Spear Tavern: Desire for Pleasure

The author must have read all the CGs of Maozhi Tavern several times!

This book is very consistent with the story of the original "Zhan Yu Tavern" game The characters are all very realistic and perfectly reflect the complex emotions of the orcs, but they lack a little flavor. Just like a handful of the most delicious dishes is missing a handful of salt, the book feels that there is missing a portion of the emotions that it should have. The protagonist is not described transparently enough, as if he is a passerby. What I mean is: although the provinces are well described in detail, the complex emotions between the protagonist and the red dragon are not fully reflected, and there is a lack of warmth. The author should let the feeling of love being like a bubble come out. Here is a suggestion, which is to use a common technique to express the complex personalities between characters. He is to add knives. Knives are unlikely to appear in ordinary sweet novels, but what they don't know is that only through adventure and companionship of life and death with a partner can the kind of dependence, solemnity, pain and reluctance be reflected. Also, the other characters also lacked some warmth, as if they were semi-transparent and lacked some vitality, as if they were simply acting out a story. For the author, this is an opportunity to purchase writing skills. For readers, this is a strange and emotional picture of life. A reminder is also my realization: life cannot be dull forever, and relationships will not last forever. The story must have exciting parts and dull parts that depict emotions. Just like a sweet novel, if you do not experience life and death together, it will ultimately be a sweet novel without emotions. The details of the characters and emotions will not be in place, and the complexity of human/animal emotions will not be reflected. Summary: The technique is very good, but the description of emotion should not be perfect. The knife is to set off the feelings between the characters, rather than simply to torture the readers. It is meaningless and will only increase the hatred between the readers and the author. Every literary and scientific technique has its own unique meaning. I wish the author a long-term success in writing, and I also hope to learn more about arts and science and bring us good stories.

I didn't expect to see fellow Zhan Yu at Red Persimmon these days [laughing crookedly], so I'm not far from Pirate Husband [laughing crookedly]

You can actually see a tavern here [laughing evilly]

I hope that the whole journey will be peaceful and there will be no regrets.

Great, there are not many books in the tavern.

The tavern also has its own foreign persimmon book.

It's pretty and sweet, and I recommend updating it twice a day [laughing] More roles for the strong protagonist

Less because of its nature

A good book is a good book. A piece of advice for future book friends: If you just want to see the interaction between the protagonist and the Spear Tavern, just watch 70. Because after chapter 70, it's all the author's setting, a Cthulhu-style time adventure between Cheng Yu (the protagonist) and Bai Yu (the time traveler).

Haha, I didn't expect that this game would also have a fanfic. [Sinister smile]

It's quite good, but there are a lot of typos. I hope this book will get better and better.

I feel this is the best book in the pub.

It looks good, come on author(ง •̀_•́)ง

It looks great, please give it a thumbs up to the author [Send heartfelt thanks]

It's so good and I love watching it. Cheers for the author [blowing kisses]

It's not too late to rate now [Thinking]

#APPLAUSE#APPLAUSE#APPLAUSE#APPLAUSE#APPLAUSE

Look, I enjoyed it. I really recommend it to those who like Spear Tavern to watch it.

I'm laughing so hard, Hakan is so pathetic, like an incompetent husband