Rebirth in Another World: the Alchemy Doll's Journey to Save the Nation

The writing is very good. Compared with the author's previous books, it does not cause discomfort. I finally like a girl. It is really a twist to save the country. It is not easy. The slime in the previous book has become the protagonist of this book. It cannot be said that it is a bit similar [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

Such an advanced mental state. It always shocked me when I first watched it. The setting of Xiao Nanliang [face covering] for both men and women is quite novel, but the emotional line is a bit slow. By the way, is it really okay for the author to open the third line?

It's really pretty good. The setting is very novel. After genetic modification, the animals become giant and become a walking city. The protagonist is a pink-haired little boy. And to be honest, there is too little nonsense, so you can't skip reading it. If you glance at it for a moment, you won't know what you missed.

I have been reading it one after another for nearly half a year, and this book is probably the one that I like the most among all the books in Tomato. In addition to the characteristics of men and women, what attracts me most about this book is the combination of technology and magic, and the coexistence of games and reality. This ridiculous and reasonable magic theory really pricks me. There is also a self-contained worldview that is not only grand as a whole, but also realistic enough in its details. Especially the hive part, it really gave me a feeling of a living world. Originally I just came here for men and women, but now what attracts me more is the world itself. This feeling of bringing the world to life is what I have always wanted. I have also written novels, but it has always been a pastime on paper and I have not yet submitted a manuscript. There's nothing I can do about it, this is what happens when you live on campus in your senior year of high school. I can feel how bad my writing is, but I learned something from the author. I used to have a headache how to distinguish objective narration, character dialogue, and psychological activities, so that readers can at least tell which sentences are in which form. Now it's much better. Say something else. When I read in the author's words that the author had a child, I felt a little bit disillusioned. I had always subconsciously thought that the author was also a little boy, but suddenly I saw that the author already had a child. It felt like an ordinary person suddenly learned that Wu Yun was actually a boy (what are the unauthorized expectations and unauthorized disappointments) (? Also, Laoqing! 😭Hey, it's sunny! 😭 Lao Qing, when will you be able to stand up? 😡 Even if it's just once in a druid's dream? 😭(Although the prerequisites are not met) Is it good to have a lifelong cp group? 😭Vadasi can do anything! I am willing to be fucked by Monica for three days and three nights! Okay, now that I'm done with my madness, let's talk about something else. Regarding the issue of Chu Nan and Shen He deleting content, has the author ever thought about posting some extras or good news on ao3 or 01bz? After all, human beings have three major desires: appetite, appetite, and sleep... It's okay even if you don't have anything snakey! I must update the novel! How can I live without you? 😭 What? Why am I only giving it a five-star review after watching it for half a year? I remember I already fought...😳 But I don't know why. Looking at it now, I can't see it. What? Why haven't I given a few gifts after watching it for half a year? Red bean paste private Marseille Hida! 😭 I will give you all my future gifts as compensation😭 (If senior high school students could go home and touch their mobile phones)

The content of the novel is very interesting, please keep updating the author. The pink-haired gay boy protagonist is really awesome. The little boy and girl protagonist.

It's very good, the world view is great, the character and appearance of the protagonist are also very vivid, and the plot is also very rich, but there is one thing that is bad, why is it so short? Note: The protagonist has some tomboyish tendencies I'm reviewing it, I've been watching it for a long time, and there's nothing serious about it, (with pictures) 👍, the protagonist's IQ and appearance are online, there's nothing wrong with the logic… Also… why haven't the protagonist and the heroine met yet?

The setting is novel, the plot is interesting, the characters are vivid, and the world view is huge, making it hard to put down. But such a perfect book has one fatal flaw - it is too short! ! ! Why should I discover this book with this word count! ! !

The world view is very attractive, the detailed settings are also very novel, and the mobile mechanical city is really interesting, but the plot is difficult to comment on. The rhythm is very strange and makes people uncomfortable watching it. It has the taste of a Japanese light novel. I have seen more than 200 pictures, but I still don't understand the character of the protagonist, and I can't figure out what genre I want to write. It's a bit like a group portrait, but it's all a harem, which is a weird group.

... It's good-looking, with a rich plot, and some unique settings are very interesting. As a reborn protagonist, he discovered that he is crooked in this life, which is actually not bad. The main thing is that the brave protagonist directly chose to knock down his brother, which made me feel a little, um... Quickly, as for why I said so much? In fact, I originally planned to draw points, but the number of words was not enough, and then I felt that this book lacked detailed description of the characters, and it was a bit difficult to think about. If it weren't for the cover, I couldn't imagine it except that I knew that the protagonist was a man and an elf with pink hair. This is the most uncomfortable point in my opinion [Thinking]

I've almost finished reading it. I like the character of the protagonist very much. The shortcoming is that sometimes the story line turns inexplicably and the fighting scenes are relatively long. I still like to write more teasing scenes. The time also passes too slowly. It took more than 100 chapters and only 7 days.

It's a very interesting setting, and it has the beauty of integrating all the ideas of the author's works into one. (Update soon!!) It can be seen that the Menai Star is very large, and the world view is complete and highly exploitable. So far, the character of the protagonist Wu Yun is solid. He wants to live a better life after being reborn. He has a gentle personality and a big brain, and sometimes he is a crazy person. The supporting characters Jasmine, the clan leader, and Ke'er are all portrayed in a way that is not eye-catching but will certainly be memorable. The relationship line on Sunny Day is a bit slow, Wu Yun, who is very dedicated to everyone, meets Joan of Arc... Anyway, you will definitely not suffer from watching it! Follow Menai Xing now and you can become an old fan! !

Write settings with your heart and feelings with your feet

I like this feeling. The author writes well and the writing style is also good. Some plot sections are very atmospheric. I support it with five-star reviews. The world view is very interesting. Under the influence of magic, electricity, machinery, etc. Will turn into elemental spirits, causing the failure of technology. However, because magic is affected by gravity and cannot leave the planet, the remaining earthlings can still use technology in the space station, and players on the ground can use the game system. As for the tomboy elements of this book, I am a face control person and don't care about gender. As for those who care, you don't have to read it, but please respect it.

The world structure of the article is grand, the characters are full and rich, each with its own characteristics, the plot is clearly introduced, and the details are richly described. By creating Wu Yun, the protagonist of Nanliang who is witty, brave, helpful, cute, kind (probably) and careful, the article narrates the story of the protagonist's rebirth, self-change, and continuous strengthening. It expresses the author's broad mind and optimistic attitude. It reflects that the author is knowledgeable, knowledgeable, and talented. People can't help but sigh at the author's high level of thought, and expresses the author's homesickness (sickness). Finally, there is some personal information. After reading the five-star reviews, the author can write me into the book and ask for a role. Please.

The author is probably an old writer. Although the process is long and sometimes boring, it is generally a high-quality work that most book lovers can read with confidence. But I suggest not to skip reading, otherwise you will be confused. I suggest you read it patiently. [Smile][Like][Like][Like] There are also many characters written by the author, and it is a multi-line plot. When you read it, you will jump from the plot you are watching to another plot. Skipping sometimes makes you dizzy, so it is not recommended to skip reading. [Smile]^_^

It's very strong. The author is very rigorous in writing the book and it feels comfortable to read. It covers a wide range of topics and has detailed descriptions of various aspects. The theme of "Mobile City Punk" is written relatively well. The only drawback is that there are a few lines that are a bit slow.

The sequel to CWM Next Door (Mobile City's Cross-dressing Mother) is indeed well written, but unfortunately not many people read it, and the book label was deleted, so I can only helpless eunuch, I hope it will be better this time.

It can be seen that the author has great ambitions and good abilities, and his writing is bold and stable. But if I can't finish the writing, or if it's sloppy and uses the Spring and Autumn style of writing, I'll change it and become a troll.

This book is wonderful, the world view and characters are very consistent with my XP, the plot is novel and interesting, and it allows me to see a game world that looks like a real one. I have also read the author's previous books, and I really like them. I also hope that the author can keep writing this time without interruption. [Top post][top post][top post]

Don't let the name fool you, this is truly a treasure! The world view is grand but the underlying logic is clear. I really want to know how many surprises there are in this world, which arouses my curiosity! The writing technique is delicate and vivid, which is also the reason why I stay here! It's definitely worth the money to get into the pit! (｡•̀ᴗ-)✧ Respect personal wishes!

There is no doubt that it is a good book. The author has integrated a lot of knowledge into the novel. It is hardcore but not difficult to understand. It feels like watching a popular science video. The world is also written very realistically. There are illustrations in some places. The disadvantage may be that the update is too slow and not enough to read.

Hahaha, the protagonist of the pink-haired Xiaonan Niang and his useless female brother [facepalm], interesting setting, so weird, give it a second look. Second review, this novel is really interesting. Xiao Nanliang, the protagonist, you are really Asakusa sometimes [laughs evilly] Third comment, the writing style is really crazy hahahaha, Wu Yun, you guy is really for both men and women. It's a bit exciting, I'm following this book [Like] Fourth comment, this female brat male protagonist is hopeless [face covering]

For this book, my evaluation is: good-looking The whole book is excellent in the structure of the world view. The broad world view is very suitable for people who read the book in the third person to imagine. The overall reading experience is quite good (in my opinion, don't criticize it if you don't like it). When reading, there will always be knowledge that suddenly pops up, giving people a strange feeling that feels very reasonable. Moreover, the magic system of the entire book can basically be said to produce effects based on a very scientific principle. For example, the water bombs that appeared in the previous chapters, most of the overall magic conforms to this principle, giving me a very novel experience. Finally, the book written by the resident author Dada became even more popular in the days to come. (Of course, although I still haven't read 1/3, I still hope to read more)

It's good-looking, and the main character is the kind of Xiao Nanliang that suits both men and women. But right in the middle is the place where people from other worlds are being slandered. It looks so uncomfortable. I can't do anything after being slandered by others. It seems really frustrating.

It's a very good book. The racial setting is very interesting and very novel. One star is deducted because the heroine and the emotional description are really toxic.

I started watching it, and suddenly I was confused by the memory. I wonder if I should have watched less. Only after watching it did I realize that it was just a memory. The plot is very jumpy later on, but the writing is very good, the world view is huge, and the setting is very good. In short, it is very powerful. The male protagonist's journey is complicated, and there are no bad points so far, and the author can make it right. I can only say that the setting, plot, characters, writing style, etc. That the author has written so far are very good, and the quality of the book is a bit high.

Personally, I feel that there is no exciting plot after the Jasmine chapter. The main reason is that the progress of this book is too slow. There are almost 200 chapters in the trapped area. I hope the subsequent plot can be better [crying][crying][crying] I finally finished watching Prison Place, and the plot started to become interesting again [laughs][laughs][laughs]

I can't comment on the big one, so let's talk about the small one (I watched the big one for more than 80 hours): Advantages: 1): The characters are full of characters. Except for some names that are hard to remember, they almost all leave an impression on people (I don't care, Xiaonan Liang Saigao) 2): The plot and settings are unique among game and sports articles. The author's academic quality is quite high. Many settings that are common in many other online articles instantly became unfamiliar areas to me when he explained them. Using more realistic theories to explain the fantasy world is a major feature of this book (author, you always say, is this academic?) Disadvantages (not considered shortcomings, just some personal resentments and thoughts): 1): The emotional line of the protagonist is very rough... Wu (Wu) Yun and Qingtian, what a good couple, why haven't they met yet after 800 chapters? Although I know that if they meet too openly, it will be difficult for other people who have some similarities with Wu Yun to sell... But I want to see Qingtian and Wu Yun hold their mouth high! 2): The main plot progresses a bit slowly. Sometimes I forget what the protagonist is going to do while watching it (I don't mean to say that the branch plot is not interesting). After all, it is a web novel, so there is no need to set the stage like this (touching your head and laughing awkwardly)... Finally, I wish the author will get better and better as he writes, become more inspired as he writes, and never end his work!

A very good book. The author made me feel a deep homesickness.

Rebirth/dog-licking (past life is currently unknown) The protagonist is bisexual, and 5 of the first 10 chapters are about reminiscing about past lives. I can accept it and read it, and the writing is okay.