If I Hit You with a Stick, You Might Die.

It's a good-looking martial arts masterpiece. Although it doesn't have a heavy martial arts flavor, it does have a strong chivalrous flavor. In my opinion, a chivalrous person is: a young man with a chivalrous spirit who makes friends with heroes from all over the world. Liver and gallbladder holes, hair rising. In the conversation, life and death are the same. A promise is worth a thousand pieces of gold. The promise of lightness is made completely, and the arrival of the five mountains is light. I think martial arts novels should have some romance in them. Instead of being like the underworld cultivators, everyone is an egoist. There is nothing like those young men who are not afraid of power and draw their swords to help when they see injustice. The core driving force of all plots is for the protagonist to do it for himself. Those novels can be said to be cultivation novels, but they cannot be called fairy novels. There are no immortals in it, let alone heroes.

Come on, this is the first martial arts novel I saw in Tomato. The writing is very good, and it is a rare article without cheats.

It is a very light-hearted and enjoyable martial arts novel (the later period is more fantasy). To be honest, after reading it, I feel that it does not feel like a book on the Tomato platform. The evidence is that the ones above that gave it a one-point rating represent that wild boar cannot eat fine chaff.

There are few traditional martial arts novels, but they are also rare masterpieces. I just read the author's works... I hope I don't want to be a eunuch anymore

Very good, peaceful and simple, but interesting to watch

It has the flavor of a martial arts novel. Looking at many martial arts novels nowadays, all the energy of writing and ink is spent on describing how awesome the martial arts is and how invincible the protagonist is. It is really unnecessary. In this book, even though the protagonist is often chased around by others, the encounters between people, secret treasures, legendary experiences, and various characters all work together to bring this Jianghu story to life. This book is the best martial arts book I have read in the past few years.

It's a good read and a good book. It has the flavor of ancient martial arts novels. The character "xia" can be used to sum up everything the protagonist does. The overall tone is relaxed, humorous and interesting. With the combination of chivalrous spirit and bravery, it brings back the feeling of watching martial arts works in the past. Good reviews [like]

Two major highlights: 1. It has the aftertaste of traditional martial arts novels, telling stories about Jianghu people in the Jianghu. 2. The writing skills are very good, and there are no writing problems found in most contemporary online novels, such as typos, wrong sentences, idioms that do not convey the meaning, random use of punctuation marks such as periods and exclamation points, random segmentation, a large number of meaningless words, etc. This is very good. It makes people feel physically and mentally comfortable. It's like eating too much rice mixed with sand and finally eating a bowl of serious white rice. One outstanding shortcoming: there is no clear cool point. The main plot is that the protagonist wanders around the world. Most of the time, he is beaten. Occasionally he wins and kills his opponents. The overall feeling is a bit frustrating. Conclusion: It is a small masterpiece that can pass the time, especially suitable for readers who like traditional martial arts. In addition, this book is suspected to be the author's practice work. I hope the author will continue to write books seriously and create with heart, and get up early to produce a masterpiece that can become a hit.

It's rare to see such a traditional martial arts novel on Tomato. The plot details, including the supporting characters, are all excellent. This book may not be a fairy tale for readers who like to read mindless and refreshing articles, but it is undoubtedly a fairy tale for those who like traditional literature. . This book is a comedy, and anyone who reads it will laugh their heads off. The main character is a total slut, a waste of money, wandering around everywhere. To sum up the protagonist's law: "A fight will inevitably lead to recklessness, a barbecue will lead to an accident, the fun must be joined together, and the money will inevitably fail to save." It's not the kind of mature, steady, calculating, selfish protagonist in a traditional cool novel. If you don't like it, don't read it. Although the protagonist is a fool, he fits my concept of a hero. He leaves his clothes behind when things are done, leaving no credit or fame behind. He is righteous, enthusiastic, and willing to help others.

To be honest, the writing is really good, and the author is still humble. It's just that the ending was too rushed. It would have been better to polish it and explain all the characters. Open endings are not popular these days (unless you plan to write a sequel) [laughs][laughs][laughs]

It's a very life-like Jianghu, without so many conspiracies, great grievances, bitter hatreds, and bitterness. The protagonist doesn't have the aura of a king, nor is he a son of a plane. Have its own character. I really like it. I can keep reading even if I read it intermittently. It's a very good book. Keep up the good work, author [Like][Like][Like]

A very interesting martial arts novel, with nothing innovative or unique, but all aspects are standard or even good, especially the rough guy protagonist, which is an extra bonus among the overwhelming number of teenage growth-oriented protagonists. Although in the later period, it deviated from martial arts and included some elements of fairy tales, it was done to the point where it would not appear abrupt. It is not the kind of routine work where you go to a new realm and then change the map. Summary: Although it is not a standard traditional martial arts, the flavor of martial arts is still very strong. In the current lonely environment of martial arts, it is a rare good book and recommended.

Well written, it helped me regain my previous enthusiasm for reading novels The protagonist in the author's works really has a chivalrous spirit of "Three cups of vodka will make the five mountains lighter." The taste is really different from those novels that explicitly describe martial arts but are actually based on the style of local ruffians.

This is a quite enjoyable novel. The current rating is clearly too low. This novel combines various elements such as growth, adventure, and road. No plug-ins enabled. There aren't too many golden fingers either. But every step of growth is reasonable. The author's IQ is very online. The protagonist's IQ is also very online. This is the best novel I've read in months.

I am very happy to see another good book of high quality. This book is somewhere between traditional martial arts and cultivating immortals. It can be regarded as a martial arts world. The whole book has smooth writing and clear context, making people feel comfortable reading it. I somewhat suspect that the author is probably from Tianjin, or has studied cross talk. The dialogue and interaction between the characters in this book make people smile and laugh. In addition, this book is cleverly conceived, and some of the content in it combines weird and spiritual settings, which is indeed quite novel and eye-catching. Giving this book a five-star rating is a must.

This is orthodox martial arts, martial arts is the world view and chivalry is the core. The protagonist is a hero who takes action when the road is rough. People in the world always dare to love and hate heroes. So don't ask why the protagonist has to meddle in other people's business. Commitment is also part of chivalry.

A very interesting martial arts novel. Please note that I am talking about martial arts novels, not martial arts fighting, because the protagonist of this article and others all have the concept of a knight. Unlike other novels, wearing the cloak of martial arts is all about fighting monsters and upgrading, and everyone is a villain. The writing throughout is humorous, lively and interesting. Maybe it's because of the title of the book or the martial arts genre, or maybe it's because of the image of the protagonist that it's not popular? No matter what, please support me, martial arts will never die

The old rule is to give five points based on the scoring mechanism, and give the author points for lala. I'd give it 7 out of 10 points. Overall, it's very good. It's written at this level and worth reading. If you're short of books, you can read it. The middle and early stages were quite good. Good meaning means that the plot and writing were good, but the later stages were dull. The dungeon opened normally, but the author's writing power could no longer be controlled. When he wrote nearly one million words, it was obvious that the characters and plot began to become "rushed", especially in the scenes at Wei Tuo Temple. There are many female characters, but the way they are dealt with is very interesting. It has a bit of a galgame flavor, that is, they are all dungeons that trigger initial favorability, but if you don't go through the strategy, they are just ordinary friends. I haven't seen this way of female characters participating in the plot for a long time. The protagonist's running style is very RPG-like. When I saw the last copy of Dealing with Qi, I thought about the previous plot and found that this novel is very suitable for making a game. As for the protagonist, how do you evaluate it? He doesn't feel like a protagonist. He is more like a supporting character. In modern terms, he is just a tool man. It seems to describe a lot, and it is all unfolded through his vision. He is half a man of destiny (possessed by Emperor Qin's map). But after reading the full text and thinking about it carefully, almost all the copies seem to be the same if replaced by another person. His more role is to take the readers to see a story. In this dungeon, the only plot that is most like the protagonist is to take the adopted sister to find trouble. This should be a refreshing point. Not to mention the level of Qiao Feng going to Juxian Village, at least it has to be written to the level of Xiao Yan going to Yunlan Mountain. The result is that the protagonist fights three, kills one, and vents his anger on the adopted sister, but the whole scene is very awkward. I can't explain the specific problem due to my limited skill. This situation occurs more or less throughout the book, which is a pity. The idea of having a beginning and an end is very good, and it has a sense of fate. I wish the author gets better and better as he writes, has a smooth life, and makes a lot of money.

Completed the book on 2025.05.04.19.56. I started reading this book at about half an hour. After reading it for nearly a year, I realized that it had been finished long ago, so I picked it up again. I took advantage of a few days of May Day to read it. The martial arts theme of the protagonist using a stick is very novel, and the character creation is very successful. What I like most about this book is the relationship between my sworn sworn sister, Lu Hongye. Although the author is overwhelmed by his writing ability and finished it early, I still thank the author for this martial arts novel full of martial arts style.

I feel it is really amazing, all the foreshadowings are consistent, the characters are perfectly created, everyone is vivid, and the author works hard! ! ! I've been watching it for a long time! It's time for a big boss to appear in this kind of martial arts novel. I believe you can do it! ! ! Without the bloody storms, how can a relaxed daily life be nothing more than a world of martial arts?

Traditional martial arts interspersed with fantasy in the middle period, I can't wait to watch it again, because of the ending speech, the seven stars were reduced to three stars [Cool]

Very interesting imagination and interesting world. I like to watch the protagonist talk nonsense, and some inexplicable coincidences and bad jokes are not the protagonist's nostalgia for the modern life that he can't go back to. The most rare thing is the core of Xia. A seriously injured person dares to ride alone for thousands of miles for a reward that is not "touching" from the body. Even if we meet by chance, we are willing to support you all the way. He screamed about being poor and asked for money, but he never hesitated when it was time to pay. It's been a long time since I've seen such a pure hero. The only drawback is that the writing is a bit weak. (At first, I wanted to watch a fight, but it disappeared in the blink of an eye. It is more suitable for listening to books. The writing structure is not complicated and it is not difficult to listen to. It is really not friendly to me, who can read ten lines at a glance) The rhythm of the narrative needs to be strengthened (there are many funny jokes, but the timing is not right). There are also random punctuation that really affects the perception, especially when periods are used as ellipses... Overall, it's a touching story.

Reading this book really made me feel like I was doing the Yanyun mission. As a main line, I had to take a look at everything on the mini-map. For the force value, please refer to Yan Yun's Sixteen Tones and it feels almost the same.

It is well written. From the plot, content and ideas to the use of words and grammar, it is all at an above-average level. It is a rare good book. Many people have had the idea of ​​writing a book, but only a few can start writing it, and even fewer can persist in writing it to the end. The author has surpassed many, many people. I hope these little encouragements can inspire the author to keep going, and I wish you better and better.

I've read twenty chapters. It's a good book. It has the flavor of a sword without saying a word. It's a good book.

It's right to retreat bravely. I think the ending is reasonable and satisfactory. I was quite happy to read it. This character was definitely the first one I read. The plot attracted me. So I hope that the endings in the books I like can be happy. There are too many tomatoes that have rushed endings or simply sucked.

The writing is very good, very Jin Yong's martial arts style, the protagonist's character is also well shaped, the writing style is also very good, and it is very comfortable to read.

The plot has ups and downs, and there are basically no problems in the first 100,000 words. Five stars for encouragement.

The writing is quite good, and the plot is not conflicting. It is just right. It is neither too clumsy nor too fast-paced. The fights are also a bit funny, which is quite interesting.

It's pretty good. This martial arts novel is still very good at least in Tomato, but it can only stop at being very good. The length is too short and I can't see any other good points. The whole plot is centered around the description of the Qin Emperor's Mausoleum.