Reborn in the Apocalypse: I Stockpile Resources with My Pocket Dimension and Become a Big Shot

Very well written so far, a great post-apocalyptic article! (Leave one star to see what happens in the future) Now it seems that the logic is fine and the writing is also good. It won't be boring to read~ Jian Cheng has a good personality, neither cold-blooded nor a virgin, and he helps others when it doesn't endanger his own interests. Lin Haiyao is very thoughtful and does not trust people easily, but he has complete trust in Jian Cheng! From the looks of it, I like Gao Peng the most. He has a bit of a bad mouth but is very righteous (... I'm not sure, he may only be righteous to Jian Cheng). But I'm sure he had a crush on Jian Cheng. I just don't know if there will be any conflicts between him, Jian Cheng and Lin Haiyao later. I hope not... In my heart, I still hope that all the supporting characters can have a good ending, including Xiao Peng. (It would be best if Chengcheng and I were still good brothers in the end ꉂ(ˊᗜˋ*)) Of course, the above includes some of my own thoughts. Adults can just write according to their own ideas. If you maintain this level and continue to work hard, your coding score will not be too low! (Nod) That's it, I can't stand it anymore. Maybe it's because I couldn't get along with Lin and Jian from the beginning, but I like Peng Cheng more. Judging from the current situation, it is estimated that Peng's cp is another one, which I personally cannot accept. The plot is still okay.

It's good to watch, but I felt uncomfortable in the middle (because I was in control). I felt that the author was belittling Jian Cheng intentionally or unintentionally. He was talking about two strong men, but he was suppressed and bullied by Lin Haiyao in the later period. It was very inconsistent with the image that Jian Cheng had in the early stage. Xiang, even though he has no other abilities, he should be given a skill to defend himself, instead of letting him rely on space and feel uneasy. The best thing is that Jian Cheng saves the world but does not have the Holy Mother; and Gao Peng, a peacock man with a reputation for being upright! He is also very cute and righteous. I really like his love for Jian Cheng and only believe in Jian Cheng's love; Li Ran, I can only say that he is a miserable man. He loves one and has a partner; our Gu Yunsong is a very responsible person who likes small animals; Shi Mengqi and Lu Ying are two very powerful girls ~ they are a pair ~; the two brothers Cheng Dong (no partner) and Cheng Liang (Gao Peng)... Are very independent and leadership people. Finally, this is a book that is similar to a group portrait. Each one has its own shining points (but it gives too many hooks to Lin Haiyao and tortures Jane too much). They will do the same thing at different times. It is not their duty to help the world by hanging the pot, but they also perform their duties if they take the responsibility. A very good book (except for the part about banning Jian Cheng)

It's really good-looking. I really like this type of apocalyptic novel. I also really like the setting. Don't hesitate and go for it! ! [Cool]

I like Jian and Gao Peng. I already wanted to give up before finishing it. It feels like the emotional line between Jane and Lin is very strong. Is their relationship based on Lin's aura as a peerless protagonist? People who see the space have a subtext that emphasizes how tall Lin is and has no desire to see it at all. Taking Gao Peng away [crying] I am happy for them.

Wow wow wow, a very good book [crying], the plot and characters are great! Just underage. . Front row reminder

It's good to watch, but I feel that the plot is a bit slow. Most of the time in the early stage is hoarding supplies and killing zombies, and the emotional line is also very slow. It's a bit boring, and it just hit my minefield... [Grief] I prefer plots with ups and downs, and try to be as interesting as possible, so as to attract readers' interest in reading. If you don't like it, try to avoid it. However, the potential of this book is very good, and the future is promising, so keep up the good work!

The early stage is really nice and very enjoyable. The overall character creation is also very good, it is a micro-group portrait, everyone has a shining point, and they are all three-dimensional, full and lovely characters. I also like non-protagonists such as Gao Peng, Li Ran, Qi Jie, Gu Ye, etc. It's great that everyone is working together on Weishi Infrastructure. However, I was really annoyed when Lin imprisoned Jian and asked about Jian's space. In fact, I can still understand it here in captivity, and even think it's a bit nice. After all, it's just possessiveness. But when Lin first blended into the space in the middle section, I felt a little unfair to Jane. Because Jane was very humble from the beginning, even in the early days of his death, he was in a state of trying to please Lin when he was protecting Lin. In his early days, Lin was the eldest young master and was distrustful. He was always aloof, so it was understandable that he took Bie Ren's protection as a matter of course. But here he always looks at Jane in a condescending manner and really has no sense of boundaries. And what he calls being kind to Jane later is also the connivance, protection and charity given to the weak from the perspective of a high-ranking person. This is not a completely healthy and equal relationship. After all, Jian was protecting Lin at the risk of his life in the early stage, and he was doting on Lin to the extent that the stars would not give the moon. There are ingredients to use, but it's better than nothing. So it's really heartbreaking for Jane to be treated like this here (the main reason is because he can't protect himself in Lin Na, so he is also very tired and powerless.) People in the space behind began to discuss Jane's identity. They thought that Jane finally had something that truly belonged to him, but it turned out to be Lin's. It was so sad. It should be said that it is lucky that Lin fell in love with Jane, otherwise everything Jane did would become someone else's wedding dress😞🥲🥲So from this point of view, it can be said that the double strength in this article is just an appearance built because of Jane's spiritual strength, and the inside has been hollowed out. Jane has actually been in a very panic state because everything is not his. In his mind, everything he owned was stolen from him. This puts Jane in a very, very humble and disadvantaged position. And there is a chapter at the back with the title "What is given to him is his, and he will not ask for it again." Even so, it is a master's tone to treat a thief (a large metaphor) for charity, which is very annoying. That's why I feel bad about Jane. How to put it - lick the dog, lick the dog, lick until there is nothing left. That is to say, this kind of equal relationship that needs to be maintained by one party's feelings for the other party is really weak. Because I have no ability to protect myself, I am really passive. But the rest of it is still pretty good to watch, except for the middle section which is a bit annoying to watch. Generally speaking, the narrative and character creation of this article in the future and infrastructure level are very good👍👍👍 After reading a little more, I really feel chilled for Jian Cheng: because he has done a lot and paid a lot for everyone. But in the end, except for Gao Peng, who completely trusted him, most of the others still took advantage of his mentality (that is, he would immediately switch sides as long as there was no benefit at all.) Thinking again, they were all brought up by Jane, which can be said to be mother-level care (at the worst, it should be the relationship between reborn parents.) But Jane still got all kinds of distrust and use (🥲Indifferent and ruthless apocalyptic human nature jpg.) Hey😑Mother Jane has been wooing her for so long and giving so many benefits and care, but in exchange for the exchange of benefits that can be seen everywhere in the last days, she doesn't have a single comrade-in-arms. Os: I suddenly discovered that Jian Cheng is really good at throwing tantrums. Look at that Brother Lin who was reborn and directly seized power to kill the protagonist. And Jian Cheng even became the boss just because he didn't want to work.

I think the plot is very good. I felt like I was deliberately cheating when I was driving in the beginning. I think this article is very clean. Finally, there is an article like this that does not deliberately attract traffic! Everything has traces to follow... There is no kind of delicate little white flower, nor the kind that deliberately pretends to be crazy, yandere, and dark. The kind of writing that directly says that the protagonist is crazy is really a bit pretentious. The author's writing is completely lacking. The character of the protagonist should not be expressed in words, but reflected in the details. The author is great! ! Happy (｡>∀<｡)

It's very good, very logical, not childish, it's an adult's world and thinking. It has been changed, the rhythm is okay, but the characterization is really confusing. I have worked hard to protect and take care of Gong. I protected and cared for him for a hundred chapters when Gong didn't awaken his powers. He had to save his life dozens of times. After Gong awakened his powers, his first reaction was that he had a weakness, and then he clapped his hands and left without any intention of repaying anything. He looked confused to me. Not to mention whether he had any feelings or not, he was completely a white-eyed wolf in nature. All of a sudden, he has no charisma. The protagonist can be cold, scheming, and ruthless, but he cannot be low. The values ​​​​of the protagonist are really amazing 😂. After Gong's brother was reborn, he kept trying to kill Gong Shou by any means. Gong also knew it. Then this brother captured Shou for experiments. After Shou was rescued, he wanted to kill this person when he was insulted, but was stopped. The reason was that if he killed him, Gong would hate him. . . It was their consensus that Gong would really hate him. So amazing. Gong is facing the white-eyed wolf and the Holy Father at the same time.

It's a post-apocalyptic story that really suits my taste [crying] It's really good to read, and it makes me happy to search for supplies. I used to fantasize about this situation and go crazy and stock up on supplies [love] Wow, the teacher changed the cover, it's so handsome! The writing is also very good, I like it very much! I like this kind of thing where both sides are not weak!