Under One Person: Qinglian Jiuxian

I feel like it's a smooth read, and I'm looking forward to the follow-up development. Good luck to the author.

In fact, it's quite good-looking. I'm not asking for help, I just think it's quite good-looking. This book feels like a slow-burning one. Although it's a little bit poisonous and a little watery, I think it's good-looking and I can read it smoothly. Everyone has their own preferences for radish and greens. I think it's pretty good-looking. Let's just say that the author updates it three times a day. It's not enough.

If the elder brother doesn't want to code, just say so. Why bother to deal with the younger brother like this? It seems that the younger brother is being sentimental. That's right. The elder brother is weak and needs a lot of rest. The younger brother urges the elder brother like this. It is the younger brother's fault. It hurts the elder brother's body. The younger brother is also very distressed. However, no matter how painful the younger brother is, the elder brother must also renew. Are you right? Elder brother! !

It's okay. I knew I wouldn't be able to write anymore when I saw it, so I stopped updating.

I think there is generally no problem with 5 stars. I think the system of the sun and the moon can be put in, because after the third level, the five degenerations of heaven and man return to the innate Qi, and the innate Qi realizes the natal magical power, and through the cultivation of magical powers, the magical powers can be advanced again and fed back to oneself. Then develop the supernatural power into a fake world and turn it into the inner realm of the Trinity Sect. In the fake world, say everything to avoid the way of heaven, and make the system into a forbidden technique like Tianshidu to train generations of Trinity Sect members. This way it gets rid of the common numerical problem of the system text and does not destroy the original introduction of the Eight Wonders. The protagonist travels the world through the magical power and possesses the doll, learns countless strange arts and skills, and leaves behind a method that can be used by generations.

It's good-looking and has a tight rhythm. Although the subject matter is cheating, every character is well-shaped. Most of the stories are told from the perspective of a bystander. They don't blindly describe the invincibility of the protagonist, and there are also hardships and twists. The foreshadowing is also well laid out, giving people the motivation to continue reading. I can recommend it.

The name is a bit discouraging, but if you look closely it's still very good. It reads more smoothly and is much better than most of Tomato's short-form articles. Good luck to the author.

It's hard to drink 8 glasses of water a day, but to make eight bowls of rice, all you need is to say, "I'll treat you to dinner"

I wrote my own story within the framework of one person. Although it has not changed much, it is indeed written according to my own ideas and the logic is smooth. I am afraid that the author did not write it well at the end, and the novel may be worth three stars by then.

Don't know why so many people gave it such a low rating. As a real reader, I highly praise this book. It is a very good fan novel! But the later part is a bit hard to write, and the author can definitely finish it and start a new book!

Personally, I feel that on Tomato, it might be a bit difficult to get a 9, but an 8 is still no problem. I don't know why it's only a 6.

I give five stars mainly because I appreciate the author's bold idea to change the original work. I have read many fan stories, but they dare not make major changes to the original work. I want to participate in the plot, but nothing changes.

I like it very much, very good This girl in the simulated horse is such a failure.

Yes, Zhang Chulan from Longhu Shanshui Dirty Thunder and Zhang Lingyu from Sanyimenyangwulei

The writing is pretty good, but why is the rating so low?

Well, generally speaking, it's pretty good. It can occasionally describe supporting characters to advance the plot, and make supporting characters flesh and blood.

Very nice [licking the screen] This score is too low

It's really amazing

It's very well written, keep up the good work

Very good, please don't cp the male protagonist [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]

Not bad, well written

Very good, very good

I don't know why there are so many low scores in the comment section, but it's still pretty cool.

It's okay, but it's not very enjoyable to watch. The protagonist is being tricked by others in various ways.

The writing is very good. Did you consider the heavens or the prehistoric world later? Although I didn't see the protagonist collecting the baby, I could still ascend together as a Taoist monk.

It's good to be a little slow to heat up. Looking at the name, I think it generally looks pretty good [please update] Can the author update 5 chapters a day? Only three chapters updated in one day? [Please update]

It's very good. I have the desire to read on. Small mistakes are not a big deal. A happy reunion too!

Can we write about the main plot? I want to see Zhang Chulan call grandpa [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

I originally rejected it after reading the introduction. After reading the reviews, I thought this book was probably okay. After reading a few chapters, it was actually okay. The score was a bit low. It's a pretty good fan novel.

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