A Rank F Rookie? I'm Clearly the Top Player

Super pretty! ! ! ! The setting of the timeline of meeting each other is awesome "I said I loved you when you first met me, and I was loved by you when I first met you." This kind of long-term ambiguous feeling where one party always takes the initiative, the emotional line is really written very well! Not only the emotional lines, but also the plot, the background stories and character creation of each of the original top ten players are very detailed. It not only focuses on writing about Gu Wei, but also the important people around Gu Wei. Their personalities and loveliness are all described in detail, as if in a certain timeline, they really had such a tragic experience in this world... I hope the author will keep writing! Don't mess up! This book is really beautiful [adoration][adoration][adoration]

It's really good to read, and the plot is also very attractive. This is the third good-looking novel I've read besides Bai Liu and Yin Xiu. They are all my favorite unlimited novels. The only drawback is that it hasn't been updated yet [cry][cry][cry]. I can't wait [laugh][laugh][laugh]

The logic is very strong, the plot is also very rich, the foreshadowing is a bit small, it burns my brain, and the sweetness is really sweet. The part about life and death of an unknown big yellow crow made me confused. After I realized it, I felt very shocked. The writing is also very good.

Nice! Double strength! The twists and turns are constant and the pitfalls are filled in perfectly. I am very harsh on this kind of novel. However, I can guarantee that this novel is no less than "I Become a God in a Thriller Game" (ky apologizes, not intending to praise or compare, but simply to praise the perfection and excitement of the two works) There is no need to worry about nonsense, because the two young lovers will never forget each other. The protagonist is not a good person either. He kills decisively and has both strength and beauty. Every supporting character was unexpected, which made my scalp numb, especially when filling in the holes later. As the truths were revealed one by one, I realized that they were all hidden deep in my memory, even right next to me... (No more spoilers) Anyway! Highly recommended! Nice! It took 3 days to complete, and it looks great! 😘

It's well written. The plot is very confusing and there are a lot of knives. There were a lot of foreshadowings when I rewatched it. After reading the introduction, I felt that it would be super knives later on, but I'm looking forward to it. The more I watch it again, the scarier it becomes. Fortunately, it was he, otherwise I don't know how I would have died [I almost cried] I really couldn't bear to let it go when it was over. I wanted to wait until the finale to be the first to rush forward and send my blessings, but I didn't expect it to end so quickly and I didn't catch up. After Chapter 464, I really cried while watching it, fearing that there would be a bigger knife. In the end, Gu Wei finally became the preface master. I was really excited. But in fact, I really couldn't bear to end it so soon, and I felt that it shouldn't have ended so soon. But I still want to wish everyone a happy ending🎉🎉The ten people of Tianqi are adorable.

A broken mirror is reunited. . I was so naive that I was amazed. Starting from Xiaojiu, I thought the top ten players would gradually appear. Oh my god. . . The foreshadowing is really great. The rating of this novel is very high even before it is finished. It will definitely become a hit once it is finished. It is really good to read.

Really good! But can the fourth and eighth be alive? [I'm about to cry] Don't die, I like Eight so much. The main character is super good, he is noble and elegant, and I am crazy about cheating. Please update it quickly. Don't make me kneel down to beg you.

Madam, your writing style is really good. Even if Huo Huai is beaten by Gu Wei, he will come up to ask Gu Wei if his hand hurts (I don't know how to express it)

(Personal opinion, personal opinion) 🍀After reading the whole book, I feel that the narrative has two timelines, the main line of the protagonist's current reality + the interspersed memory line of the past ten years. In the first half of the novel, the first line is the bright line, and the second line is the auxiliary interlude. In the middle and later stages, the focus of the narrative gradually tilted towards the second line, which is the line of 10 years of memory. Although the focus has changed, I think the logic of this memory paragraph is still relatively natural. It's not like suddenly intervening while talking, most of them are caused by some events in the first line that trigger corresponding memories of the past. There is a causal relationship, the arrangement is orderly, and the two lines are intertwined without looking messy. (At the beginning, eight characters among the ten players will be included in the book of the protagonist, and then the corresponding personal chapters will be unlocked just like the game. The narrative rhythm is from point → line → plane, with the individual player as the point Then, everyone's real-life experience and personality are extended to the protagonist's past life... [No spoilers here] Finally, everyone's story is connected from the protagonist's first-person perspective. Although the memories account for a large amount of time, there is very little repetitive content in the narrative. The book always revolves around these two main lines, and the narrative is very focused.) 🍀Character descriptions, such as supporting roles, er, more important supporting roles, have complete space for description, but the priorities are still clear, and the core position of the protagonist will not be blurred. [Have you finally not grouped together the important supporting characters one by one like Lalang? I'm so happy to see it] If you like watching vests and slaps in the face, you can give it a try if you want to see the emotional pull of the characters! Because it revolves around the protagonist and all the protagonist's actions are logically purposeful, the plot does not have any large-scale water content. The length of 500 chapters is quite high, and the plot utilization rate is quite high. 🍀I think the writing style is actually good enough. This novel uses a typesetting technique of splitting paragraphs with white space. In order to create an emotional pause and a sense of atmosphere. However, I personally feel that the frequency of use of this category is a bit high. If you read too much, it may feel like a drama. If you mind, you should consider it and watch it with caution (:3っ )っ. There are a small amount of colloquial expressions in the article. Occasionally, it will be a bit dramatic, but the proportion is very low, and the impact is not particularly large. There is also the recycling of this foreshadowing. Personally I think it was handled very well ꕤᴗ ᴗ)♡ 🍀The book's large-scale conclusion begins around Chapter 460~470. There is no rush to finish in the last dozen chapters. Taking it back bit by bit makes me feel that the acceptance level will be higher, and it will not cause information overload to the readers, and the plot will be abrupt, and the completeness of the echoes is also quite good. 🍀As the plot of the copy unit that is particularly important for unlimited streaming, I personally feel that it has been significantly weakened. The dungeon is more of a tool carrier for the protagonist to collect old players, recall some of his own memories, and then explore the truth of the past. Like the independent story of the dungeon itself, the sense of pull to break through the level is not strong, and it is more focused on the protagonist's personal growth, life experience and memory narrative. Putting tomatoes in this book is really out of character [love] [love] [love]

After reading it, I just want to comment that it is very awesome. The huge plot line made my CPU explode, but it didn't make me confused. It took me a day to read it. I can only say that it is very awesome... All the foreshadowings can be matched, and the timelines can be overlapped, and everyone's memories can be understood, and the memory of Gu Wei is the most shocking to me. Everyone is guessing the "Dream Maker", but they did not expect that it is Gu Wei. He is so smart that he included himself in it and foreshadowed it. Overall, it is very shocking. One of the few books that made me read the finale without stopping. It is very good. Of course, the distinct creation of the protagonist is also indispensable to the author's writing style. As well as the charm of the group portraits, they are all very loyal to Gu Wei, which is really touching. The plot is relatively abstract and humorous, but also reveals true feelings. The writing is delicate, and the love plot made me stand up and go out and run around excitedly for two times. Sometimes the straightforwardness of the writing, ahem, it's really like that in college... Not much to say. Everything is connected to cause and effect, and the settings are orderly and not boring. Summary: I wish I could lose my memory and watch it again