On Vacation, But in the Detective Conan World

(Contains spoilers, please be careful) ps. I call Shiro's relationship with Jingguang and Zero as [Kingguang Chapter], his relationship with his brother Zhufu Gaoming as [Gaoming Chapter], and after officially entering the police academy, it is called [Police Academy Chapter] Back to the topic, let's talk about the advantages first: The author's writing style is very good, whether it is the scene creation or the character creation, it will not affect the viewing even if you don't know Conan and the police academy team. I like the author's Shiro cat very much. It's super cute and clingy. I really like watching Shiro get along with Jingguang and Zero. It feels sticky. The most important thing is that there is no cp. It's so delicious! Next, let's talk about the reasons why I didn't give it five stars: 1. I personally feel that there are too many irrelevant plots and are too lengthy. [Kingguang Chapter] There is a lot of plot interspersed with the Yamazaki family and the introduction of the movie (the complete story of the movie is written in several chapters), it is too long! As a result, when I saw the name "Yuta" appearing later, I wanted to skip it; [Gao Ming Chapter] is also in the same situation. It is heavily interspersed with the story of a lady who commits suicide by diving, and the comics take up a large proportion (it is also the kind where the complete content of the comics is written). For people like me who only want to read daily life and post posts, this kind of plot is really tasteless, and it is not a pity to abandon it. 2. I don't know if it's my imagination, but I feel that the plots of the first 200 chapters [Jingguang Chapter] and [Gao Ming Chapter] are quite distinct. As soon as we get to the "Kingguang Chapter", characters related to the movie appear, and as soon as we get to the "Gaoming Chapter", the plot related to the comics comes. Shiro obviously has both identities, but rarely (not that there are none, I just think there are very few) will mention the work of another chapter in one chapter (and I remember that one of Shiro's characters is to take a vacation without working, which feels like a lot of work later) 3. Emmmmm, to be honest, rather than watching Shiro and Gao Ming get along, I would rather watch Shiro get along with Jingguang, Zero, or even the police academy team. This mentality reached its peak later in the plot when Gao Ming found out that he fell in love with Shiro. Fortunately, Shiro refused, and fortunately this article is without cp! 4. I have been waiting so hard for the plot of entering the police academy, but it finally appeared in Chapter 221! But overall I really like this novel and I'm so excited for Shiro! Kudos to the author!

The writing is very good. I gave four stars just to give it a low score, but the writing is really good. The protagonist is a very beautiful beauty with long silver hair, but her red eyes directly poked my xp. He is very gentle to his own people, but very indifferent to outsiders, which is a very double standard. And I get along well with the people around me, but especially the police officer Maomao is really easy to fight with. Although the author said that there is no CP, you can also produce your own food. Without CP, you can just fight casually, right? Although I haven't read much yet, it seems that the writing, characterization, and plot are all very reasonable and good so far. Also, I would like to ask the author if he would consider making a side story CP. If so, the protagonist should be accepted, right? Because I am the Lord and the recipient. Well, it's a bit unacceptable for the protagonist to be the attacker. (Although it feels like the protagonist is more aggressive now.) Judging from the score, it seems that there is no danger, so I won't give up the score.

It looks great! That's right, it seems to have been written on it. Although the daily routine is also very good, I still want to watch the police academy team and Gin ▽ So when can they appear! I want to see it, I want to see it, I want to see it, I want to see it, I want to see it so much (>ｽ<)

The author's writing is very delicate. When reading certain plots, it's like taking a big sip of orange soda. Beautiful emotions well up in the throat like bubbles and gurgling out. O(∩_∩)O There is no cp in the text, it is ambiguous at most⊙∀⊙ The protagonist Shiro, Shirakawa Mizuki, has white hair and red eyes. I like cats shaping others, and the interaction with Police Five makes me lose my temper... The pace of the article is not fast, and the details are handled very gently... I have already kicked Hagi's lunch. All in all, the rating may not be that ideal, but it is a fanfic worth reading. Please support the author a lot - please this is my life's request -

It smells delicious! It's been a long time since I've had a state banquet like this. I finished reading it in one sitting. I clicked on the introduction several times to see if there was any CP. This kind of decadence of an older person and (pseudo) ignorance of a younger person is really delicious.

The writing style is super comfortable, Shirakawa's character is super cute, and everyone's interactions are so heartwarming. It's still so cute, come on, kitty! The author must continue writing, come on, come on This article is very in line with my taste. Many parts touched my cuteness. I really like the daily articles. Come on, Maomao, I'm looking forward to the next plot. (｡･ω･｡) Suddenly I found that there are very few people reading it, so I will recommend this book among various famous topics that fit the nature of this book.

It's so beautiful. The character descriptions are so detailed. Why is this Yongta so annoying 🤦 🤦, Second editor: Yongta is loyal and loyal, and I feel that I always know it. There are a lot of places to write about Yongta. If you haven't read it, run away [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] Yongta only expresses his ideas from his own standpoint. He has always offended people unconsciously, and he still feels innocent. He has become an actor and is still stupid. How can an actor always say the wrong thing? Yes, when it comes to writing about Ryoko, I feel that there are more places to write about Yuta than Kagemitsu and Rei, and now there are even more. I spend more time with Yuta than people from the police academy, and there are just as many plots about Hagiwara and Matsuda 🤦 🤦 🤦 (I'm just complaining about Yuta, the author's other writings are all very good)

It's a good-looking, everyday story, not too bland, and very interesting. However, I found it very troublesome at the end. Whether it's the Yamazaki family, the director, his college classmates, or the boyfriend of the girl I rescued before, it seems that every time the hero knows people around him, he gets involved, ah

! Really well written! This is a very heart-warming daily post! The trio is really comfortable getting along with each other ~ Shiro also has a great personality. I am a bit curious if Shiro will become friends with Gin 😳 I think it will be very interesting (

The writing is very warm, I really like it, and the descriptions in the posts are very good, but I discovered it too early and it wasn't enough for me to read. It's very to my liking TT Blessed are those who like to see beauty, strength and misery. Blessed are those who like to see stickers. Click to see cats raising each other! After watching it for so long, I have reached the extra chapter. I would like to add a follow-up review. I watched it too early and the review was not very comprehensive. After reading it, I can see that the teacher's writing style for daily articles is gentle and very popular, which I like. It can also be said to be pyrotechnics. Just like if you want to write about happiness, you can't just write about the protagonist saying "I am very happy", but you can also say like the teacher that the protagonist likes to stay in bed, but will be picked up by friends/guardians (?) To exercise. The protagonist can cook delicious meals, soft eyebrows in the steaming mist, and smiles in each other's eyes. I really like these words. In particular, our protagonist Shiro actually came down from the battlefield, and every heart-warming post in ordinary daily life is precious. Even though the main story of the police academy is in progress, the highlight of the police academy team has not been snatched away. From my God's perspective, looking at Shiro from behind, I feel a sense of security that he is being taken care of. Although Maomao looks soft and casual, the reader knows that he understands propriety and the power in his body. (But this does not hinder the police academy team's desire to protect and sense of responsibility for its birth) Maybe the teacher's change of style is a little rough, but the sense of pseudo-beauty and strong misery can make up for it. Moreover, when Shiro, the human-machine, comes online in person, the protagonist's strength does not need to grow, but his humanity does increase as if he has been nurtured, and he feels the same way as Jingguang. In the original novel, I felt the most dissatisfied with the Zhufu brothers. I think in this article, even if he is really exposed in the end, Hiro will not have the only option of pointing a gun at him... (Mao Mao TT, you must save Hiro handsomely) I have said a lot of unfounded thoughts on my own, and I hope that I can continue to follow Mr. Maomao and the protagonist in his novel to reach an ending that is not Shiro's but an ending that I can see.