Survival Game: The System Begs Me Not to Die

After reading the book, I found that the author's greatest strengths are that he listens to others' advice, has enough to eat, and has a certain degree of autonomy (in case someone wants a male lead, I won't stop listening). He doesn't listen to everything. Generally, the parts that I feel uncomfortable or weird in the early stage are almost filled in in the later stage. It would be good if the heroine keeps her current personality and thoughts. I particularly appreciate this kind of protagonist but not as sharp as the Holy Father. In the middle and later stages, what is more surprising is that the heroine helps a girl directly give supplies. I feel that this is not fair to her teammates who share the same suffering. You can give the other party a discount, or replace other resources, work to pay off the debt, and don't give away this sense for free. It will be much better

It's okay. Except for the heroine who has a stupid idea from time to time and changes her name to something that is equivalent to the same name, basically all the props are sold, and the talent upgrade book is also sold immediately.

The stock up and survive meal replacement recommended by others is the best meal replacement I have ever seen. The writing is average, but it's pretty good on Tomato, and the storyline is attractive enough to keep reading. Although the heroine doesn't seem very smart in the early stage, she gets better and better later on. The heroine has a strong golden finger, and her strength has improved rapidly. It is a great heroine without cp, and her teammates are women. The heroine often cooperates with women, and they help each other. The aboriginal women in the latest Acid Rain dungeon are well portrayed. I have high standards for writing, so I'll give this one a 7.2. It should be a long article, and I look forward to the day when the author finishes it. If it doesn't end badly in the later stages, I'll give it five stars for the sake of tomatoes.

Very nice! A book with great potential! The expected score is at least 85 points Advantages: The world view is reliable and has no obvious bugs; The heroine has a distinct personality, strength, and means. She is not like a holy father, and she doesn't have the feeling that she can do whatever she wants; The plot and writing style are not trivial or ridiculous. It's very interesting to watch. It's an excellent and refreshing novel. It also contains no words that insult women. I'm so happy! What can be further improved: Apart from the heroine, there are no more outstanding female characters. The female characters currently appearing are not stupid, but there is nothing distinctive about it, including the portrayal of the heroine is a bit shallow. It could be further improved, but it is only the second world now, and as a new author, she has done a good job. I look forward to my wife's updates! Come on!

This is a female survival novel that I rarely read on Tomato. The words and sentences are fluent and there are no obvious mistakes or chronicle-style writing. Although the title of the novel is about stocking up, there is very little description of stocking up in the main text. It mainly focuses on the description of the survival dungeon and the advancement of the main plot. It can be seen that the author wants to write a big world view, and I hope he will not leave holes to be filled. The heroine has a cheat, but it's not a cheat. I can only say that her abilities are relatively powerful among those with abilities, and it's not yet known what the heroine's hidden background is. Overall, it's not outrageous and I can accept it. Personally, I feel that the portrayal of the heroine is a bit lacking. Most of the time, it is written directly from the perspective of God about what the protagonist does and wants to do, and rarely describes the protagonist's psychological description or demeanor. I feel that the heroine is a bit less vivid and has no personality charm. What I like most is that the heroine chooses to seal the bloodline of the shark royal family. The part where she enters the Shark Pearl and then merges into the body, this part feels like the heroine has suddenly changed from a soulless character like a game controller to a vivid and vivid character. Before this, to be honest, I felt that the heroine had no personality charm, just like the standard heroine template of survival novels, and every article feels the same. The setting of supporting villains in the plot is also quite reasonable, and they are not particularly stereotyped two-dimensional characters. The villains do evil out of their own interests, rather than simply because they are villains and they have brain problems and they have to trouble the protagonist. Some female survival stories I read are very keen on spending a lot of space writing about disgusting classic cannon fodder. They insist on writing a few chapters of these people's disgusting thoughts and behaviors and then let the heroine kill them. I feel very good after reading them. Although this article also has such characters, it does not spend a lot of space to describe them in detail. It is very comfortable to kill them quickly and neatly. The chat content on the public screen does not contain long paragraphs of meaningless nonsense, which is rare among the survival articles I have read. In short, this article so far has its flaws in my heart. I originally thought that I wouldn't want to read it after reading dozens of chapters, so I clicked in to read it. The result is a direct tie. This is the first time I have commented on a serialization on Tomato. Come on, author, update quickly [Blow kiss]

The more I write, the better it gets. Those who were recommended to read it before and couldn't stand it still persisted. If any sisters feel that there are too many smelly men in the front, it would be much better if they could jump to the next four or five worlds! You can really see that the author is slowly improving, including many word options, and we women are teenagers too! No words! Bai Hao is also very good! I think many worlds are quite exciting, and there are many outstanding women. Overall, I recommend watching it! I originally wanted to give it four stars, but to support the author, I have to give it a big five stars. It's really amazing to write so much ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

This is really the best-looking survival hoarding book I have ever read. There is absolutely no cp for the heroine. The heroine is strong and wealthy and has a good control over her character. She is decisive in killing and planning without being dehumanized. The plot is smooth and has no surprises. The length of the copy is appropriate. The design is also very innovative. It takes into account the main line of strength improvement and the hidden line of the boss behind it. There may be some bugs and things that affect the perception in the first and second copies at the beginning, but everything will be fine after that. The growth of the author is obvious, and he is a five-star player. I saw a lot of people talking about meal replacement in the comment area. I read this book first and then went to JJ to stock up. Personally, I think this book is better. The initial setting is indeed very similar to the novice copy, but there are not many similarities in the heroine's character development and the subsequent plot rhythm. Yes, in my opinion, the pace of JJ Stocking is a bit slow, and the dungeon is relatively long. I personally prefer a heroine with high combat power. That book was a bit anxious and depressing, but the growth rate of the heroine's character and the length of the dungeon in this book are more to my liking, and the atmosphere is more relaxed and relaxed. Of course, there must be people who have the opposite conclusion to mine. What I want to say is that apart from the early stage, the two books are quite different. If you like one, you may not necessarily like the other, and vice versa. They are not complete "meal replacements"

This book is beautiful! The heroine is not a virgin, has no CP, and has cute pets. Each copy will have a female character that makes people shine. It's great to watch! I hope that the author and teacher will update more, and I love to eat good food🥰~ A small suggestion, since we already have the panda Guolai and the white bear Xiongbao, should we add a brown bear 💕

It's a good read. This is one of the few books I've found that I can read, because I've always been a lone wolf and don't have any teammates, unlike some novels that only have a lot of teammates in them. The main thing is this novel. It doesn't have any bloody plot, and some parts are very reasonable. The main reason is that there are relatively few explanations about transactions in this book. I have been reading it for a long time. Sometimes I really hate the plot where the protagonist makes deals with others. Every time I watch them communicate, I feel that they are particularly disadvantaged. I either think that the protagonist is particularly bad, and then I will not suffer.

Yes, the heroine is a normal person. She is not a virgin, has no brains, and has no cps. She is very happy to kill when she needs to be killed. She also has two background dogs. Believe me, normality is the highest compliment for a heroine in the apocalypse. Some details can still be improved, but having a hostess is already great