Genshin Impact************

Looking at the introduction, it is true that both the protagonist and others have grown up step by step. This is indeed a bit more interesting than those who are invincible at the beginning. The multi-female protagonist is still okay so far. It is not the kind of mindless love one after the other, and the heroine will not suddenly fall in love with the protagonist. 1. In terms of writing, the author is indeed a little worse, but after reading it, it is obvious that it is acceptable to improve this aspect. 2. A little bit about the plot, it is revealed that it started from the main plot, which started about ten years ago. There are many original plots but they basically conform to the setting, and there is no bookish plot. 3. Overall, this novel seems to be pretty good so far. It has some flaws, but they are all within the acceptable range, and the author Aite can also make modifications.

Fortunately, there is no system, so how many heroines are there? [Blowing kiss]

Very good, come on

The writing is very good. The relationship between the protagonist and the heroines is also gradual and not abrupt. However, the protagonist is still a bit weak now and should be considered a medium level of strength. But he should become stronger when he meets Rene. At present, it depends on how the author writes the protagonist to fight against fate and kill [Mother].

Very beautiful, the author is good at communicating with readers and updating on time [Love]

The protagonist has a clear purpose and is not a salty fish guy. Emotional quotient and IQ are both online. Don't be mean or please. The plot logic is clear, daily life is not boring, and the character creation is also good. To be honest, I have quit gaming for more than two years, and I have never heard of Fontaine Xumi, so the above opinions are based on the novel itself, and I will not comment on anything related to the game.

The lack of one star is due to some punctuation issues in the author's novels, which personally made me feel a little uncomfortable, especially in dialogues. Sentences with double quotation marks that contain periods do not have periods. Of course, except for one sentence in the second chapter that does, it makes this period stand out from the crowd, which makes it even more uncomfortable to read. In other aspects, it looks okay, and the plot logic is also good. If the author can solve the punctuation problem, the viewing experience may be better. Of course, the above remarks only represent my own personal views, so I'd better add some punctuation if possible. @Hollow Moon Eats the Sun [Thinking]

It feels pretty good, and the emotions are written very delicately. Although there are many girls, at least the heroines will not fall in love with the protagonist without thinking. The content feels a little private, but it seems to be relatively reasonable at present. I hope that the settings will not be compromised in the future. Also, I have said so much, why not add a little more (ง •̀_•́)ง to implement the harem to the end.

Nice! If I update 800 chapters a day, I'll let you go! Gradual emotions, good writing, mature chapters, no blindly watery daily life, harem! I declare that you are currently number one on the serial list in my heart! Get them all for me immediately and don't let go of any one! (Please) The gender of male characters has also been changed! (Just kidding) @Hollow Moon eats the sun

In the early stage, I mainly wrote the story of the Fontaine Hearth House and the characters of the Fontaine Card Pool. I had a close relationship with the servants and other card pool characters. It was very sweet. The only drawback was that the plot went by too slowly. I was afraid that the author would give up before finishing it.

The first volume looks very good, the emotional line is not very strange, and it is also very sweet. But the second volume seemed a bit uncomfortable. I stopped reading after two chapters and felt a bit bored. I still like watching the Fontaine episode [crying]

It's very nice, please update it quickly. Even the production team members don't dare to rest like this, and the requirements are not high. I just update ten thousand chapters every day.

It can be seen that the writing style is indeed improving. The author should keep up the good work, and there should be more updates, not so short.

Come on, author! Very nice. But it can't be cut in half directly. It's just that the plot is a bit too slow. Hope the author can speed it up a bit.

Come on, don't stop [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Good-looking, well-written logic, excellent plot, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking It's beautiful. I love watching it. I feel uncomfortable if I don't watch it for a day.

It's okay, why is the rating so low? [Eat melon]

What else can I say, Haokang?

This book is comfortable to read So it feels weird if Len likes me or likes "me"

Author, did you install surveillance in my home? What you wrote completely meets my criteria for looking for a book. If you don't write it, I won't be able to find it and I'll write it myself.

Lao Luo, I miss you. As of this book, you haven't been able to recover your memory. Alas, I really want to see the daily life of you and the heroines after they recover their memory. It's a pity.

The coolest fic I've ever read about multiple female servants

Come on author, no matter how many girls there are, I think the plot is fine now, as long as I continue to support you more

Hurry up and grow up, hurry up and go to Shura Field, I like to watch women fight the most.

. It is recommended to write about growing up quickly. I like it very much. Good luck to the author.

It's very beautiful. I'm looking forward to the Shura Field later.

How can I put it, compared to Genshin Impact, the character creation is very good, regardless of the character's demeanor and various positions, but the plot is very complicated. I often can't understand the next chapter after reading the previous chapter. It is recommended to write the Hearth House plot first, and then write other plots, but overall, it is very good! ! !

A very nice Genshin Impact fanfic, highly recommended.

From an objective aspect, the writing style is really good, the content is rich, and the character descriptions are also very detailed. When does the protagonist have to eat? (┯_┯)

The emotional description is delicate and vivid, much better than the introduction [laughing and crying]