Genshin Impact: An Encounter That Began at the House of the Hearth

Looking at the introduction, it is true that both the protagonist and others have grown up step by step. This is indeed a bit more interesting than those who are invincible at the beginning. The multi-female protagonist is still okay so far. It is not the kind of mindless love one after the other, and the heroine will not suddenly fall in love with the protagonist. 1. In terms of writing, the author is indeed a little worse, but after reading it, it is obvious that it is acceptable to improve this aspect. 2. A little bit about the plot, it is revealed that it started from the main plot, which started about ten years ago. There are many original plots but they basically conform to the setting, and there is no bookish plot. 3. Overall, this novel seems to be pretty good so far. It has some flaws, but they are all within the acceptable range, and the author Aite can also make modifications.

Fortunately, there is no system, so how many heroines are there? [Blowing kiss]

The writing is very good. The relationship between the protagonist and the heroines is also gradual and not abrupt. However, the protagonist is still a bit weak now and should be considered a medium level of strength. But he should become stronger when he meets Rene. At present, it depends on how the author writes the protagonist to fight against fate and kill [Mother].

Very good, come on

The protagonist has a clear purpose and is not a salty fish guy. Emotional quotient and IQ are both online. Don't be mean or please. The plot logic is clear, daily life is not boring, and the character creation is also good. To be honest, I have quit gaming for more than two years, and I have never heard of Fontaine Xumi, so the above opinions are based on the novel itself, and I will not comment on anything related to the game.

Very beautiful, the author is good at communicating with readers and updating on time [Love]

The lack of one star is due to some punctuation issues in the author's novels, which personally made me feel a little uncomfortable, especially in dialogues. Sentences with double quotation marks that contain periods do not have periods. Of course, except for one sentence in the second chapter that does, it makes this period stand out from the crowd, which makes it even more uncomfortable to read. In other aspects, it looks okay, and the plot logic is also good. If the author can solve the punctuation problem, the viewing experience may be better. Of course, the above remarks only represent my own personal views, so I'd better add some punctuation if possible. @Hollow Moon Eats the Sun [Thinking]

It feels pretty good, and the emotions are written very delicately. Although there are many girls, at least the heroines will not fall in love with the protagonist without thinking. The content feels a little private, but it seems to be relatively reasonable at present. I hope that the settings will not be compromised in the future. Also, I have said so much, why not add a little more (ง •̀_•́)ง to implement the harem to the end.

Nice! If I update 800 chapters a day, I'll let you go! Gradual emotions, good writing, mature chapters, no blindly watery daily life, harem! I declare that you are currently number one on the serial list in my heart! Get them all for me immediately and don't let go of any one! (Please) The gender of male characters has also been changed! (Just kidding) @Hollow Moon eats the sun

The first volume looks very good, the emotional line is not very strange, and it is also very sweet. But the second volume seemed a bit uncomfortable. I stopped reading after two chapters and felt a bit bored. I still like watching the Fontaine episode [crying]