One Piece: A Mouse's Daily Life on the Grand Line

Like! I particularly like the portrayal of the heroine in it. I finally found Yang Zai Wen Zai to be innocent and cute without being pretentious! The straight line between Ming Ge and Shanks is also very good, and the rescue of Bai Tuan is not to solve the terrible top war, but to eliminate the crisis before the cruel war begins. I am currently watching the anime of Wano Country. Sunny Ace who can only live in memories, the beautiful Izo who died a little hastily, the tired Marco who has been losing all the time, and the wanton and flamboyant father Whitebeard in his youth - the original work is really bad for us, the white group! But in this book, the white group is really saved and we, the readers, are saved too. Except for the ending being a little rushed, it's perfect!

It doesn't matter, I will rate myself

Structure, framework, protagonist template. It is not solid, but it is well written. The expression is also very clear. The rhythm of the plot is also well grasped. The rhythm of the main plot and branch plot of the protagonist is a bit fast, but overall it is still very interesting. This is the second creation. There is no cliché plot and it follows the original text and writes a different plot. Although the writing style is very immature, every chapter is well polished and written. It doesn't feel stiff. If you look at it from a novice author's point of view, it can be said that the writing is very good.

Really, the interaction between Thies and the dads is really super warm, it's the level that I've always dreamed of having😭😭😭 If I had so many brothers who doted on me, how happy would I be? Damn it, come down and let me act in two episodes

The heroine is a jade rat, has a golden finger, and can switch abilities. The first chapter introduces the heroine in detail. She is very cute and strong. Her family loves her, and she will slowly open up her heart. She feels very safe. A warm, lively and healing daily life. The best way to enjoy family love is with white balls! CP Ace's emotional lines are also very sweet and relatively few. The system is also good. It doesn't show up much in the early stage. Later, when the heroine wants to change the plot, it also silently helps the heroine. The rest of the plot progresses a bit too fast, too little, and the ending is too early. Will there be more extra chapters?

Very good-looking, very good-looking, Tisshu is super cute 😳, Marco is really super gentle and attentive, I like it, I Zang feels like a good wife and mother, hahahaha, I feel that Tiss will never be short of clothes in this life, nor will she be short of desserts, because Saatchi is always researching new desserts 😳 Ace is like a silly Erha, hehe, I like it.

[Please update] I like this book and hope it can be finished. Real life is very hard and I need this kind of sweet ('▽') text to summarize it. Come on, author (ง •_•)ง,

Teece is so cute! To be honest, because I didn't want to watch CP, I didn't want to read any further at the beginning, but I came back to watch it again and finished it! CP writes so well that I receive it! Like! ε=ε=(ﾉ≧∇≦)ﾉI love the way the white group and the red group get along with the heroine! They are all so cute! 🥰🥰 I don't know if there will be any original movies to watch in the future! Or something else, I haven't seen enough 🥰

The author's writing style is very good, and the plot is also very interesting. The heroine's voice can be heard by Bai Tuan at the beginning to promote the relationship between her and Bai Tuan. I love this. What's more important is that when the heroine and Bai Tuan become familiar with each other, Bai Tuan can no longer hear the heroine's voice. It will not be like in other books where the heroine's voice is always heard, causing a lot of unnecessary trouble. The author is great. (I am obsessed with the author, crazy about the author, and hit a big wall because of the author!)

Wow, it's so annoying. The writing is really in line with my taste. [Admiration] The daily writing is very warm, and the emotions between the characters are also very delicate. I can't stop reading it. It's a treasure of a good article. I look forward to the follow-up creation of the novel 😘[Flowing Kiss]😘