[Emotional female protagonist, loyal dog male protagonist]
The merchant's daughter Yun Nuan has an eight-point portrait of Bai Yueguang, the young marquis Zhou Shi. On the day of Bai Yueguang's wedding, Zhou Shi forcibly snatched her into the house.
In order to survive, she was forced to become a "rebel" undercover in the Hou Mansion. The betrayal of her family and country made Yun Nuan miserable.
Later, Yun Nuan accompanied Zhou in exile, while she protected Zhou and took root in Chongzhou.
And stubbornly, with the mentality of a dying person, he looked at Zhou Shi's feelings with cold eyes, without rejecting or taking responsibility.
It wasn't until the unknowing Zhou Shiyi was buried in the coffin with her who had faked her death that she realized that she had let down her sincerity.
Zhou Shi, who had been ignored, finally saw through Yun Nuan's hypocrisy and indifference. He put on his battle armor and went to the battlefield. The woman who didn't care about him suddenly chased after him.
The awkward Zhou rejected Yun Nuan, but was worried that Yun Nuan would really give up. He wanted to abuse Yun Nuan but didn't dare to abuse her completely, so he could only abuse her slightly.
"He hasn't calmed down yet. I just have to spoil him. Anyway, he slapped him and gave him a handful of sweet dates."
Reader comments
Already read 100 chapters of medium-to-short article It's he
Personal opinionᕙ(`▿´)ᕗ
Praise first——
①The character design is very good! ! ! ! ! (I like it! Five stars)
This is my favorite thing
The male and female protagonists are really cute
They get along like a master and a puppy (so cute and a loyal dog——) (so good for dog training——)
The heroine is the kind of person who has a light personality and is very tolerant (she has a very gentle mother-like feeling (Fog)). She is strong, sensible and strategic. She cannot express her emotions and is a little emotionally dull (but this is very alluring)
The story of the male protagonist, a playboy, being slowly transformed by his master. The period when he was exiled and grew up is rich in character, and the emotional line can be written (it's really sad but sweet, sweet but sad)
②The plot is about three stars
The plot is dull at the beginning, but has many twists and turns at critical moments.
The previous descriptions deal with emotions well. In the latter part, there should be more pen and ink. In addition to the pen and ink, you can also describe the changes in the mood of the male and female protagonists. Use more descriptions with different techniques to highlight the sadistic points.
(Personally, I feel that the second half of the plot is a bit too rushed)
In addition, maybe because I will jump to the page when I encounter a passage that is not very cold, some parts are not very clear or I feel a little boring.
The idea of reversing the plot is good (praising--)
However, I feel that the characters should be given more emotional processing during the reversal. In that case, the reversal will be more touching! !
If possible, the plot can be better and the writing can be more beautiful.
The male and female protagonists are really cute. If there is a side story, they can jump to a certain time period or their descriptions.
[When I opened the door, the big-eyed girl put on a bright red wedding dress as she wished, and then said something like that] A feeling of unfinished business
Leave a blank, their story continues
finally
(ᕙ(`▿´)ᕗ I really like the plot of the laughing couple in the first seventy chapters (The characters are really a plus, they are both so cute (laughs)
Thank you to the author for the great writing! ᕙ(`▿´)ᕗ
After reading several books by the author, I came here to read this hands-on training book. Except that the writing style is immature compared to the previous books, there is no big problem at all, because the subsequent books are getting better and better. My favorite is the one about the old detective, but the plot of this book is smooth and not laggy. The writing is really good, from the heroine's tolerance and the hero's growth to the later sympathy and mutual expression of affection. If you don't say it, you can't tell that it is the first work. I still have something to say after reading it. I really want to read the extras. Yun Nuan is sitting there doing nothing but still making Zhou Shi smile. This book deserves to be read by more people! ! ! ! ! If the author can see it, he can fulfill my extravagant dream~~~
There are too many twists and turns in the plot, which is very interesting and full of ups and downs.
The author's writing is very good. There is no place that I don't want to skip to see, I want to see them all!
Come on! More good works!
Expect!
Yes, I have read almost all of the author's novels, so I will comment on them later. There is an explanation for all the reversals of things, which is a bit blunt compared to the previous one. The stories all have happy endings, which I like very much.
The writing is top-notch and the plot is exciting, especially the characters. I love them so much.
It's beautiful, I love this kind of heroine, she's strategizing, smart and brave
It's very interesting. I read it for the first time after a book shortage.
It's very interesting and the content is novel. I just listened to Chapter 98. The first part of the plot is a bit bland, but there is a twist later and the plot is compact.
I like tacit and dedicated relationships. It seems that everyone is neither absolutely good nor particularly bad. I hope it doesn't end badly. Come on!
Recommended, but the reversal in the later period was a bit too big and it hasn't been reversed yet.
I love reading every book. Please give me your support.
Although there are no extras, I still gave it five stars. Haha, the author's writing is indeed very good. I have watched four of them in the past few days.
Already read 100 chapters of medium-to-short article It's he Personal opinionᕙ(`▿´)ᕗ Praise first—— ①The character design is very good! ! ! ! ! (I like it! Five stars) This is my favorite thing The male and female protagonists are really cute They get along like a master and a puppy (so cute and a loyal dog——) (so good for dog training——) The heroine is the kind of person who has a light personality and is very tolerant (she has a very gentle mother-like feeling (Fog)). She is strong, sensible and strategic. She cannot express her emotions and is a little emotionally dull (but this is very alluring) The story of the male protagonist, a playboy, being slowly transformed by his master. The period when he was exiled and grew up is rich in character, and the emotional line can be written (it's really sad but sweet, sweet but sad) ②The plot is about three stars The plot is dull at the beginning, but has many twists and turns at critical moments. The previous descriptions deal with emotions well. In the latter part, there should be more pen and ink. In addition to the pen and ink, you can also describe the changes in the mood of the male and female protagonists. Use more descriptions with different techniques to highlight the sadistic points. (Personally, I feel that the second half of the plot is a bit too rushed) In addition, maybe because I will jump to the page when I encounter a passage that is not very cold, some parts are not very clear or I feel a little boring. The idea of reversing the plot is good (praising--) However, I feel that the characters should be given more emotional processing during the reversal. In that case, the reversal will be more touching! ! If possible, the plot can be better and the writing can be more beautiful. The male and female protagonists are really cute. If there is a side story, they can jump to a certain time period or their descriptions. [When I opened the door, the big-eyed girl put on a bright red wedding dress as she wished, and then said something like that] A feeling of unfinished business Leave a blank, their story continues finally (ᕙ(`▿´)ᕗ I really like the plot of the laughing couple in the first seventy chapters (The characters are really a plus, they are both so cute (laughs) Thank you to the author for the great writing! ᕙ(`▿´)ᕗ
After reading several books by the author, I came here to read this hands-on training book. Except that the writing style is immature compared to the previous books, there is no big problem at all, because the subsequent books are getting better and better. My favorite is the one about the old detective, but the plot of this book is smooth and not laggy. The writing is really good, from the heroine's tolerance and the hero's growth to the later sympathy and mutual expression of affection. If you don't say it, you can't tell that it is the first work. I still have something to say after reading it. I really want to read the extras. Yun Nuan is sitting there doing nothing but still making Zhou Shi smile. This book deserves to be read by more people! ! ! ! ! If the author can see it, he can fulfill my extravagant dream~~~
There are too many twists and turns in the plot, which is very interesting and full of ups and downs. The author's writing is very good. There is no place that I don't want to skip to see, I want to see them all! Come on! More good works! Expect!
Yes, I have read almost all of the author's novels, so I will comment on them later. There is an explanation for all the reversals of things, which is a bit blunt compared to the previous one. The stories all have happy endings, which I like very much.
The writing is top-notch and the plot is exciting, especially the characters. I love them so much.
It's beautiful, I love this kind of heroine, she's strategizing, smart and brave
It's very interesting. I read it for the first time after a book shortage.
It's very interesting and the content is novel. I just listened to Chapter 98. The first part of the plot is a bit bland, but there is a twist later and the plot is compact.
I like tacit and dedicated relationships. It seems that everyone is neither absolutely good nor particularly bad. I hope it doesn't end badly. Come on!
Recommended, but the reversal in the later period was a bit too big and it hasn't been reversed yet.
I love reading every book. Please give me your support.
Although there are no extras, I still gave it five stars. Haha, the author's writing is indeed very good. I have watched four of them in the past few days.