Quickly Travel: Beautiful Cannon Fodder Is Targeted by Crazy Critics from the Dark Again

I have watched the first world so far, and the characters are very good. I particularly like it. The bad thing is that the words in the comment section are too gorgeous. Some of the words are used very weirdly, which is weird and makes people feel uncomfortable. Some adjectives are too many, which makes people feel as if they are simply showing off their skills. To be honest, I personally think that the end of literature is to return to nature. So many gorgeous rhetoric will only make people feel weird and tiring to read. Isn't this type of novel just for ordinary readers like us? We all have different levels of education. Really good works should be appreciated by both refined and popular people. Good writing does not mean gorgeous rhetoric. But the character design is indeed so good-looking. The above minor shortcomings can sometimes be ignored. The character design is really good and I have nothing to say.

It's very exciting, although the rhetoric is a bit too gorgeous, and it even affects reading a bit, but! ! ! ! ! Immortal product! ! ! ! ! I really like to see the kind of cool guy who thinks he is sober and sinks, especially the brother's self-pull. Half of his reason tells himself that this is indulgence, and the other half of his emotions pulls the cage of reason, much like a muzzled hound (black Doberman), but the muzzle is already shaky. Although it looks like it is squatting there calmly, he is ready to pounce on his little master. Even now, he feels that he is the one who has the initiative. It smells so good, and there is Xiaowei, who looks on coldly and even utters bad words. In the final analysis, it is just one sentence, why don't you look at me (stray dog Xiaowei). As for Xiaosu, I can only think of the emoticon "I have my own plans. I'll pretend to be fascinated first, and you don't have to worry about it." The girl is also a very good girl, like a long-tusked kitten (wild version) that looks soft and weak, and confused. In fact, anyone who has kidnapped a kitten knows that kittens are not willing to bite and scratch people. As long as you make her uncomfortable, she will bite you, and then rub you with a guilty conscience. Next time, she can block the road and grab the cat strips like a normal person.

The big book is nice to read, but it doesn't feel as good as the first one. This book has too many words. Although it is very gorgeous and well-described, it is described with a lot of gorgeous words. It is easy for people to ignore the progress of the protagonist's plot. Too many detailed descriptions will delay it. As for the development of the plot, it is easy to read a short world without paying attention and feel lost. I feel that we should pay more attention to the trend of the plot instead of describing the body movements of the characters too much. However, the content of the story is still very exciting and interesting. If it is improved, the reading volume will increase a lot. Chapter 45 of the first world has brought back the feeling of the first book. It has gorgeous words but not so many plots to connect with it. It's a good read, so please don't put it off.

Damn it, why is it so low rated? Ah? I'm really convinced Can you understand? Such a high-quality article, such a delicate writing style, and the characters portrayed so clearly, I really feel like I am going to die, I really recommend it! ! ! ! I was really captivated by the character's portrayal. I even had the urge to run towards the big brother. How can you be so powerful? ? Tell me! OMG I'm so excited! Step by step, that kind of yandere feeling is so well written, so morbid... Oh my god... I love you so much! I searched and searched, and what you wrote was so touching to me... It won my heart... Everyone will really enjoy reading it, the writing is so good! So satisfied I support you greatly [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] I thought of the author being around her and praising her. I suspect that you have a deep understanding of yandere. Why can you write so well? [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] I read chapter after chapter and it really made me happy

The writing style is as good as ever [Love]

The author's writing style is very good. After reading the author's book, I can't read other Tomato books. Every scene is described very appropriately and naturally, while in other books, I have to imagine the scene by myself. I have read all 4 books. The male and female protagonists are set up very well. Each female protagonist has her own characteristics, and each male protagonist has a very distinct personality. I like the one by Gu Ying the best. The book feels gentle and beautiful. I'm not saying that the other three books don't have these meanings, but everyone touches different points. The first time I read the author's book was in Gu Ying's book. When I saw such a well-written book, I fell in love with it immediately. It's similar to Bai Yueguang's feeling. I hope the author can have a good rest while rushing to finish the manuscript. I hope the author will get better and better! [Laughing out loud]

I haven't finished reading the first world yet. The content and setting are all very good, but I feel that there are a lot of embellishments. There are a lot of actions and other embellishments between the two sentences. After reading the second sentence, I forgot what the first sentence was. I wonder if there will be the same amount of embellishments in the later chapters. I feel a bit tired, but the setting and the main direction of the story are very interesting.

Although it is said to be a fierce competition, I don't feel that it is very intense. It is just a drizzle and occasional showers. It's not as well written as the previous one, but it's still pretty good. The writing is very delicate, but the ending is too rushed, it's only one chapter, not hehehe, but it's still very interesting. I like the later stage of the third world. It has the flavor of crazy people criticizing yandere and crazy people. In the early stage, it is just like a small emotion, not very strong, but in the later stage, there is a huge contrast. The male protagonist in the fourth world is really good at fishing.

It's awesome. It's awesome. It's great. It's great. It's great. It's written just for my XP. Boss, your writing is so awesome. I love it so much. It's really like the Invincible Big Mac. It's so awesome. It's awesome. It's awesome. It's awesome. , Boss, I want to read your books for the rest of my life. I have read all your books and they are still my favorites. I feel so happy after reading them. I like them so much. I want to read them for the rest of my life. Boss, I want to haunt you for the rest of my life...

The author's writing style is still as good as ever🐮, but some sentences in the article are too obscure, but I still like it very much. In this article, the various identities of the male and female protagonists are all in my appreciation. It's very exciting😍😍😍😍

The tension between the male and female protagonists in this book is very interesting, but the author's writing style is a bit inexperienced. Sometimes it is too gorgeous, and sometimes I don't know what it is written. It makes people unable to understand even a sentence and has to rely on guessing. Overall, the plot is okay, but the writing is a bit lacking. But it's pretty good-looking, very exciting xp [laughing][laughing]

The article has a kind of gorgeous and high-level rhetoric. It doesn't suit me, but it's well written. I'll just give it a good review and leave.

I really love this kind of writing, it's subtle and passionate. I've read a lot of novels, and then I became uninterested in many of these novels, but the author's writing really touches my nerves all the time. I really like it. Poke my xp like crazy, I can't do it anymore, I love it so much

The first world is good-looking, but there are a lot of embellishments. The words are gorgeous, but the author's writing style is really good👌🏻 "In the dim room, a binding mark was clearly visible on her wrist bones. She was leaning on the bed in a daze, with her beautiful hair hanging on her shoulders, breathing lightly. Cutting through the dim light was like the dusk spilling into the church, but it was a pity that it illuminated a decadent and rich corner. His works." The writing is really good.

The vocabulary at the beginning was really hard to read at first, but gradually it became more and more readable! ! Woohoo, I love this so much. I'm almost excited to death when I see them falling in love [Adoration] [Admiration] [Admiration] I want to be happy in that world [Like] [Like] [Like]

It looks good and has a strong sense of pull. I prefer the last three worlds. The male protagonist has a strong desire for control. The first two worlds may have a forced sense of déjà vu with the female protagonist due to the identity setting. The love in the latter three worlds is more obvious. The author's choice of words and sentences is very gorgeous, and he likes to use long sentences. Sometimes it is a little uncomfortable to read, but most of the time it is very good. He is good at using metaphors, synaesthesia, puns and other rhetoric to create an atmosphere, and it is very immersive to read.

Stable performance as always, awesome [blowing kiss] The author's writing style is truly unique! ! ! Super ambiguous, scary atmosphere~ You can try a plane first without reading the introduction~ The author's introduction will really make many people avoid lightning. Whether you like it or not, you will always try it~

I feel that the author's writing style has a very attractive and delicate feel. I don't know how to put it in words. I really like it so much. It always gives people a very amazing and vivid feeling. The characters are also perfectly implemented to the end (ૢ˃ꌂ˂⁎)

Author, I want to follow you for the rest of my life... I am so moved by the way the male protagonist describes it! ! ! ! ! The writing is super, super, super good! The heroine's baby is also very cute. . . . Generally speaking, the description is too good for my xp. No, why is the writing so good? I have finished chasing them all. There are five worlds in total. I really like the first and third worlds. The descriptions of the male protagonist are so exciting.

Maybe I personally prefer this kind of gorgeous vocabulary, which gives me a strong sense of picture. The author's observations and scene descriptions are very life-like, but the description of the characters is still a bit too much. The action and psychology are well described, but a bit cumbersome. But the character is perfect

I asked why it felt so familiar and interesting. It turned out to be Chichi's new article. It smells good. I eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat [shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy]

The writing is as good as ever [adoration][adoration][adoration] However, the style of this book feels different from the previous ones. It is a bit gloomy and more exciting. It is not like the sweet novels before, but I still like it very much. It is very beautiful.

The male protagonist is super, super, super, super, super, super sick. Although he says he "hates" the heroine, he is really super careful in taking care of her [Adoration][Adoration] I also like the character of the heroine [Admiration][Admiration] It's a pity that sometimes the car is just taken away (there are too few details [cry][cry]). When I have a car, I don't know about it until I read the comment section. (Watched the second dimension)

It's very touching, but the description is too detailed.

I like it😍but it's really written too obscurely. Sometimes it's so obscure that it doesn't have that ambiguous pull, but it's really exciting to re-read [Adore][Adore][Adore]

It is very exciting, and the writing style is very unique. The description of the swordsmanship and the ambiguous pull between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is very gripping. The sense of urgency and relaxation is appropriate. The male and female protagonists are not sweet in getting along in the traditional sense. They are more about tug and entanglement and the male protagonist going crazy behind his back.

It's super beautiful, the graphics are great, and the ambiguity and entanglement in it is really fascinating. Chi Chi's writing style is what I yearn for and learn from ᕙ(`▿´)ᕗ Chichi's other three quick-release books are also superb! ! !

Very top! ! It's really beautiful! The plot is neither brainless nor boring, and the male and female protagonists have distinct images. The interaction between the protagonists is very interesting. A Yao (the heroine) almost makes me mentally retarded! ! ! I really like the heroine, and I love her character (personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it). In short, this book is great [Shy][Shy][Like][Like][Like][Love][Love][KISS][Like][Learned]

The writing is very good, and the emotions of the characters are very deep. It's just that many of the descriptions are not so simple and easy to understand. If you try to understand them in depth, you feel like you have to jump out of the picture; if you don't understand them, you feel that you don't have a deep understanding of the plot. The rhetoric is too gorgeous and a little difficult to understand, but the unique emotional description can really make people tremble. It's very unique, the characters are well drawn, and the emotions are deep enough. I like it personally, so it scores high.

Chi Chi's books are really amazing and beautiful. Every one of them is great. The writing is very good [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]