Escape Guide to the Immortal Realm

I really like this heroine. She is such a good person. He was beaten to death by others and he did not take revenge. He is so kind. He does his best for his master. It is so kind. He takes care of everyone. It is so good. He does not ask for anything in return. The heroine is so kind. How can the author be so good at writing? The heroine is so kind. I like it.

Nice! I like cultivating fairy tales! One thing that really pricks me is that there is a reason why characters are destroyed after the season ends. When I saw it, I felt like, wow. I also like this article because it is very similar to some articles I have read before: this world is real, and the will of the world is displayed to the outside world in the form of a game, allowing people outside the world to help promote it. I really like this type of writing! So I will keep reading! Big cheers for the author! Two million words rush! (๑•̀ω•́๑) Very well-paced article! My eyes can't stop oh yeah ദ്ദി(˵ •̀ ᴗ - ˵ ) ✧

The early stage has a tight rhythm, strong task orientation, and is very interesting. But since going down to earth to experience, the pace has started to slow down, and the protagonist's realization of the way to heaven is really weird. I immediately saw where the Gu family was found secretly mining. What can be used as a foreshadowing is that the heroine asked Cangtian about the sword in the first game. The article said that the heroine did not know her own way when she asked for the sword, and she asked Cangtian for her own past. Well, it can be said that the author wants to express that this is the hidden attribute of the heroine. But judging from the author's description, the heroine gives people the impression of being inferior, conceited, and kind. She works hard to practice and strive to be the first for the eyes of others. And it can be seen that her nature is kind, but she does not show that she is kind enough to serve the world and the common people. When I saw what the miscellaneous cultivator did at the first stop in the world, I immediately said to the heavens within one chapter. When I saw it, it was more like a big talk for the sake of learning medicine cultivation (even though I knew that the author would let the heroine do things for the common people) Before I Go Down to Earth is very good, and the author has written it quite well.

Because the setting is very interesting and the progress is fast. After the heroine went to the mortal world to experience, the pace slowed down. I liked Li Shu's sword repair trumpet very much, but there was not much ink. At the end, I felt that the author had played a big game. Many twists and turns filled up the pits. I was very excited to finish it. The ending was very rushed. After the encirclement and suppression of the dragon competition, 50 years suddenly passed. He Tongzhou's dark chess was useless. Haru Yewang and Qiu Yuliang still haven't recognized each other. Gaga's memories. After entering the Gu family and becoming Gu Yanxue's master, there is no follow-up. If these bugs are fixed, it will be no problem to write another one or two hundred chapters. The final ending gave me goosebumps. It was so amazing. The man who was named Wen Lishu's trumpet after clown entertainment entered the game and a man sprayed tea. I also felt that the improvement in cultivation was too slow. Maybe it has something to do with the setting. When I participated in the dragon dragon competition, I still built the foundation. Later, I was promoted to a unified body. The chapter of Running at Night is so well written. When combined with the opera, it immediately creates a sense of picture. The article also writes some knowledge related to solar terms and time. I feel that this book is a bit like a small group of characters. The enterprising Quan Jinhua, the carefree Zhou Meng, Taoxi Ci who is good at playing with people's hearts, Shen Xinghui who protects his shortcomings, Fu Sandong who is cheerful and has a sense of boundaries, and the junior brothers and sisters of Taiqingshan Shiyu from the previous season. I really like the scene when Que Qi first met Que Qi when Shu Baobao trumpet started. It was really amazing. Dual swords, ghost face, golden feather, black robe, paper man, long sword. I thought the setting would be that the two of them would become good friends. Didn't Shu Baobao trumpet just start out with the intention of doing bad things? Que Qi and Que Qi became good friends before they knew each other. Que Qi used the fake name Qing Shiyi at the time. Ask Li Shu what his name is, Shu Bao said to tell him next time. As a result, the two of them met three times in total, once for the trumpet and twice for the big one. I'm really heartbroken. I feel like Queqi is both evil and handsome. This shouldn't be the ending. They could have become close friends. The writing is very good. I hope if I have time, I can add a few extra stories. They can be about the growth history of key players or the if lines of the characters who have regrets in the original text. Finally, I quote a comment from a sister. I like a sentence very much. My name is Li Shu. Li at dawn. Shu who leads the same way. It feels like my name is Duan Xu. My name is Duan Xu. My name is Xu.

After reading more than half of it, I felt that most group portrait articles on the market had an incomprehensible attitude, because I felt that group portrait articles cannot be written only around the protagonist. This book is indeed not written only around the protagonist. You can feel the freshness and uniqueness of each character. Same, but the problem becomes apparent at this time. You can't feel what kind of character the heroine is. In addition, the male and female characters missed the heroine to highlight the warmth of the environment, but the plot behind the heroine did not mention them at all. What is this? The second one is that I don't have a sense of the picture. Her descriptions are both detailed and non-detailed, so I don't have a sense of the picture but can have a general outline. However, I really like the setting of this book, but I can also see that the author is really a very new person, so I sat back and watched the later stages.

Cool! When I saw the cover, I thought it was the usual cliche book about cultivating immortality. I almost didn't read it. The cover and the title of the book mistook me! It's not stupid, it's not stupid, every step of the protagonist's growth is carefully planned, and the pace is not too fast. The process of slowly exploring the world and the conspiracy of the game is also very good. It is a very, very recommended book. I feel like the author doesn't need to be influenced by a small group of people to force the plot to be mindless and enjoyable. The current plot rhythm is just right.

It is a really wonderful book, with a lot of imagination. Sometimes it even feels like it spans a lot. There are obvious traces of changes in the outline. Even if it is not changed, that is, the previous events are very slight, I can still see what the world I originally wanted to describe is like. They are all very beautiful worlds, but they are perfectly connected together. It is really good, but a bit regretful. The ending is really amazing, it's a bit like a bad ending but not like it, it's like you're having a normal meal, it's a very exciting meal, the rest is a bit bland, and then the ending suddenly sublimates, like a band is deafening next to you, it's a bit weird, but the ending really gives people a deafening feeling

It's a good story, but I feel like it could be longer. Haha, there's still something unfinished about it. However, due to the author's various foreshadowings, many people may feel that this article is very toxic and cannot read it. However, this also filters out some readers who are not suitable for this article. What I think is very good is that although it is a bit short, the author's final ending makes me feel that all the unreasonableness in the previous chapters has become reasonable. I really appreciate this. I hope the author will continue to work hard and look forward to the new book [laughs][laughs]

I feel that the subject matter is relatively new, and the ending has a sense of absurdity and elegance. To be honest, I quite like it. There are so many twists and turns, but I feel that the final writing is a bit messy. It feels like a world within a world (the world is a giant matryoshka doll), but all in all is so beautiful [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart] The idea is very interesting, but the character design is still a bit strange. I don't know why the heroine was so hot in the early stage [face covering]

Super nice article. When the protagonist discovers the secrets of the entire world, then consider writing a long background line, protagonist line and group portrait line comments. There are really too many foreshadowings, my preference in writing style, plus an introduction to write a million words, I was immediately attracted to it. I would like to ask everyone, where did you find such a 1 million word novel about the game + cultivating immortals + a lot of foreshadowing + good writing + complete character creation + every step of the way + seeing who is more clever every day + already fattening up and getting old if you don't kill it! This novel has no CP, it is a novel about cultivating immortals.

Hey, how can I put it this way? It's good to watch. The plot is too fast. In other words, it should be four to five hundred chapters. Some of the flaws are unclear. I hope the author can write a continuation. . . . Good-looking[cry][cry][cry]

It looks great. The plot is a bit unexpected. I feel like the so-called game is a conspiracy. There are some parts in the middle chapter where the heroine grows up. People with different views may find it a little awkward, but I can totally accept it.

It's very good, but it's a novel that was rated low. Generally speaking, the story line and world view are very complete, and the character creation is also very three-dimensional. The only flaw is probably that the ending is a bit rushed, but I personally think that the flaws are not covered up, and the ending of the story is explained even if it is rushed. For book friends who want to read this book, I suggest that you read less of the commentaries of this book. There are many arrogant people who always feel that something is wrong, which will greatly affect the viewing experience. Finally, I wish you a happy life and good luck₍˄ ₗ ̫ ₗ ˄₎◞ ̑̑

Oh my god, the writing is so beautiful. The plot has ups and downs, and some of the twists I didn't expect at all. The heroine's character is ever-changing. The rational, simple, naive and arrogant Long Aotian is so beautiful! Show them all to me! ! ! Let everyone know how good this article is. ^ ^

There are a lot of twists and turns, and the final ending feels a little rushed, but this twist is amazing. I prefer the system part, a non-traditional fairy tale. The setting at the beginning made me feel a bit like Sword Art Online. The more I read it, the more interesting it became. I enjoyed reading it.

The score almost dissuaded me, but luckily I took a closer look and it's a new book. The score for a new book is already great. After reading half of it, it feels like cultivating immortality 101. The writing is a little witty, and there are a lot of foreshadowings that are intertwined. Overall, I feel pretty good. Come on, the author. [Punch out] [Punch out] [Punch out] [Punch out]

I don't understand why this book has such a low rating. The plot is compact and interlocking, the plot is attractive, the logic is strict, and the subject matter is very novel. It is a rare good book. Great support for the author! ! ! Support you! ! !

It's so scary. I haven't read such a good book in a long time. It's just that the ending is a bit rushed, I can't even say it's a bad ending, it just feels like an outline. But it's really beautiful. I really want to know the author's name.

This book is really well written, who would rate it at 7:9? Really good, really. When I see these pictures, why do I feel something is wrong? Is it going to end hastily? No

It's a very good book, the setting is cute and not cliché, but the ending is too hasty... The teacher will release the other 1.5 Million words soon😭, except for the ending, the overall plot is remarkable, everyone's motivation is fully reasonable, and everyone's plot line is quite complete and cute... I really want to read hundreds more chapters😢

The beginning is okay, the middle is good, but the ending is too hasty. Many things are explained in a hurry, and there are still some parts that are not explained. I feel that I can write another two or three hundred chapters in detail. This book feels like an unfinished draft. I originally wanted to look forward to the author's growth, but it turns out that it has not been updated in November last year... Overall, this book can be considered a good read... I am surprised that so few people have read it.

I have always been a fan of fairy tales, and I watch both male and female videos, but they are all a bit cliche, and I enjoy watching even the slightly novel ones. But this article really touched me. I was also touched by some aspects of the heroine's temperament. The heroine's baby was written very well. I really love this book. Although there are a lot of shortcomings, after all, this is my first time writing, and it will get better and better in the future! This story is really good Another Day of Love. The writing is really good, I love it. The content is still very novel and very attractive to me, but there are too few updates, for me, but please pay attention to rest well [Adoration]

Escape Guide to the Immortal Realm_Strawberry Pointed Wing Moth Li Shu, we arrive at the same destination through different journeys, and we ask questions in our hearts. [Cultivation of Immortality + Game Competition + Growth Stream + Vest + Women Disguising as Men + No CP + Group Portrait Articles] People say that if you become an immortal, you can forget the sufferings in the world. But immortals also have their own troubles. They want too much. At this time, someone landed in the mortal world. She said: "All the ghosts and animals in the world are suffering. Although I am powerless, I can still write." After playing a game called "Xianxian" for a year, I finally made it to the top 100 on the ranking list before the end of the season. Unexpectedly, the 100 players selected are not the end of the game, but the beginning of the game. 100 Players were transported to the world of immortality in the game and randomly received an identity and talent. The system issued a server-wide announcement: "Only the first 10 players who ascend to immortality can leave the game. Please actively participate in the game." Nonsense, if you don't actively cultivate immortality, do you want to stay in this world forever? Open the book! Li Shu accidentally climbed to the top of the rankings and received a jade pendant. Unexpectedly, this jade pendant is actually a transformation device! As a result, the world of immortality has gained another handsome guy with mysterious whereabouts and explosive martial arts, making the three worlds fearful. (For group portraits, there are many background settings and many characters, so a lot of setting content may be thrown out in the early stage. Each character has a different personality, and everyone has their own strengths and weaknesses, as well as their own complete story line.)

It's so good, my scalp went numb after reading it [crying] The setting is very interesting, the plot is well-written, the emotional description is very delicate, and every supporting character is vivid and has its own characteristics. I haven't seen such a high-level online article in a long time. The author has the potential to be a big boss. Come on

This book is very, very good-looking, but it is strange that it is difficult to search for it through the title. Only one word is correct and it is this book. And to be honest, this book is much better than many popular novels in terms of concept and plot. Maybe it's because the beginning is not earth-shattering. Maybe it would be better to change the title or introduction of the book. It is really special and worthy of being popular!

The early setting of this book made me feel quite like Immortal Path Wuwu, and that one was a long novel which was more enjoyable to read. However, there were some parts of this book that I didn't adapt well to, and I didn't do much in the follow-up. In fact, there is really a lot that can be written, and I still want to continue to delve into the story of this world.

The world view is very grand, the characters are very vivid, and the character of Li Shu is very three-dimensional, but there are too few and it is not enough. I wonder if the author can update ten chapters every day [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]

I feel pretty good. The heroine's character is well portrayed. I feel she's making progress and growing up little by little. There are a few places: when recruiting people, the heroine was late, and told the elders about ink. Later, she explained that it was influenced by spiritual roots, and she accepted it, which can be considered as growth.

The setting is quite novel, the character creation and some detailed descriptions are outstanding, and the protagonist is slowly growing up, but the plot is indeed a bit rushed and confusing later on. I feel that based on the state of the previous article, it should have been more exciting. It's a pity [crying] [crying] [crying] But overall it is quite good to watch.

After reading it, I was a little bit unsatisfied, but I think the ending was just right. It doesn't look like the traditional ending of "becoming a god", but it is what the heroine wants in her heart. Now that the goal of this stage is accomplished, the story naturally ends. There are many characters in the book, and the arrangement of some story lines feels unfinished, which is a bit regretful.