No Heroine, No Ambiguity, Few Female Supporting Characters, Don't Push the Book Randomly, I Really Know How to Troll People
Stop pushing books! Stop pushing books! ! ! Remember, you don't want a heroine, you don't want ambiguity, and you don't want a female supporting character always appearing next to the protagonist. Damn it, if I see anyone pushing books randomly, I will immediately start complaining.
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It's possible. Does the protagonist of the comic plan to specialize in ghosts? Whether there is a female protagonist, I hope there is no female protagonist. Many elf novels are because the female protagonists are not well written, and as a result no one reads them. I hope the author can stick to it and update more
Four-star encouragement, after all, the elf writer is young. Even fewer are well written. Suggestion: Don't be so obsessed with experience and level, especially if your experience requirements in the early stage are too high. The levels of other people the protagonist comes into contact with on the mission will seem to be fake. They may be higher than the protagonist casually, but the protagonist's level will take a long time or a lot of experience to increase. This gives the illusion of overpowering the protagonist. Fortunately, I can barely understand it. After all, it is a dark novel with class oppression. It must be difficult to improve the level in order to consolidate the class. Otherwise, there would be no revolution everywhere. Therefore, it is recommended to lower the early experience level. You can explain that it is difficult to increase the experience of elves and requires a lot of resources. This might be better
Not bad, but I think the identity on the surface is not very good. I think on the surface, in addition to sniping the tree owl, you can also use a clay doll giant. After the evolution of the indigenous ninja, you can directly use the ghost cicada and the iron masked ninja. Secretly, the clay doll giant and sniper tree owl can also be used. According to the company's sales, they are Hidden Pokémon will basically not appear in front of the enemy. Others basically don't know that the protagonist has them. Clay giants are also relatively common. Ghost cicadas are used for protection. In other words, these can be used openly or secretly, but there will be no exposure problem.
It's very interesting to watch. The protagonist is ruthless to others but very good to his own Pokémon. The character development is very good, and he is good at summarizing the experience of failures and improving. When reading the book, you can almost feel the progress of the protagonist with your naked eyes. It doesn't stray away from the theme of mercenaries. It feels like the combat power is a bit broken.
The early stage is particularly beautiful and clean. I hope that in the later stage, the author can keep the novel system from collapsing. It will definitely be a masterpiece, and the author's updates are also good. I hope more people will read it. (Although Pokémon has always been a small hit, the output of high-quality literature is still very small)
Looks good, come on! I also have a few recommended elves here. Ecstasy eyes, crystal lantern spirits, broken rudders, rotten wood demons, abandoned monkeys, etc. There are also death coffins and dream demons
It's okay, it's the author and I found that the male protagonist is always working. Can you let her rest? Aren't you tired?
Hmm, it's really nice. The protagonist is determined to become stronger, and I especially like the protagonist's sense of gluttony (that is, the kind of person who does not hesitate to do anything and wildly absorbs all the nutrients around him). There is no ambiguous plot with a female character. I have read a lot of Pokémon novels in which they are ambiguous with various female creatures. They are either housewives, entangled with various female characters, or even double-standarded as a licking dog. If you let the female character take advantage of her, it would have been eliminated if it had been a male character. In fact, it would have been fine if it had been marked as a single female protagonist or something like hg had been mentioned in advance, but that would have been non-CP! Later on, the relationship was still ambiguous and the protagonist was also ambiguous with other female characters. I can't stand it.)
The main character is obscene and underdeveloped, mainly because the main character's character is okay
Isn't this just the fantasy dragon Aotian changing his skin?
It's okay. There's not much of a drawback. It's just that the leveling up of elves seems to rely entirely on the system and experience.
So far, both the content and the subject matter are good and interesting, and I haven't seen any bad points yet, so I can buy it.
The author's title has been changed. Don't call me a mercenary. After I changed it to rebirth, I went to Pokémon as a blast guard for those years [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]
Awesome, support the author
This is the first time I read this kind of Pokémon fanfic, and I was hooked.
True and objective, multi-dimensional description, clear structure
In fact, the novel is quite good. It could add some details about daily interactions with Pokémon.
Excellent elf novel, looking forward to the follow-up line-up!
It's pretty good. The characters are well portrayed. As a first book, I think it's pretty good.
If you love watching it, it must be perfect.
Five-star praise is given
Isn't this pretty? Why is the score so low?
The business trip took too long, right? Can you update it soon? Vq
The content is interesting, but the article has a lot of errors. But writing a book is not easy, so I'll give it four stars.
It's already worth five stars so far [laughing], and I'm continuing to catch up on updates.
This setting is great! Congratulations to the author!
A good book about powerful elf people. Remember that a strong person must kill decisively and never leave anything behind to become stronger.
Not bad, it's much better than other stories that label themselves as dark and then act as a licker to the female champion.
This could have been recommended.
Come on, author, I've read every book