Naruto: Bluebells in the Eyes of Kamui

It's so embarrassing. I've wanted to watch this kind of plot for a long time, but everyone else wrote about Obito's soul-piercing body and soul. Now someone finally writes about Obito himself 😄 The train bound for spring starts 👍

A new book with great potential, and the background details are well handled. It's even better than Sister Juan's. Let's see how it is handled later. I hope it won't end badly and give me a story that leaves no regrets. There are no more Kamui Tears in the ninja world, and Obito only has bluebells left. Ghana~ The new chapter is wrong. Maybe the author has run out of inspiration. You should just read his new book.

Very good, updated frequently. Obito's character design is very consistent with the image of Kenji before he was blackened. It is basically set according to the original work. There are fewer second settings, which is suitable for people like me [laughing] Eternal Thousand Hands Double Kamui Flying Thunder God Susana Obito is really invincible. If there is one in the mobile game, it will be all invincible frames plus defense and return to the diamond body. Do you like my pick-up and anti-reverse, zero frame blur plus mobile diamond body, backhand flying thunder god home. I'm tired of Flash Blur Gundam Dog 😏 Obito himself has no soul and soul. He likes the original work's bag-and-eat style. The settings are complete and fit the original work [laughter]

The details are abundant, the description of events is comprehensive, the logic is clear, and the characters of Lin, Obito, and Kakashi are well portrayed. It is very worth watching!!!

I think it's generally good, but there is one setting that is open to discussion. Obito is equivalent to having a precognitive dream for a year, dreaming about Lin's death and many things that happened later (at least around the fourth battle), and it can be clearly remembered, which is destined to change Obito's character, especially those that indicate these Maybe it's all true. Then his thinking can no longer be as innocent as the child before. He can be regarded as the mastermind behind the scenes. And with Obito fighting for Rin and the will of the Ten-Tails, he won't think clearly about many things and wait until the time comes. Anyway, I feel a little unclear on this point.

Come on, author, I look forward to a happy ending. I hope to see Obito teach Naru and Sato. I hope Obito becomes Hokage. I want to witness the changes in Uchiha. I also want to see Obito and Rin Xiu become real fruits. I also want to see Obito and Kakashi become famous as Hokage in the third battle. There are still too many regrets. I hope to see a happy ending.

Firm Willed➕Will of Fire➕Lin is full of buffs. I want to see when the author will arrange Kaleidoscope. It's good to read. Good luck to the author.

Why is no one watching? Many people directly soul-transmit Obito or seize Obito's body just for the kaleidoscope of divine power. To be honest, I don't like this. I like to see the original Obito. Of course, if everyone likes to watch those soul-piercing or body-seizing ones, I actually don't have any objection. This author's writing is also very good. At least I didn't see any poisonous points. It seemed very sweet and comfortable to me. Anyway, I just hope someone will watch it.

The article is well written, and the plot is spot on. Moreover, the author himself has a deep understanding of the original work of Naruto. It can be seen from the large number of details in the article that the author himself has his own unique insights, thoughts on the original work, etc. What I like better is the author's thinking about strong people: comparing different strong people to the moon and the sun, and the idea that "strong people don't mind showing their weak side to others, only weak people will hide their weaknesses and pretend to be strong." The author's thoughts on peace can also inspire people, which is a good idea. However, I think the writing style still has a lot of room for improvement. The following are my suggestions (sorry, no malicious intent) 1. It is recommended not to change the viewing angle frequently. For example, one moment I write about Obito's own perspective, then suddenly I write about Lin's inner thoughts, and then I jump back to Obito's inner thoughts. This may make readers feel a little uncomfortable. It is recommended to use more pen and ink to write about Obito's perspective. You can try to describe other characters' inner thoughts from the side, such as their expressions, actions, etc. 2. Pay attention to the coherence of the story. In the process of narrating the story, the author has added a lot of explanations, which is a bit like writing an argumentative essay, especially in battles. In the middle, you have added a large paragraph of views on strength. Although these views are very logical, it is recommended to briefly mention them, or change the position and try to adjust them later. (The above is my personal opinion. If I accidentally offend you, I would like to say sorry here) All in all, this novel is the longest book I have read on Tomato. Although the writing style needs to be improved, many of the author's views inspired me and gave me a different understanding of the world. Looking forward to the progress of the work!

To be honest, when I see it now (Chapter 165), I think it's very good. It can be regarded as a combination of a happy novel and a love story. The emotional line is already very obvious. The heroine should be Lin. The protagonist has now grown into one of the strongest, and is basically invincible. The only thing that still has doubts about Uchiha Fugaku Mangekyo's ability is the prediction made to Obito about the power of Uchiha Fugaku Mangekyo. "In Obito-kun's future, the entire ninja world is shrouded in a black mist, and Obito-kun is the black mist itself. The only thing I can see is the pair of Sharingan eyes that I thought were the moon before." I think Obito will do something unfavorable to the ninja world in the future, but it should be only to the ninja world, not something like the disappearance of all the people in the ninja world. Obito wanted world peace before, and the way Obito wants to make the world peaceful is to make ninja ninjutsu into life and integrate ninja ninjutsu into life. That would also be equivalent to destroying the ninja world. From now on, there will be no more ninjas, only some people with special abilities. "And those Sharingan eyes that I thought were the moon before" should mean that the thoughts of ninjas have been deeply ingrained in people and cannot be changed, and Obito finally decided to activate a technique similar to the infinite moon reading, activate genjutsu, and change the thoughts of people all over the world.