Cultivation 101

I really like this heroine. She is such a good person. He was beaten to death by others and he did not take revenge. He is so kind. He does his best for his master. It is so kind. He takes care of everyone. It is so good. He does not ask for anything in return. The heroine is so kind. How can the author be so good at writing? The heroine is so kind. I like it.

Nice! I like cultivating fairy tales! One thing that really pricks me is that there is a reason why characters are destroyed after the season ends. When I saw it, I felt like, wow. I also like this article because it is very similar to some articles I have read before: this world is real, and the will of the world is displayed to the outside world in the form of a game, allowing people outside the world to help promote it. I really like this type of writing! So I will keep reading! Big cheers for the author! Two million words rush! (๑•̀ω•́๑) Very well-paced article! My eyes can't stop oh yeah ദ്ദി(˵ •̀ ᴗ - ˵ ) ✧

The early stage has a tight rhythm, strong task orientation, and is very interesting. But since going down to earth to experience, the pace has started to slow down, and the protagonist's realization of the way to heaven is really weird. I immediately saw where the Gu family was found secretly mining. What can be used as a foreshadowing is that the heroine asked Cangtian about the sword in the first game. The article said that the heroine did not know her own way when she asked for the sword, and she asked Cangtian for her own past. Well, it can be said that the author wants to express that this is the hidden attribute of the heroine. But judging from the author's description, the heroine gives people the impression of being inferior, conceited, and kind. She works hard to practice and strive to be the first for the eyes of others. And it can be seen that her nature is kind, but she does not show that she is kind enough to serve the world and the common people. When I saw what the miscellaneous cultivator did at the first stop in the world, I immediately said to the heavens within one chapter. When I saw it, it was more like a big talk for the sake of learning medicine cultivation (even though I knew that the author would let the heroine do things for the common people) Before I Go Down to Earth is very good, and the author has written it quite well.

Because the setting is very interesting and the progress is fast. After the heroine went to the mortal world to experience, the pace slowed down. I liked Li Shu's sword repair trumpet very much, but there was not much ink. At the end, I felt that the author had played a big game. Many twists and turns filled up the pits. I was very excited to finish it. The ending was very rushed. After the encirclement and suppression of the dragon competition, 50 years suddenly passed. He Tongzhou's dark chess was useless. Haru Yewang and Qiu Yuliang still haven't recognized each other. Gaga's memories. After entering the Gu family and becoming Gu Yanxue's master, there is no follow-up. If these bugs are fixed, it will be no problem to write another one or two hundred chapters. The final ending gave me goosebumps. It was so amazing. The man who was named Wen Lishu's trumpet after clown entertainment entered the game and a man sprayed tea. I also felt that the improvement in cultivation was too slow. Maybe it has something to do with the setting. When I participated in the dragon dragon competition, I still built the foundation. Later, I was promoted to a unified body. The chapter of Running at Night is so well written. When combined with the opera, it immediately creates a sense of picture. The article also writes some knowledge related to solar terms and time. I feel that this book is a bit like a small group of characters. The enterprising Quan Jinhua, the carefree Zhou Meng, Taoxi Ci who is good at playing with people's hearts, Shen Xinghui who protects his shortcomings, Fu Sandong who is cheerful and has a sense of boundaries, and the junior brothers and sisters of Taiqingshan Shiyu from the previous season. I really like the scene when Que Qi first met Que Qi when Shu Baobao trumpet started. It was really amazing. Dual swords, ghost face, golden feather, black robe, paper man, long sword. I thought the setting would be that the two of them would become good friends. Didn't Shu Baobao trumpet just start out with the intention of doing bad things? Que Qi and Que Qi became good friends before they knew each other. Que Qi used the fake name Qing Shiyi at the time. Ask Li Shu what his name is, Shu Bao said to tell him next time. As a result, the two of them met three times in total, once for the trumpet and twice for the big one. I'm really heartbroken. I feel like Queqi is both evil and handsome. This shouldn't be the ending. They could have become close friends. The writing is very good. I hope if I have time, I can add a few extra stories. They can be about the growth history of key players or the if lines of the characters who have regrets in the original text. Finally, I quote a comment from a sister. I like a sentence very much. My name is Li Shu. Li at dawn. Shu who leads the same way. It feels like my name is Duan Xu. My name is Duan Xu. My name is Xu.

After reading more than half of it, I felt that most group portrait articles on the market had an incomprehensible attitude, because I felt that group portrait articles cannot be written only around the protagonist. This book is indeed not written only around the protagonist. You can feel the freshness and uniqueness of each character. Same, but the problem becomes apparent at this time. You can't feel what kind of character the heroine is. In addition, the male and female characters missed the heroine to highlight the warmth of the environment, but the plot behind the heroine did not mention them at all. What is this? The second one is that I don't have a sense of the picture. Her descriptions are both detailed and non-detailed, so I don't have a sense of the picture but can have a general outline. However, I really like the setting of this book, but I can also see that the author is really a very new person, so I sat back and watched the later stages.

Cool! When I saw the cover, I thought it was the usual cliche book about cultivating immortality. I almost didn't read it. The cover and the title of the book mistook me! It's not stupid, it's not stupid, every step of the protagonist's growth is carefully planned, and the pace is not too fast. The process of slowly exploring the world and the conspiracy of the game is also very good. It is a very, very recommended book. I feel like the author doesn't need to be influenced by a small group of people to force the plot to be mindless and enjoyable. The current plot rhythm is just right.

It is a really wonderful book, with a lot of imagination. Sometimes it even feels like it spans a lot. There are obvious traces of changes in the outline. Even if it is not changed, that is, the previous events are very slight, I can still see what the world I originally wanted to describe is like. They are all very beautiful worlds, but they are perfectly connected together. It is really good, but a bit regretful. The ending is really amazing, it's a bit like a bad ending but not like it, it's like you're having a normal meal, it's a very exciting meal, the rest is a bit bland, and then the ending suddenly sublimates, like a band is deafening next to you, it's a bit weird, but the ending really gives people a deafening feeling

I feel that the subject matter is relatively new, and the ending has a sense of absurdity and elegance. To be honest, I quite like it. There are so many twists and turns, but I feel that the final writing is a bit messy. It feels like a world within a world (the world is a giant matryoshka doll), but all in all is so beautiful [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart] The idea is very interesting, but the character design is still a bit strange. I don't know why the heroine was so hot in the early stage 🤦

It's a good story, but I feel like it could be longer. Haha, there's still something unfinished about it. However, due to the author's various foreshadowings, many people may feel that this article is very toxic and cannot read it. However, this also filters out some readers who are not suitable for this article. What I think is very good is that although it is a bit short, the author's final ending makes me feel that all the unreasonableness in the previous chapters has become reasonable. I really appreciate this. I hope the author will continue to work hard and look forward to the new book 😄😄

Super nice article. When the protagonist discovers the secrets of the entire world, then consider writing a long background line, protagonist line and group portrait line comments. There are really too many foreshadowings, my preference in writing style, plus an introduction to write a million words, I was immediately attracted to it. I would like to ask everyone, where did you find such a 1 million word novel about the game + cultivating immortals + a lot of foreshadowing + good writing + complete character creation + every step of the way + seeing who is more clever every day + already fattening up and getting old if you don't kill it! This novel has no CP, it is a novel about cultivating immortals.