Is the Good-For-Nothing Apprentice the Protagonist? When I Saw the Barrage, My Luck Soared

The development of the plot is very interesting, but the protagonist group is weak. The protagonist can only complete the plot by himself every time, and it is difficult to defeat the deus ex machina. Others can easily get into trouble, and it is inconvenient, and they cannot enter the main line. Either the protagonist is strengthened and his plot attracts all kinds of celebrities, or the protagonist group becomes stronger and less passive as a whole, but it is probably in the later stage of the main line. I am looking forward to how it will develop.

Come on, author! The subject matter is very good, highly recommended. Personally, I wish I didn't write emotional lines (just a personal suggestion). For some of the beauties around the protagonist, I feel that the emotions are deliberately highlighted. Some of them have lived for hundreds of years. They rely too much on the protagonist, which makes their characters a bit single. However, the characterization of other characters in this book is very good. Each person has his or her own separate storyline. The character's personality and demeanor are well grasped. It is not described in just a few strokes, but it is detailed and appropriate, and the characters are more vivid. Looking back, the protagonist actually does not rely entirely on the audience's words to do things, but also has his own opinions. Although it is said that the protagonist raises those children of destiny just to pick up the mistakes, sometimes the protagonist is also very kind to them, after all, it reflects the responsibility of the master; finally, the depiction of the background of this world is also very vivid, and it is not limited to the children of destiny. Everyone has their own destiny. The depiction of the world of cultivating immortals here is like a cage, which should also be a foreshadowing. Moreover, with the history of Xia, Shang and Zhou dynasties, the ancestor Qin Shihuang ヽ(≧Д≦)ノ may also appear, and the upper realm is also mentioned, and the background board is also well processed. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes, so come on, please give me more chapters. I highly recommend reading this book!

Nice! Author update soon! It's rare to find a novel that only recruits male apprentices, it's so rare! I feel that Little Star is so cute. In the future, I can describe more about the beautiful relationship between the protagonist, his apprentice, and Little Star. Although there are a bit too many female characters, it's still bearable. I hope the protagonist's cultivation level can also improve a little faster. The overall feeling is good and worth recommending!

Remarkable. It's a very good idea, it made me laugh and cry, and I read it from the beginning to the end. It felt like it was a very good article, and it saved my book shortage. . . . Okay, I'm going to continue reading. [I'm about to cry]

Not enough, not enough at all. The protagonist's character gradually matures from incident to incident, and he gradually transforms from a "barrage executor" into a "flesh-and-blood person". His attitude towards the people around him is not to regard them as tools. He is very serious about feelings and will not blindly accept the feelings of others easily. It's just that the main character is weak. In fact, he's not weak, but he feels very weak. Even the minor characters can challenge the main character.

Come on, the author has worked hard!

The protagonist works for the audience...

It looks good, come on, if you want to be popular in quantity, come on fast.

The author's adventure writing and plot are good, but the entire fantasy skin combat system is really a bit broken. If you polish it, it might actually be a good and fascinating book.

The subject matter feels quite new, I hope the author can keep writing, and whether the second apprentice has been missing for too long [smile]

Are there any similar novels?

I think it's pretty good

It's beautiful. It's super beautiful.

So far it seems to be quite to my liking

The ideas are clear and the structure is complete, which is okay

Come on author, I think it looks great!

It's pretty good. The protagonist positions himself well. He's just a luck sucker. It would be nice if he interacted more with the barrage.