Haunted Honkai: Star Rail? No Worries!
诡异崩铁？没事哒！
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 150k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
70Chapters
7Reads
18.7kReads · all time
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The writing is good, but there are a lot of problems. To be honest, I'm not very optimistic about it. After all, the plot progresses quickly, but the creation of weird monsters with a theme is essentially not good, and the setting is difficult. Books like yours basically end up unfinished after revealing the truth about the origins of monsters, and are difficult to compile. I have seen many people similar to yours who have this cycle. And yours is a bit fiddly and destined to be slow to heat up. I think there is a high probability that you won't be able to survive a hot day. In the final analysis, it is difficult to edit. As a slow-burning type, it is even more difficult if the updates are too slow and the content is insufficient. My suggestion is to stay away from Star Gods and those who are not easy to write settings. After the plot of Pino Corning, the best thing to write is the plot of the protagonist recalling Xianzhou and Yaliluo. After these two are written, it will be an original plot, or it will be unfinished. But it's not that I'm not optimistic about it, it's that I'm so awesome that it's hard for you to write about it. My suggestion is don't set it if you don't know how to set it. If you can't grasp the balance, just do Tai Chi. Anyway, I think your novel should not exceed 260 chapters. Come on, I really hope you can write it well. After all, there aren't many good books.
It's very beautiful and the logic is very smooth. If you have that feeling, readers can play TNO's "Burgundy Lullaby" in the background while listening.
Generally speaking, it's okay, but the protagonist is not as calm as an ordinary person. I suggest adding some settings.
It's good-looking. Both the protagonist and the villain's IQs are online, and both of them are very calm. I think it's both good-looking and the original one.
The protagonist's destructive methods are currently a bit too weak. I hope the author will not stop updating
It's okay, please give it a try, author^ω^
It's very beautiful, both the protagonist and the villain are too calm.
Very good, the taste is super strong!