession with seeking immortality, but they suffer from not being favored by fate. The plot arrangement is reasonable and there is no sense of fragmentation that suddenly imposes things. It can only be said that this book has a threshold, and the author has accumulated a lot. There are many things that need to be scrutinized. For example, the struggle between the middle princes for the throne is the epitome of the Chinese dynasty, and it is written well without being too stretched. Writing this paragraph is also paving the way for the high IQ of the protagonist later (after all, an ordinary person has traveled through time, even if he has a golden finger, he is still a stronger ordinary person. Without the support of wisdom, he will only be used as food in captivity in the end) Of course, it would be perfect if the author updated it faster.

Well written so far! The logic is clear and much better than some mindless articles. Great support for the author!

It's very interesting. The protagonist is not like the previous Changsheng-ryu novels where he either has mediocre qualifications or is so stubborn that he is constantly changing with the times. The protagonist in this novel is like an ordinary monk, with very good talents, but he deliberately hides them just to be safe. It's not that I'm fighting for everything, nor that I'm fighting for nothing. It's more like I'm practicing to experience life and control my own destiny. In the beginning, there will be some problems if you rely on connections, but it's not unbelievable, but it's pretty powerful. Some comments say that this novel does not reflect the changes in the world of the Changsei-ryu, but I feel that it has been reflected in the people the protagonist knows many times. Because of lifespan and talent, the protagonist will eventually say goodbye to each of his relatives and friends. Only those with a hard enough life can always stand on the shore. This book is not a pleasant read, but it is really good-looking to me, and I like this kind of story that develops slowly without wasting time.

Not too bad, not too complicated and suspenseful, and also logical, suitable for watching in a relaxing way without thinking too hard. The writing style is natural and appropriate, without being stiff or trying to be clever. Deduction of one star, two points. First, there is no major work, and the novel seems to be displeased with the mountains. The current conflicts are not sharp enough. Although the longevity novel is more ordinary and ordinary, it still needs a little crisis adjustment. You can put the protagonist in a relatively safe position and experience a big storm on the edge of the incident. Second, the Xuanjian stems are too dense and cumbersome in comparison. It is recommended to reduce them later. Things like "I'm just ordinary Han Tianzun" or "It's okay if I become a respectable person" have been deconstructed on the Internet for a long time, and readers will smile knowingly after reading it, which is quite interesting. However, some inspirations in this book obviously come from different sources, and they have not been widely deconstructed on the Internet. It is best to avoid suspicion and deconstruct it yourself when mentioned. If you feel that the reader can't laugh after reading it, change the wording and move the position - for example, the real person moving mountains is so stiff that it looks stitched together. I prefer this kind of immortal protagonist novels, but the ones I read before were basically unfinished. I hope the author can write this book smoothly.

The author did a very good job in character creation and understanding of the world in the early stage, which is rare in Tomato. However, after turning on the cultivation of immortality, the overall level dropped drastically, and then the protagonist was forced to go to the battlefield, so that he changed the map to the Falling Star Sea, and the logic collapsed directly. Various mechanical deities appeared, and the article was written from the perspective of God. It's a bit uncomfortable, but the early stages are still pretty good. Alas, after more than 200 chapters, the content is as if it was written by a different person. It doesn't look like it was written by one person at all. The logic explodes and it turns into a son-in-law pretending to slap Long Aotian in the face. It's enough to see the protagonist before he goes to the battlefield, and then he will be poisoned and die.

Appreciation from a 10-year-old bookworm. It is a book written with care. The quality can be read at a glance. Good luck to the author. This is a good book, you can read it with confidence

Rarely good book At the beginning, the immortals are selected in the Palace of Eternal Life and go to the fairy city environment in Chapter 100. The upgraded world (continuously ascending, currently only a small world) has clear layers, plenty and details. The living environment also has many "modern" details. Yes, how can a civilization that has developed for 100,000 years be all "antique". This kind of background environment that is more and more intimate and relevant to the present would have been unimaginable in the fantasy of twenty years ago. Times are progressing. Next, I like the settings, such as fate and exercises. It secretly leads to a new writing method of Changshengliu, which involves entering into the world, knowing destiny, observing and arranging. It also has the flavor of behind-the-scenes streaming and voyeuristic live streaming. The writing is really good. Be practical. Steady. You can live forever and look forward to it~

Very good, although the pace is very slow, it is not boring. A rare piece of work. Especially in this materialistic and fast-paced era. Having a slow-paced novel is also a great blessing when life is on pause. It can be regarded as a good book that ranks first among Tomatoes.

The pace is very suitable, and it is not as procrastinating as some immortality novels. The plot is also very interesting. It occasionally intersperses some jokes, but there are no deliberate jokes. It is generous and full. The most important thing is that all the book friends in the comment area are very interesting. Sometimes I laugh from ear to ear when I read some comments. I think the author's mentality when writing this book should be the same as 🐳, not impatient, not impatient, and make decisions before taking action. In short, it is a good book that is particularly suitable for killing time. It's a good thing [full][full][full]

The longevity novel with a background (supported by two Dao Lords) seems to be okay at the moment (I don't think it has too many bad points), but I don't know what will happen in the future (I hope it doesn't have the classic operations of other longevity novels, and it's best to be more decisive) [Chigua]

It has written a classic story of a righteous person cultivating immortality from the bottom. Except for some resources given by Dao Lord, there are no outrageous plug-ins. It feels very normal and comfortable to watch.

It's so well written. I originally didn't like watching this kind of slow-paced immortality series [shocked] but the author's writing style and plot are very suitable for me. Before I knew it, it was almost tied. It looks like it will have to wait until 28 years to finish. [Crying] Author, please hurry up and be more woo woo woo. Author, you'd better take care of yourself, the water will flow slowly, and occasionally learn from the next door, which updates 80 times a day.

It's a top-notch foreshadowing and a very complete framework statement. The portrayal of the female characters in the article is one of the best I've seen on Tomato in the past two years. It's very endearing. It's not a detailed description, but an occasional glance reveals the agility. It's very interesting and recommended.

This is the best immortality essay I have ever written, bar none.

Overall, the book is very good, although the beginning is not particularly eye-catching, and even this destiny is as ordinary as a novel with too many tomatoes. I think the section in Wushanfang City can be said to be the foundation of the whole book. The protagonist has gained endless longevity. Will he become indifferent to all living beings and become otherworldly? In the beginning, the royal family had the thoughts of a chosen immortal, and did not care too much about things. He thought that he only needed to live until the end of the world. The battles in the royal family, and his mother was buried. Jing Yu's human touch was very weak. He spent decades with the third sister in Fangshi, worrying about Yancheng's marriage, Chen Yuan and Chen Xi's future, thinking about Chen Xi's immortal path, tempering his mind for Chen Yuan, and worrying about the third sister's partiality for the two children. The worries about Mu Shan, the helplessness of the third sister, the care of Chen Xi, the training of Chen Yuan, Jing Yu's changes are remarkable. There are no major problems in the later period, and the description of the fairy world is retained for the time being, leaving space for the follow-up plot. It can be regarded as the top few in Tomato. I just feel that the difference between the Purple Qi Golden Pill and the Wuxia Golden Pill is a bit small, but it does not matter to the entire realm. The latest chapter is about to give birth to a baby. I only have this thought in my heart. It should be like this. You kid is already having a baby. Why should it be like this? Because he is born with immortality, there is no need to worry about his lifespan. Xuanjing still has a stable temperament. If it weren't for the fact that his nine lives are not allowed to deteriorate, and the exercises given by Dao Zun, he would have a temperament that would not be too old for ten thousand years.

After reading it for so long, I also want to give some feedback. This book should have been rated 9.5 A long time ago. However, the opening chapter is not very good and has dissuaded many people. In addition, many negative comments affect people's perception. The ones that can be retained are considered sincere. It truly explains what the unknown whole picture is. I will not comment, especially the description of the third sister. Looking back Look, there are quite a lot of people scolding me. The author can handle the pressure of life. The ending of the third sister is very good. It can also be said that the writing is very good. The lifelong plot, but the mistake is the lack of cultivation qualifications. On the other hand, it also shows that the world view of the whole book is very reasonable. There is no reversal or miracle. Everything is just running normally. Close a door and open another. Window, the same goes for the third sister. Each character has his or her own path and obsession. No matter whether you regret it or not, you still go on, right? The longevity text does not describe the protagonist himself, but consists of a person, an event, each scene has an ending or is intentionally composed indefinitely. The protagonist's story will not be magnified or highlighted, just because he is the protagonist, so It's just the output of his perspective. Of course, there is also the part about the protagonist's mother, which shows the author's writing skills. In a mechanized society, it is not easy for the tip of the pen to still reveal true feelings. The charm of that part is very thick, very long, and full of emotion. In short, this book is very good, the characters are very good, the author can keep his heart, let the story continue. I now understand the role of the umbilical orifice. Generally speaking, there are nine orifices in the human body, seven orifices on the face, and two yin orifices in the front and back of the private part. The author just added an umbilical orifice. You know why, an orifice can be referred to as a physiological passage or opening in the human body, and its main function is Material exchange or excretion, but the umbilicus can only be regarded as the entry port, but not the exit, which should form the saying that there is no orifice. However, in another way of thinking, the earliest connection of the umbilicus is in the mother's body, which echoes the material exchange explained above, the umbilical orifice statement. It is established here, and the thread of cause and effect in the article represents the umbilical cord, just like the mother and the baby. The two people are closely connected no matter what. The author uses this skillfully, comparing cause and effect to the umbilical cord. Jing Yu planted the cause, and the person who benefited/harmed became the result.

The plot flows, the setting is brilliant, and the writing is comfortable. The biggest surprise may come from fate, which is different from the traditional tag flow/talent flow. There is a complete and unique world view and system behind it. The problem may be that the plot is a bit mediocre, which is not to say it's not good to watch, but some of the key points that should be highlighted are not highlighted. On Tomato is a very, very, very rare book, highly recommended. Maybe if you go to a certain point, your achievements will be higher? (I don't know what I said nonsense) Another small point is that it is suitable for all physiques. Female readers do not have to hold their noses to endure the obscene and vulgar descriptions in some male videos.

I didn't plan to write it at first, but after reading tonight's update, I can only say: I admire it. Yuan Chen, who was originally the least optimistic and even thought he would turn black, can be written so brilliantly. Like Jing Yu, I also had other ideas. I broke through first. I hope that after I come out of isolation, the author will write better and the book will be more lively.

It's a classic female channel novel. It tends to focus on mortals cultivating immortals. Some of the plots are too clichéd. The details can still be seen in the unique petty style of female channel cultivating immortals. The overall writing style is very delicate and good, and there are very few major poisonous points. I'll give it 4 stars.

Liangcao+, the previous writing is excellent, both the plot and the characters are well written. The reason why this book is not rated so high is mainly later. When writing the Song family chapter, the author seemed to have lost his mind. I don't know if the author changed, and he started to become a little poisonous. The overall writing is very good, but the author wanted to write group portraits, and also wanted to highlight the characters' personalities through some plots, but some of the plot settings were not very reasonable, and the plot was rigidly transferred to the desired plot, which resulted in the protagonist's personality, combat power, and realm all having to serve the plot. This is the sense of fragmentation that some book friends in the commentary said, which makes people feel I feel like the protagonist is sometimes cowardly and sometimes reckless, and I want the protagonist to be cool and cool to write, but for the sake of the subsequent plot, I can't let the protagonist finish pretending. It seems that the protagonist is often unreliable and not well thought out. Sometimes it is purely based on luck and background. It feels like the author said the protagonist can do it, and the protagonist takes the role, and then when there is a crisis, the author forcefully arranges it and it is over. If the plot could be arranged more rationally, this book would be even better. Of course, these are just precautionary measures for brothers. Overall, this book is very good and worth a try. The pressure on one's realm is still serious. The immortality in this book is just a gimmick. Unlike the protagonists in other immortality novels who have poor qualifications, the protagonist in this book has top-notch qualifications and is also following the path of fighting in the world. Immortality is just a small area that can be consumed unscrupulously. However, the author of this book uses the "goat's head" of the longevity essay to constantly suppress his realm. The early stage of the golden elixir is close to perfection, and it has finally reached the early stage of perfection after consuming resources that make Yuanying feel sick. However, there is still a bottleneck, and it still takes ten years to polish it [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] Some other books are also about the realm, but every big realm and every small realm is written in detail, such as what needs to be built in the body in the early stage of the golden elixir to reach the middle stage, and what needs to be done in the middle stage to reach the later stage. It is written in such detail that it makes people feel that the protagonist is making progress every time, and no one says anything. There is nothing written about the realm in this book. I feel that each small realm is just the accumulation of mana. When the accumulation of mana is complete, I will be told about bottlenecks. Bottlenecks are not about pressing realms [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] The readers don't know what they are polishing.

I was hooked after reading the first chapter. I read more than 100 chapters in one day. It was so interesting. First, the plot is reasonable and the supporting characters are full. The protagonist's personality is neither stereotyped nor labeled at the beginning. The cautiousness and friendship are all revealed little by little as the plot develops. Readers are drawn into it, and it is more like participating in the plot of the novel. It's also unlike other immortality genres where the protagonist's appearance depends entirely on Gou, who can travel hundreds of years with a snap of his fingers, and is supported by plot twists and turns during the treasure hunt. Secondly, unlike other male-channeled novels, the supporting characters are almost all male. Instead, the female characters are quite prominent. Unlike other novels, the women appear as beauties, paving the way for the male protagonist's harem. That's not to say that other male-video novels are bad, but it's just that this hint of respect made me feel more comfortable watching them. Third, although the story is written in a flowing way, the author does not like to intersperse the plot with multiple perspectives and multiple timelines. Most of the stories are straight-forward narrations from the protagonist's first perspective, but some side descriptions make people feel that the supporting characters have their own reasons for life. For example, the author uses supporting characters to complain every day that the handsome central air-conditioning guy in Yuwen's house is a pretty boy. However, when describing life and death, the pretty boy is a character like Duan Zhengchun. He really trusts the female lickers and is willing to sacrifice their lives to protect them. He is not deliberately trying to smear him. It can only be said that it is not completely unreasonable for him to have so many licking dogs. And I didn't feel bored after reading through it. The author wrote this world of cultivating immortals very close to life. At the beginning, the protagonist was a cow and horse. After time travel, the protagonist became confused, but the world of cultivating immortals was also a huge world of cows and horses. What points are there to get into the house, the suites in the ring, the shantytowns, the developers who run away... And the evil capitalists who cultivate immortality, etc. Every time I read it and take it into account, I just feel that the protagonist is a bad guy... Otherwise, it is really a real thing and I read a novel and still act like an idiot. Occasionally, the author will play some jokes, such as Han Pingwuqi, Westward Journey... Most of them are popular jokes, which will make the readers smile knowingly, so how can they find them boring. I just hope that the author can stick to his original intention, write the article to the end, and give a logical explanation for the fate of fate, so that it will not be unfinished. Since ancient times, there have been more criticisms than praises for serialized novels. This does not necessarily mean that the novels are not good. It's just that during the update process, there are always people who feel that they know better than the author, like to point out, and even feel that they are a noble person, so as to [give the author a frank word of mouth]. At this time, only by patiently finishing the novel, these well-intentioned people will cease their efforts. At that time, those who are left will truly read the novel as a complete work, and it will not be too late to criticize and discuss it at that time.

The 9.0 Score for this book is a little low. In my opinion, it is a good book with a score of about 9.5. It may not be a masterpiece. What I value most about this book is that the characters in the whole book are very vivid. Everyone has their own thinking, just like a big family at the beginning. Everyone has their own thinking and does not obliterate the glory of others because of the halo of the protagonist. So far, it is very good except for the author who has a bad taste. Well, what is a bad taste? The ordinary Han Daozun, the unique female channel where many men chase one woman, etc., Etc., The most disgusting thing is that Zhao Yuanchen transforms into Jiang Liu'er. Emmmm, hard to rate, but really interesting

It's very interesting to watch. The plot is not as cookie-cutter as ordinary web articles, and the pace of advancement is just right. The supporting characters are not mentioned in a single stroke, but there is a fatal crotch point. The author is too lazy, updating one chapter a day, and the production team doesn't dare to rest like this after two chapters, right? ! Quick update from the author

The first time I was attracted by the beginning, the life setting is very good, and there are some cool points, long-term vision, the background of Dao Lord, and the mortal plot in the back is just so-so. I tolerated it. After practicing Qi, the character design of the protagonist is also average. He has a sense of superiority that he can stand up and talk without having back pain. Moreover, the puppet is also a bit broken. After building the foundation, he was inexplicably killed. Being forced to go to the battlefield is also a poisonous point. It was about this time that I was persuaded to quit. I thought it would collapse after a short time. Unexpectedly, when I came back two years later, I found that I was still writing, so I couldn't bear to read it again. There is a plot of the Song family in the back that is not very good. It is kind of writing for the sake of writing. There is no logic. If I only see I didn't watch the plot of the Song family. I would probably give it two stars and one star for the setting, but I was too bored so I kept reading. Unexpectedly, the plot after Jin Dan suddenly became better, and then Yuan Ying transformed into a god. It got better and better. When it comes to the fairy world plot, there is no cliché plot, which is also a bonus. I continued until I finished watching it. , I found that this book is actually a book with low opening and high growth. The character of the protagonist in the front is not very likable, but the character in the back is much more normal. So if there are readers in the back and have nothing to do, just be patient in the front, skip the chapters you don't like quickly and act like the author is going crazy. Stick with it, this is a good book

In fact, I felt that this book was a bit unsatisfactory at the beginning, but it became more interesting as I read it. I especially liked the development of the branch plots. The third sister's calculation made people unable to live in peace in their lives. Zhao Mingfu's cleverness caused him to have no close friends until his death. Song Zhenren had to sacrifice himself for the sake of his family in the end, and ended up with an ignominy end. Let's talk about the ending. There are no omissions in each chapter. The previous and subsequent chapters are colluding with each other. There are also some unimportant foreshadowings that were dug up later to surprise the readers. For example, the author originally thought of Hu Yiming, Zhao Guo's beggar, and Mu's nephew's branch plots, which were deleted due to progress. This kind of can be written as an extra after the completion. In short, in my opinion, this book is a rare high-quality novel in Tomato. The article is humorous but not too abrupt. It has a rhythm and does not change the map repeatedly. @Chaos Core There is a loophole. In Chapter 465, Brother Yuwenbao said that three families were die-hard loyalists, but later on he wrote that only one family was die-hard loyalists. Apart from Brother Gongsun Jiabao, I don't know if there is another family. You remembered it wrong?