Pirates: Rat's Daily Life on the Grand Line

Like! I particularly like the portrayal of the heroine in it. I finally found Yang Zai Wen Zai to be innocent and cute without being pretentious! The straight line between Ming Ge and Shanks is also very good, and the rescue of Bai Tuan is not to solve the terrible top war, but to eliminate the crisis before the cruel war begins. I am currently watching the anime of Wano Country. Sunny Ace who can only live in memories, the beautiful Izo who died a little hastily, the tired Marco who has been losing all the time, and the wanton and flamboyant father Whitebeard in his youth - the original work is really bad for us, the white group! But in this book, the white group is really saved and we, the readers, are saved too. Except for the ending being a little rushed, it's perfect!

It doesn't matter, I will rate myself

Structure, framework, protagonist template. It is not solid, but it is well written. The expression is also very clear. The rhythm of the plot is also well grasped. The rhythm of the main plot and branch plot of the protagonist is a bit fast, but overall it is still very interesting. This is the second creation. There is no cliché plot and it follows the original text and writes a different plot. Although the writing style is very immature, every chapter is well polished and written. It doesn't feel stiff. If you look at it from a novice author's point of view, it can be said that the writing is very good.

Really, the interaction between Thies and the dads is really super warm, it's the level that I've always dreamed of having😭😭😭 If I had so many brothers who doted on me, how happy would I be? Damn it, come down and let me act in two episodes

The heroine is a jade rat, has a golden finger, and can switch abilities. The first chapter introduces the heroine in detail. She is very cute and strong. Her family loves her, and she will slowly open up her heart. She feels very safe. A warm, lively and healing daily life. The best way to enjoy family love is with white balls! CP Ace's emotional lines are also very sweet and relatively few. The system is also good. It doesn't show up much in the early stage. Later, when the heroine wants to change the plot, it also silently helps the heroine. The rest of the plot progresses a bit too fast, too little, and the ending is too early. Will there be more extra chapters?

[Please update] I like this book and hope it can be finished. Real life is very hard and I need this kind of sweet ('▽') text to summarize it. Come on, author (ง •_•)ง,

Very good-looking, very good-looking, Tisshu is super cute [shy], Marco is really super gentle and attentive, I like it, I Zang feels like a good wife and mother, hahahaha, I feel that Tiss will never be short of clothes in this life, nor will she be short of desserts, because Saatchi is always researching new desserts [shy] Ace is like a silly Erha, hehe, I like it.

Looks good, keep up the good work, recommend [send heartfelt]

The author's writing style is very good, and the plot is also very interesting. The heroine's voice can be heard by Bai Tuan at the beginning to promote the relationship between her and Bai Tuan. I love this. What's more important is that when the heroine and Bai Tuan become familiar with each other, Bai Tuan can no longer hear the heroine's voice. It will not be like in other books where the heroine's voice is always heard, causing a lot of unnecessary trouble. The author is great. (I am obsessed with the author, crazy about the author, and hit a big wall because of the author!)

Wow, it's so annoying. The writing is really in line with my taste. [Admiration] The daily writing is very warm, and the emotions between the characters are also very delicate. I can't stop reading it. It's a treasure of a good article. I look forward to the follow-up creation of the novel [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss]

Teece is so cute! To be honest, because I didn't want to watch CP, I didn't want to read any further at the beginning, but I came back to watch it again and finished it! CP writes so well that I receive it! Like! ε=ε=(ﾉ≧∇≦)ﾉI love the way the white group and the red group get along with the heroine! They are all so cute! [Adoration][Adoration] I don't know if there will be any original movies to watch in the future! Or something else, I haven't seen enough [Adoration]

So warm! My sister's character is really cute too! The relationship between Ace and his sister is also very loving. They feel like silly golden retrievers, and the progression of their relationship is also very normal. They are not the kind of people who fall in love at first sight, but they are gradual and beautiful!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking [Adoration] [Adoration] [Admiration] Come on [Send heart] [Send heart]

It's so beautiful and beautiful [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] Come on, the author~

It's quite good to watch. The plot is very novel, but in some places I feel that the details are not handled well enough. I could write more. I haven't seen enough yet. I feel that there are many places that could be well described, but now it's finished. I'm looking forward to the extra chapters.

It's so beautiful, so sweet, it's really perfect. I've seen so many Pirates fandoms that I've never seen anything so sweet. The characters and personalities are really real and relevant. I like it so much. Come on [love] [love] [like] [like] [like]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, I really like this book so much. It is rare to find such a book where the characters in the book match the image and temperament of the anime characters. The characters in the book fit the original work very well. Every time I read it, I feel like it is an anime extra of One Piece. The plot development is also very smooth. The protagonist of the book is not abrupt and seamless. The ending is a little rushed, and there are more. I hope to see more extras [Blowing Kisses]

Beautiful, so sweet The progress of falling in love is just right

This one is very beautiful and very warm. And the CP is Ace. It was very warm in the early stage. It was with the boat, but with the white group. I like this heroine very much. I like it very much.

For daily cookies, the knife can be ignored. Bai Tuan's warm daily life, CP Ace

Keep at it! ! ! My white ball, my white beard! Come on author

There must be more. Shushu is really cute. Everyone has to survive the war. I have been fooled by the anime knife.

Shushu is very cute, different stories, I like it very much, the author please update it quickly, looking forward to the follow-up stories! ! ! ! ! ! Shushu is so cute, I can't refuse! ! !

It's a very good book. I really like it. Thank you very much. Ahhhhhhh, I don't understand why the rating is only 6.8. It's so beautiful, there's no OOC at all, and the writing is great. It's simply a masterpiece! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's a very heartwarming novel. I personally think the control of the characters is quite accurate. It's something they would do.

The emotional line is so comfortable to watch, there is no plot of palace fighting, and the characters' personalities are well described. [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

Teacher, you must continue writing! ! ! ! The fried chicken is really good! ! ! And it's really very touching. I stayed up late to read it! It's so beautiful! ! ! ! ! Teacher, I want to lick you forever! ! ! ! [KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS]

I will dote on his Baituan family endlessly. Our Baituan is such a big family that deserves a perfect ending. We will be a family for life, Mina-san (இωஇ)

It's very beautiful, especially getting along with Ace is very sweet.

Not bad! Quite pretty! The cp is Ace, who saved everyone in the white group. The main text sacrificed himself in the end, but was resurrected in the extra chapter.