Beng Tie: It's the Hidden Sword, Not the Demon's Yin Body

The settings and supporting characters are written in great detail, After reading Chapter 33, I was so angry that I temporarily put down my fattening. The protagonist was still too gentle. He was very angry when he was treated "for your own good", but he calmed down immediately, leaving me as an emotionally unstable reader because the first half was substituted and the second half was stuck [face covering]

It's good-looking, and the descriptions are quite detailed, but there are too few. Another timeline is too long. Not to mention the main plot, Wuxiao on the Cloud alone has thousands of years. I estimate that it will take a hundred chapters to cover the incident in Cangcheng. If you want to read the main plot immediately, you should consider it. However, I personally recommend this book. The writing is pretty good, but it's not suitable for writing fan fiction.

Advantages: The writing is very good, and the descriptions are very familiar. It can be seen that the author has definitely put effort into imagining and describing the scenes. The chivalry is very strong, and sometimes it makes my blood boil. I wish I could find someone to fight like the protagonist. I believe that the author also has his own understanding of the spirit and honor of warriors. It can be seen that he has put a lot of effort into his thinking. There is also the intertwining of interpersonal relationships, which is complex and deep. Coupled with the setting of Jianwang San and the background of Xianzhou in the past, it seems to have a strange rationality. It is not tearing, but full of fun. Disadvantages: The timeline is not very clear and is not suitable for readers who do not have a deep understanding of timelines. Although it is said that everyone has shortcomings, the descriptions are a bit too strong and the explanations are sometimes not clear. Maybe it is a problem with writing skills or forgetting after writing? There are also people's names that appear inexplicably. Although they play a role in advancing the plot, the brain used to deal with the timeline and plot has to remember the names, which is undoubtedly a burden when reading. I personally think that the biggest problem is the appearance of too many names or branch lines that will not appear again. I think it hinders reading a bit, and the size and text become redundant... I am not a professional, but I just think there may be something wrong, and I suggest avoiding it. In short, this is the first time I write a long review. Overall, it is a very good book. I give it four stars... In fact, I would give it four and a half stars if I could.

The writing is exquisite, the characters are described in detail, as well as detailed research and detailed explanations of each setting! Although this is a joint article between Jian Wang III and Xingtie, it doesn't matter if you haven't read Jian Wang III! 👍🏻Because I haven't watched it at all ( And the male protagonist has no cp and no cp! By the way, the current timeline is before Di Gong Siming became the Star God. For the sake of my long review, why don't you update it😖~ There are very few texts with this kind of biased plot, so don't pay attention to what those people say! Well, madam, I just want to ask a little, and I definitely don't mean to offend. It may be that I am mistaken, or I am actually hallucinating. In any case, I hope that we can adhere to the principle of friendly and rational relationship, and do not hurt our friendship because of some possible misunderstandings. Finally, I have absolutely no intention of offending. I am just asking in the spirit of great exploration into the nature of the universe and the spirit of seeking truth and pragmatism: "Can I marry you?" 🥺👉🌹💍👈

The author's writing style is really great. I really like the author's description of the scenery. It is very comfortable and allows people to draw pictures in front of their eyes. Moreover, the settings of various characters are very complete and three-dimensional, without the frivolous feeling of using a template. However, the author describes the details too much, which can be understood as being rigorous about foreshadowing and logic. However, for readers, it will be tiring for the senses after reading for a long time. There is a sense of déjà vu and some plots are too jumpy (this is especially obvious when listening to books). It is also possible that the author is not suitable for writing fan fiction. It would be more harmonious if it is an imaginary world.

It's good to watch, but I came here for Beng Tie, but Beng Tie has not been mentioned in this book yet (it is Beng Tie, and now the plot seems to be the main character, etc.), Which makes me a little disappointed. However, the copywriter also said that there are many private settings and the writing style is quite good, which is acceptable. Um, some mentioned that the protagonist's guardian does not allow the protagonist to skip a grade. Is this storyline unsatisfactory? However, if you introduce the guardian's background story and perspective a little bit, this behavior is quite reasonable. If you are interested, you can take a look first, don't just listen to the comments section, and then decide whether to abandon it or not. After all, I personally really think this plot is nothing ( It varies from person to person

Emmm, how should I put it? The writing is good, but there are too many original parts by the author, resulting in too many characters. Their appearance time is almost the same, and I can't remember it. There is also an uncomfortable plot where the protagonist wants to skip a grade, but the sister won't let the protagonist skip. However, since the protagonist is Shota [smile], add one star

The writing is very good, and the descriptions of both scenes and characters are very delicate. Although it is too detailed, some places seem a bit slow and the perspective is unclear. For example, the scenes and psychological descriptions from the perspectives of all parties in the banquet are too detailed and detailed, which made me unable to react to the switching of some characters' perspective while reading. The description of the emotional tendency of each person's perspective is a bit too consistent, which dilutes the tension caused by the banquet. The plot is also a bit too fast in the early stages, and the emotional transitions are a bit blurry. However, the faults do not hide the merits. This article is a rare masterpiece since I have read Tomato fandoms for so long. It makes me feel like I have gone back to the time when the online gods were fighting. Big boost for the author! ! ! [Like] ps: If you like fast pace and listening to books, you can skip it. This book is obviously a slow-burning novel. There are too few official settings about this period. The author will definitely have many personal settings and new characters in order to write the article. If you can't accept it, you can skip it. But if you have requirements for writing and can accept slow-burning novels, you can give it a try.

Super pretty! I have always preferred to read fan fiction, but most of the novels are limited to the official plots. After reading them for a long time, they will feel the same and a bit boring. The author is very powerful. Through his interpretation of the text in the game and his own knowledge, he has replenished the world view of the novel, making it grand and interesting. The settings and personality traits of each character are very attractive. The story plot in the article is also very fascinating. I really like to read drama-oriented novels, but some people may find them a bit boring. But the author writes really well! I hope the author can continue to persevere, and I will continue to pursue it! [Sending Hearts]

It's good-looking, a rare fanfic that has both writing and plot, and its IQ is also online. Rather than being a fanfic, I think it's more like the author's innovation, rigorous and boldly preserved worldview, and it doesn't look like the author of Tomatoes at all.

The score is very low, please support it with five stars~ I've read about a quarter of it so far, so I'll comment here first: Your writing style is really good, but I wish you could leave some blank space. Being too detailed would destroy other people's imagination and make it less beautiful. The most controversial part is the period when the protagonist goes to school. I understand that I want to shape everyone to have bad things but to be generally good, but I tried too hard and felt that everyone was poisonous... The protagonist is a person with brains and strength, but people around him treat him as a child and make his own decisions. I would like to mention a few points here: First, as an adult who has lived two lives, the protagonist finds a sense of belonging in a different world. It is a good thing, but he should not accept all emotions that are obviously calculated. It feels like the protagonist is somewhat disconnected here, giving the impression of an adult's IQ, a child's character, and superhuman abilities. Secondly, I should consider the mood of the readers. Most people hate having their parents make decisions. The writing is too real and makes people uncomfortable🤢. After all, I came here to seek reflection and comfort, not to repeat what I experienced back then and remain unchanged. Third, pay attention to the character issue. It is clearly written in the front that Sister Shuijian has no desire to control, but from the back, she and Aunt Yun clearly arranged the protagonist, and it is obvious that she has a strong desire to control. I sincerely hope that you can make some changes here. I feel that many people have abandoned books here... I will try my best to make a fair evaluation, and I also ask all book friends to be merciful (be careful) [awkward smile] [smile]

Very well written and well written! But maybe it's because it's so well written and I haven't played Sword 3, so I felt a little tired watching it_(:°з∠)_. The author uses a lot of brushstrokes and literate descriptions to tell the story of the life of Xianzhou thousands of years ago in his own setting and the creation of supporting characters. However, there are suddenly too many supporting characters and too slow writing. For me, these descriptions are far less interesting than the chapters in which Aha appeared. After all, we are fics, so I still want to see content related to the main story. If you want to read the main story like me, I recommend waiting for a longer time to read it_(xз∠)_. ——The above is all subjective, you are right if you criticize

The author writes in great detail, and adds a lot of supplements and elaborations to a large number of characters and plots related to the protagonist😊. Some characters reflect the complexity and diversity of people very well, and some may be very close to real-life parent images😊. The protagonist has many times Although he can travel through time, he can still maintain his youthful nature😊. The time-travel experience of Jian Wang San has a great impact on the protagonist. He still misses it in the Iron Collapsing World, so much so that his memory flashes back many times and he can recall Jian Wang San everywhere (the author really has good intentions😊). Later, I had to abandon the article due to some things, and I felt it was a pity. After all, the outline was still very attractive😊. I hope the author will continue to work hard and make further progress😊～

Give the author a five-star rating. After all, his writing is good. He has really put a lot of effort into it. The large number of detailed settings bring an indescribable reality. But please pay attention to Chapter 33, I will directly spoil it. This chapter is about the protagonist's sister using tricks to deceive the little fat man and using words to hide the difficulty of entering a higher school, which directly makes the protagonist fail to enter the higher education because she wants him to "experience youth" and "press the skip button". It is really unacceptable.

Review of the second Beng Tie book by A Little White Cloud That Can Fall Snow: I have read some Bengtie fanfics, but basically I only read a few chapters, and they were cloud player. I came across this book by chance, which aroused my long-lost secondary soul. Although it seems a bit obscure (after all, I have never played Mijia games)... Therefore, I don't want to comment too much on the plot. The author's writing style is very good, and the words reveal a high-spirited writing style, unlike a newcomer. The biggest problem is that I hope the author can update it soon!

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh it's sword three! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! When you see the hidden sword, click it in! ! ! ! The writing style of the author's wife is very good and the characters are so fleshed out! ! ! ! ! !

The story line is set long before the plot begins. The scenes described and the characters are all very vivid and three-dimensional. It gives people the feeling that the characters are talking right in front of you when you close your eyes. What each character says and does is the kind of thing that makes people sigh. This is what he will say and do. The protagonist is the teacher's original character from Jianwang III. The teacher has integrated the world views of both games very well, and the protagonist's youthful spirit is about to come through the text. Especially in the first few chapters of the extra chapter, there are so many foreshadowings, the tense feeling of the impending storm and the magnificent scene when the protagonist solves the problem. The teacher uses words to accurately describe the scene, the emotional changes and the undercurrent of the matter. Just reading the words makes you feel as if you are immersed in the scene. I got up and wrote a book review for the teacher, but I hesitated for a long time. I was worried that I would be stupid and couldn't fully describe how good the teacher's book was without doing it. Teacher, do you know why the dinosaurs became extinct? Because their forelimbs were too short to applaud your words, they were so sad that they died! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] So teacher, do you dare to break the news and let me have a state banquet (′▽`)

Five-star praise comes first, it's so beautiful! The author must not be a eunuch There are many Jiansan players, and there are also many Bentie players, but this is the first time I have seen someone who can combine the two. I have been playing Jiansan for seven or eight years and am still playing Bentie, but I have never thought of the similarities between the two, let alone being able to choose the sect of Hidden Sword and combine the ginkgo special effects with the Immortal Boat Demon Yin Body. The setting alone is enough for four stars. I'm really looking forward to the plot behind it. The other one star is for the author's writing style. I feel that the author has some literary skills. The writing style of other novels can only be regarded as the icing on the cake. It doesn't matter if there is a better reading experience. But this book is a bit of a finishing touch. The three protagonists of the swords of the ancient Tang Dynasty and the modern fairy boat would be much better if they were a little more delicate.

Treasure fan! The quality is rare, the author's writing is very good, and the characters are well-developed. Anyway, I hope the author won't be tired or take a break [please update] It's so beautiful, I love the long hair with white fur and gold eyes.

It's really, really good-looking. I'd like to call it my favorite novel of the year. It's also one of the better-looking novels among Bengtie's fans. It doesn't have any nonsense and the story is very exciting. Anyway, it's pretty good-looking in every aspect. If you don't think it's that good in the early stages, don't give up. You can skip and read the rest of the story. It's really a really good read. . I would like to call it one of my favorite Bengtie fanfics I have seen so far. It's really beautiful [Sending Hearts] (Just sitting there, it's time for you to update) How many days have passed, haven't you updated yet? [Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry] How many days have it been? QAQ Please give me another chapter [crying]૮₍ɵ̷ɵ̷̥̥᷅₎ა

This novel is well written and very delicate. Of course, I can't describe it with my vocabulary. I just feel that reading it makes me feel comfortable and brings me back. It felt like subscribing to magazines and reading novels and articles there. Overall review: Good stuff for the body and mind. Can you try it a little [smirk] [snicker] [snicker]

There are some niches, which are not the current mainstream Bengtiewen type (not Shuangwen). The narrative style is bland, and the author made it understandable for me as a person who has never played Jian San. It can be seen that the author is careful.

The writing of this book is very good, and I also think it is good-looking. However, I feel that the author is really miserable. Even when he wrote this book, he was criticized by others. Fortunately, the author managed to hold on and did not stop updating.

It's a rare double-skilled author, his skills are quite good, and it can be seen that he writes with great care. Very rare book. Well, the reason why I commented after watching this is because I am used to putting myself in the role of the protagonist, and I can't stand the frustrating plot of being a child. Personally, I already have a bit of ptsd over my parents' desire for control. This book may be more suitable to be viewed from a son's perspective.

The writing is great, and I feel that the whole world is completely constructed. However, I haven't read Jian Wang 3, and I'm tired from reading it. Before I got into the main plot, I could have read it as another novel.

The writing is superb and the plot is novel. It's rare to see a book that writes such a detailed timeline so early in the Bengtie timeline. I can only read it as an original with the background of Bengtie. I hope to get to the main plot as soon as possible. I can't wait to see how the protagonist becomes an old man in the main plot. The author will give it a boost! ! !

The writing is good, the logic is online, the author seems to have a bit of obsessive-compulsive disorder, and the plot is smooth. I am so lucky to have you as the author when I use this kind of writing style that can be used to write ancient words [Blow a kiss]. Moreover, the comments mixed in the middle will not make people feel boring, and you can read it in one breath.

It's a very good book. It can be seen that the author has high literary quality, but the author is just like her name, she is a pigeon. It took 26 years to almost finish the first volume of the 24-year-old book. The author said there are five volumes. All I can say is that I hope the author and I can live until the day this book is finished.

Damn, please update it, update it quickly, update it more often, it's a holiday now anyway This is my filthy land reincarnation account, and I haven't given up on your book. I also hope that you won't give up on your own book. I like this book very much.

Super pretty! ! ! The writing is very good, the plot is logical and clever, and the background settings are all right. Wow, the fairy lady (it would be better if the lifespan theory is not too sharp in the future)