It Was Too Abstract in a Dream, I Didn't Expect It to Be Real

The protagonist currently makes a very good impression. He has defeated the dungeon BOSS, gained a wife and lost an enemy, and used death retrieval very well. I will give it five stars first, and then I will check it later. If the real male protagonist is obedient, I will change the score.

What I discovered in the afternoon was really quite interesting, especially the interaction with Xueer at the end was really sweet, and the corners of my mouth never dropped from the sweetness. But the only bad thing was the plot at the beginning, which was really a bit too easy to persuade people to quit. Although he has the ability to revert to death, he doesn't rely on this ability to explore dangerous places in advance. Wouldn't it be bad to let those dangers disappear in advance? And even though they knew there was danger later on and the blame was about to come out, that person had a problem, but he didn't solve it properly, but silently waited for the birth of the monster? I understand if you don't investigate at the beginning. After all, it's okay for normal people to feel pain. But later on, the protagonist died several times just to try on that woman? It's a bit funny. To be honest at that time, it was really easy for me to be persuaded to quit. The protagonist was like a brainless person. He only thought about women and the potential danger was not eliminated. If it is eliminated in advance, how can there be a separation of life and death later? But after all, it's free and the author's attitude is so good. I feel very sorry for the author if I don't give it 5 stars. The back part is very sweet and beautiful. I hope the author will continue to work hard and continue to grow.

Very beautiful [laughing evilly] But I can do it but cherish it

Can there be more plots in the real world?

Not bad, I like it. I don't know what's going on behind this, but it's a bit strange.

I finished reading it in one go, and I keep reading and cherishing it. There is a reason why I can't find it one day [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile] Currently, the heroine has a big star, three maids, an empress, and the president and vice-chairman of the student union in the first dream. The student union and the big star are a bit crazy. Now the protagonist has handled her three relationships well, and the world view is quite big. The protagonist now has a female dragon system on his body, which seems to be a loli, but neither of them has a body now. In short, it is very interesting to watch.

Well written, I like it

The first few chapters look a bit strange, probably because they were cut too much, and the plot jumps around a lot. I suggest changing them here to avoid disturbing newcomers. However, a lot of the plot has been deleted because of this, and it feels like the BT feeling is missing. After reading it, I feel that the plot is quite good, and it is in line with a person's yearning for BT yandere novels. It's a pity that Shen He limits your performance. I hope the author can continue to update it and not be locked in a small dark room.

The review has started, I don't know if I can release it, it's very nice ಥ◡ಥ

4 Stars is okay, but Qingqing in the back is a little uncomfortable, I suggest you just fix it

Yes, very good-looking (but the real-life protagonist is not comfortable to watch, but it is still very good✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧)

This is the first time I have seen this kind of novel novel, which uses the heroine's past as a time-travel port, and the hero tries to redeem herself. It's really good, the sense of immersion is really strong, and the sweetness is beyond the standard. The novel expresses a kind of love in times of need - the noblest and purest view of love. This kind of love is reasonable and well-founded, not as rough as a cool novel.

It's pretty good, but a little short (just take a look at it for now)

The plot is okay, but I always feel that it doesn't look that smooth... Some of the emotions, content, etc. Are a bit stiff. The character description is okay, but it probably needs to be changed a bit. Overall, it's okay, and I can watch it. Let's take a look at the development later

It's super, super pretty, quite special. I've been watching Tomato for several years, and this is the first time I've seen anything like this.

The book is very nice. But as for the author's update speed, I hope the author will not be ignorant and force me to kneel down and beg you.

The author knows what we like to see [laughs evilly]

The author will update soon. How can you sleep at your age and let others see it? You think we are looking down on you! I will tell you how many times a day I will update [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart]

Low rating but surprisingly good looking, keep up the good work

It's very beautiful, why is it rated at more than 6 points?

A good book that perfectly blends adventure and harem Shura field. Identified as a competent author

Really good, really well written

The author is very good at writing, so he started the book-raising mode.

Support the author, come on!

Boss is playing well

It's great, I read it in one sitting. The protagonist saved Jiang Ying at first, but later strengthened her, which made the protagonist unable to defeat anyone and made her very frustrated. Overall, the heroine felt like a white-eyed wolf.

How to say it? Please help

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking Why is such a beautiful book not popular [crying]

It's nice, but the author is too short.

Gong Gen Gia, Gong Gen woman looks at