Naruto************

It's so embarrassing. I've wanted to watch this kind of plot for a long time, but everyone else wrote about Obito's soul-piercing body and soul. Now someone finally writes about Obito himself [laughs] The train bound for spring starts [Like]

A new book with great potential, and the background details are well handled. It's even better than Sister Juan's. Let's see how it is handled later. I hope it won't end badly and give me a story that leaves no regrets. There are no more Kamui Tears in the ninja world, and Obito only has bluebells left. Ghana~ The new chapter is wrong. Maybe the author has run out of inspiration. You should just read his new book.

Very good, updated frequently. Obito's character design is very consistent with the image of Kenji before he was blackened. It is basically set according to the original work. There are fewer second settings, which is suitable for people like me [laughing] Eternal Thousand Hands Double Kamui Flying Thunder God Susana Obito is really invincible. If there is one in the mobile game, it will be all invincible frames plus defense and return to the diamond body. Do you like my pick-up and anti-reverse, zero frame blur plus mobile diamond body, backhand flying thunder god home. I'm tired of Flash Blur Gundam Dog [laughing evilly] Obito himself has no soul and soul. He likes the original work's bag-and-eat style. The settings are complete and fit the original work [laughter]

The details are abundant, the description of events is comprehensive, the logic is clear, and the characters of Lin, Obito, and Kakashi are well portrayed. It is very worth watching! ! !

Come on, author, I look forward to a happy ending. I hope to see Obito teach Naru and Sato. I hope Obito becomes Hokage. I want to witness the changes in Uchiha. I also want to see Obito and Rin Xiu become real fruits. I also want to see Obito and Kakashi become famous as Hokage in the third battle. There are still too many regrets. I hope to see a happy ending.

I think it's generally good, but there is one setting that is open to discussion. Obito is equivalent to having a precognitive dream for a year, dreaming about Lin's death and many things that happened later (at least around the fourth battle), and it can be clearly remembered, which is destined to change Obito's character, especially those that indicate these Maybe it's all true. Then his thinking can no longer be as innocent as the child before. He can be regarded as the mastermind behind the scenes. And with Obito fighting for Rin and the will of the Ten-Tails, he won't think clearly about many things and wait until the time comes. Anyway, I feel a little unclear on this point.

Firm Willed➕Will of Fire➕Lin is full of buffs. I want to see when the author will arrange Kaleidoscope. It's good to read. Good luck to the author.

Why is no one watching? Many people directly soul-transmit Obito or seize Obito's body just for the kaleidoscope of divine power. To be honest, I don't like this. I like to see the original Obito. Of course, if everyone likes to watch those soul-piercing or body-seizing ones, I actually don't have any objection. This author's writing is also very good. At least I didn't see any poisonous points. It seemed very sweet and comfortable to me. Anyway, I just hope someone will watch it.

The article is well written, and the plot is spot on. Moreover, the author himself has a deep understanding of the original work of Naruto. It can be seen from the large number of details in the article that the author himself has his own unique insights, thoughts on the original work, etc. What I like better is the author's thinking about strong people: comparing different strong people to the moon and the sun, and the idea that "strong people don't mind showing their weak side to others, only weak people will hide their weaknesses and pretend to be strong." The author's thoughts on peace can also inspire people, which is a good idea. However, I think the writing style still has a lot of room for improvement. The following are my suggestions (sorry, no malicious intent) 1. It is recommended not to change the viewing angle frequently. For example, one moment I write about Obito's own perspective, then suddenly I write about Lin's inner thoughts, and then I jump back to Obito's inner thoughts. This may make readers feel a little uncomfortable. It is recommended to use more pen and ink to write about Obito's perspective. You can try to describe other characters' inner thoughts from the side, such as their expressions, actions, etc. 2. Pay attention to the coherence of the story. In the process of narrating the story, the author has added a lot of explanations, which is a bit like writing an argumentative essay, especially in battles. In the middle, you have added a large paragraph of views on strength. Although these views are very logical, it is recommended to briefly mention them, or change the position and try to adjust them later. (The above is my personal opinion. If I accidentally offend you, I would like to say sorry here) All in all, this novel is the longest book I have read on Tomato. Although the writing style needs to be improved, many of the author's views inspired me and gave me a different understanding of the world. Looking forward to the progress of the work!

Okay, okay, the replica Naruto is here [laughs evilly] It stands to reason that all it takes to open the Sharingan is violent mental fluctuations, just like Sarana. It is difficult to open the kaleidoscope, but Sarana opened the kaleidoscope without killing anyone [eating melon]

To be honest, when I see it now (Chapter 165), I think it's very good. It can be regarded as a combination of a happy novel and a love story. The emotional line is already very obvious. The heroine should be Lin. The protagonist has now grown into one of the strongest, and is basically invincible. The only thing that still has doubts about Uchiha Fugaku Mangekyo's ability is the prediction made to Obito about the power of Uchiha Fugaku Mangekyo. "In Obito-kun's future, the entire ninja world is shrouded in a black mist, and Obito-kun is the black mist itself. The only thing I can see is the pair of Sharingan eyes that I thought were the moon before." I think Obito will do something unfavorable to the ninja world in the future, but it should be only to the ninja world, not something like the disappearance of all the people in the ninja world. Obito wanted world peace before, and the way Obito wants to make the world peaceful is to make ninja ninjutsu into life and integrate ninja ninjutsu into life. That would also be equivalent to destroying the ninja world. From now on, there will be no more ninjas, only some people with special abilities. "And those Sharingan eyes that I thought were the moon before" should mean that the thoughts of ninjas have been deeply ingrained in people and cannot be changed, and Obito finally decided to activate a technique similar to the infinite moon reading, activate genjutsu, and change the thoughts of people all over the world.

Very good, but an Obito without Kamui is not a strong-willed Obito, not an Obito with Kamui who can't hide his tears, and not my Toko brother! I hope a Sharingan author will be released soon.

This book fulfills all my fantasies about Obito and Lin's love Both the details and the psychological descriptions of both parties are very meticulous. The relationship is slowly advancing, unlike some mindless novels where Linwen just fixes some dirty things. Every plot modification has an explanation and is basically reasonable, no random changes. Looking forward to the author's subsequent writing [adoration][adoration][adoration]

While staying close to the original work, it uses reasonable secondary settings to complete the characters' personalities, creating a secondary novel that is different from other novels. Compared with the system literature, it is more original, and compared with the same type of literature, it does not appear rigid. According to my personal opinion, I think this book can be used as a side story or side story, and the response will definitely be better than the current Boruto. [Eat Melon] The writing style is diverse, including strategy, war, comedy, and warmth. This is incomparable to most Naruto fan fiction. What comes after Chapter 305? Wrong upload?

The writing is pretty good, but Obito without the Sharingan feels weird.

The author gave up his girlfriend for this book, and I recognize this will

This book is not the best I have ever seen, but it is one of my favorites.

Just do it if you have a goal. Author, I look forward to your work. I have also read a lot of Naruto stories, and few of them have a happy ending. I hope you are one of them [top post]. By the way, I personally like Obito's red night mask. I would be very grateful if you could insert it or write a side story [punch] [love]

The level of this novel is so exciting! Ba ba ba ba! The author is Oga, the Tendo Sea Tiger of the Naruto world! Strong and powerful! Ha! After seeing such a powerful novel, even I couldn't help but pull up my pants! !

Needless to say, I think many people have such a first love in their hearts. Even if they are not the best or the most perfect childhood sweethearts, they always fill our youth. Looking back on the past, we have regrets. Love is complicated and difficult to understand, and love is straightforward and simple.

Alas, why was this book blocked before I even finished reading it? ! ! ! [Cry]

7.8, Too low. Many Naruto fans are novice urban cool novels with a new skin. It's really beautiful, and it feels like this is Obito's native land.

Although this article is not very long, it is very attractive to me. It lacks many conspiracy theories and is more positive. I still like it.

I just gave two Naruto fanfics three stars, and now I give you five stars, which proves that this book is strong [eat melon] and the author, please come on, don't let the comments affect your thinking, write according to your own, I believe in you. Finally, for this book: it's good to read, I love to read it, and I'll read more [note]

Haokan [Cool] At present, this book seems to be quite smooth, much better than other stories about Obito's protagonist. In other Naruto stories, Obito all has the flavor of a skin-changing fairy, but this one completely reflects the local feeling, and is not abrupt at all. Moreover, many details written by the author are consistent with the original work. I support [I learned it] [I learned it]

It's well written, and the characters' personalities haven't been magically changed.

Why has it been removed from the shelves? I have forgotten the content of the novel [angry]

It's good to read, but what happened to the last dozen chapters? Did you publish the wrong novel?

"The Overbearing President Lin and his Beloved Wife Obito"

This is the monthly reading time, it's so beautiful [crying]