Broken Iron************

Not bad Question: 1. In the early stage, there were many ambiguous lines due to the frequent revision of the outline by the author. The single heroine was not confirmed until around episode 57 (former Nth Star Train Navigator Doric) 2. The character image of the young Black Tower in the middle is a bit broken, but it does not affect the main plot. Advantages: So far in Chapter 136, the plot and characters (except for the Black Tower) are pretty good, and the writing is okay. Even if the outline is revised frequently, the writing quality has not declined, and there is no obvious sense of fragmentation (at least I don't feel the sense of fragmentation)

The period Liu Ying lived in is generally considered not to be the period of the universal locust plague, because the time was too far away, and Liu Ying's anentropy syndrome would not have allowed her to live for thousands of years. It reminds me that the locust plague in the world has basically ended when the Sand King died, but the locust plague is still one of the major disasters in the universe; many places in the Liuying PV are considered to be stream-of-consciousness expressions (analyzed by major plot analysis up)

Looking forward to the development of the plot. After reading the latest chapter, I feel much better than the beginning. The chapters at the beginning are a bit tight.

It's a narrative type, each character has his own story, and it's quite interesting. I believe the author has conceived it for a long time before writing it. I feel that it should be a harem, and the writing is very broad. After all, most Bengtiewen is about the Shura field. It's good to wake up after reading this. [Thinking] The disadvantage is that there may be more people who can't stand this kind of story in Tomato. Well, this is not an issue I should consider.

It's good, but the Black Tower is a little bit awkward to look at.

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

It's well written, but there are some issues at some points in time.

It's very beautiful. I like it very much.

It's beautiful and the fun part makes me laugh all the time.

Why is there no one?

Five stars for you! Optimistic about you

There's a knife, Jamelo! [Cry]

Come on, come on, come on

Not bad, very beautiful

Come on, come on, come on

It looks good so far.

No, buddy, there's something wrong with your timeline [laughing evilly]

Come on, come on, come on, come on

Come on, author, I hope you can maintain your current style. This narrative style is quite attractive, and the story written by the author is really interesting.

It's super good-looking and rich in content, but it doesn't live up to the name. The whole film has nothing important to do with Fu Xuan for the time being, but it's worth watching.

I wanted to watch it, but the update was discontinued. I want to see the sweet daily life of Danqi and Dolic (sad)