Ancient War Hymn

The writing is quite good, but the name is a little bit intimidating. I really ran out of books to read, so I clicked in one by one to find this book. I hope the author can change the title to a better one.

Regarding the leakage of bronze technology, let me explain it. I have written several farming novels, and I know that the leakage of advanced technology is poisonous. Therefore, the leakage of bronze technology I wrote put great restrictions on those primitive people. Tell me your own understanding. Of course, everyone has their own opinion, and you don't have to accept it. After all, it is just a novel, and it all depends on personal preference. Making bronze is not that easy. The protagonist just wants to use other clans to improve the mineral map and accumulate resources. This is a carefully considered point. Without blowing equipment, stoves and charcoal (not ordinary wood, most primitive people did not understand that charcoal can provide higher temperatures), they would not be able to make qualified bronze weapons in a short time. There was no guidance on the development of bronze, which would allow them to ponder for many years, maybe hundreds of years. The status of weapons in cold weapon combat is not as good as armor (personal understanding). According to the setting in the novel, primitive people are slightly stronger than us ordinary people. In their mobile phones, stone tools and bone tools are actually about the same as inferior (emphasis on inferior) bronze. Bronze tools have the advantage of sharpness, but their toughness may not be as good as some bone tools. So what I think is that having armor is the most important thing. Armor technology and crossbow technology will never leak out, and the same goes for subsequent iron tools. Some of the suggestions are reasonable, and I like them all, but there are some parts that I won't modify. It's difficult for a long farming novel to be completely reasonable. (Occasionally I still borrow ideas from comments, hahaha) Finally, thank you for your comments and suggestions. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Very good idea. The author's writing style is not bad and he is relatively literate. He may be very good at writing, but at present, when it comes to writing novels, he is not yet perfect at handling character dialogue and detailed descriptions. However, it may also be because the author's writing style is different. Come on! The book is pretty good The author, I sincerely give you a suggestion. After you finish writing a chapter, don't post it yet. Then enrich the details of the characters' dialogue, demeanor, environment and other details. In this way, one chapter may become two chapters. This does not mean that the author should limit the number of words. I feel like this book has something to it. The author's storyline moves forward relatively quickly and smoothly, but it feels like it's not detailed enough. Because if there is less dialogue between characters, the characterization will not be vivid. If there is less description of the environment, the prehistoric world will not be filled in enough. If it were me, I could write 80 words out of the author's 30 words.

As an ancient farming novel, it is not just farming, fighting, and having fun. It gives people enough immersion. The protagonist is not too serious, has a good personality, neither a saint nor cruel. You can also add some knowledge.

When Chen Feng reached a certain age, he unexpectedly discovered that he would not grow old. In the past few years, after sadly sending away those around me, I became disheartened. Decided not to know the world and traveled around the mainland. Watch the silent development of mankind behind the scenes One day, he discovered a power within himself, which he named psionic power. Realizing the extraordinary power of this force, he decided to go out and lead mankind again. This time his goal was the stars and the sea. 40 Thousand years later, Chen Feng sat on the golden toilet and recalled the past

It's okay. The male protagonist belongs to the Long Aotian family and has no dog-licking behavior. These two points alone surpass 90% of Tomato's survival stories. I hope that all four of these women will be included. Don't make a mess of things.

I came here from the last book. This book is also good. I read the latest chapter in one go.

It's pretty good. I hope they don't add systems and so on in the future, but do more work, at least to make it look like modern times. The author still has some details. I want to develop it as soon as possible. Later, I can come up with currency and make transactions more transparent. I have laid the foundation for making a hand-operated generator and mastering electricity as soon as possible.

Well written. After reading the previous point, I judged that this is a good book. I think martial arts and technology can develop together, how about it? After all, this novel is a bit fantasy, and the system can be returned later [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Don't think that you are so good-looking, so elegant, so beautiful, with white teeth, red lips, and frowning makeup, like a water lotus, graceful and graceful, with natural fragrance, petite and exquisite, a peerless beauty, with picturesque features, delicate features, and beauty like a crown jewel. , Beautiful appearance, charming face, bright eyes and white teeth, thousands of beauties, alluring the city, a slender head and eyebrows, like flowers and jade, eyes cut like water, graceful and graceful, immortal posture and lost appearance, small family jasper, beautiful appearance and wisdom, young peach trees and plums, elegant manners, and hands like soft jade, it is very remarkable.

It's a very good original blog post. Let's continue with some extras. It's just that it's hard for the protagonist's children. His parents left when he was about 20 years old. After 30 years, the protagonist and Zhang came back without looking for their children. They started to develop again in the New World. The children are almost dead of old age and there are signs of meeting each other again [laughing and crying]

I just finished reading the latest one. It's a good primitive tribal story. It's also the best one I've ever seen. The plot description and character creation are very detailed, which left a deep impression on me. There is no cliché plot like pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger, the pig's feet appearing at the last moment, or the heroine being caught. The protagonist is also very kind to the people around him. He doesn't have any knives, except for a wind fox. It's a smooth journey. I can give it a high score of 9.5 Out of 10. It's very comfortable to watch!

It's a story worth reading, a wonderful life of farming in the wild, the author's imagination is quite broad, and the harem is also written with flesh and blood. I feel that the system itself should be a god. This setting can expand the background world view, but it is a pity that the author only focuses on the protagonist group itself. Personally, I am disgusted by system writing. It is really mindless and feels too inconsistent. The system here is not so much a system as a goddess, with both divinity and humanity. All in all, I finished reading it in one go. The plot is smooth and refreshing, and there is no fatigue period. It is worth giving it five stars. If you like to watch Taneda's works with content, you can give it a try.

The setting, plot, and characters are all very good. The last three aboriginal women abandoned them as they were told, and then came back and abandoned them again on this side of the earth. It's not considered toxic, it's considered... An open reunion? [Thinking] I don't really like this ending anyway. But overall it's a good book.

It looks really good, but it depends on how the author handles the relationship between the four heroines in the future. Although the conflicts between them are understandable, they cannot be left unaddressed forever, which can easily affect the readers' viewing. Among novels of the tomato type, I really haven't found anything better than the author's. Come on, author [Chigua]

The writing and rhythm were a bit awkward at the beginning, but the author improved a lot later on, and the rhythm and writing became smoother. The development of the tribe described is also very rhythmic, and it is very interesting to watch the tribe grow a little bit. However, the heroines have too few roles. Although they have their own roles, they hardly have much personal plot. However, people who don't value this aspect and prefer farming stories seem to be able to accept it. All in all it feels pretty good.

This book is quite good. The only flaw is that there are some problems with the detailed description, but it does not affect the overall excellence. Recommended for readers who like farming articles, especially original farming articles. But it is not recommended for those who read cool articles.

I think it's pretty good. It's relatively good among novels about primitive tribes, at least better than half of the novels in the Tomato genre. Men have Diudiu plug-ins, but it is understandable. In fact, I feel that this plug-in is a bit weak. After all, it is just that the physical fitness has reached the limit of human beings. The pace is a bit fast for me. It feels like a thousand years of development are completed in a few years. I don't think there's anything wrong with having a harem. In primitive society, it's a good thing for a leader to marry more and have more children.

This is the new original novel published on Tomato. Although it seemed a little awkward at the beginning, it became more enjoyable in the later stages. The most important thing is that it is different from other translations of "I am not a primitive" by Jie Yu 2. This one is more original and can satisfy the readers' curiosity.

A relatively good original article [face covering], but unfortunately it is too niche, but I hope the author can insist on finishing it. After all, no matter whether the author writes a book or not, it is a good memory and experience when I think about it.

So, is there really no system? [What] Mononitrate, disulfide, charcoal, and some sugar. These are also easy to find in the primitive world. The first one is when you go to the toilet, just scrape off the white one on the curtain wall at the back. If it's disulfuric acid. In ancient times, people used to make elixirs. Just use green vitriol as the raw material and distill it. Isn't it done? Just cook it. I don't need to talk about charcoal. The bonfire you light every day is all black. I feel like I don't need sugar [eat melon]

This is the first book to give as a gift, so cheers! Stick to your own style and don't be fooled by others.

To evaluate it objectively, I have read many articles about traveling through ancient times. I think it's still okay. Normal performance is very stable. Be optimistic about the author. [Laughing][laughing]

I have read almost 200 chapters, and the overall evaluation is average. To this day, I still don't know where the tribe is on the map. The description of the environment is basically 0. The population of the tribe has always been unknown, and I basically don't understand how it will develop. Only the subject matter and setting are what I like. 90% Of the writing techniques are in the humanities, and there is basically nothing else. It is either a quick brushstroke, either in the war, on the way to the war, or humanistic descriptions. I don't know if it's because I didn't look carefully, but I don't know how many people there are in the tribe, how many men, how many women, how many children, and how many combat capabilities there are. It seems like there is no [thinking] When I saw someone commenting on the previous book, I realized that I had also read Chapter 18 of the previous book... And I finally understood why I couldn't stand it anymore. Tribal warfare, development, written in the romance details genre. I can't say there's anything wrong with it, I can only say that it's weird sometimes. Change the city, it will definitely have more than 8.1 Rating. Tomato 8.1 Can only be said to be a little better than the worst, and the medium threshold is above 8.6

There's nothing poisonous about it, but nothing exciting about it either. The palace fight between the four women is very annoying. It's more like a fantasy documentary than a time-travel novel.

It's not bad, I can keep watching it, it's interesting, the star is satisfaction [laughter] Personal opinion, for reference only. When I first started reading, the book only had more than a hundred chapters, and after reading a little bit, I kept reading. The progress of this evaluation is over one hundred chapters I have only had a brief exposure to wilderness survival, so this is my first time coming into contact with this type of novel. In fact, I can only find this book because of the school beauty entry () The writing style and details are good, and it feels a bit low-level, but the use of finding various necessities and items is well written. Although I don't know whether the functions of medicines and herbs that are not common in life are correct. The author's sense of proportion is quite good, and there is no brainlessness. The development and progress seem to be relatively fast but still step by step. It is not a humorous article. As mentioned before, it is interesting and can be read. A few points that I personally like: Love (Sexy), Fighting (Violence) If you read this book, the protagonist has kidnapped the heroine here, do they still have a choice? [Sneaky smile] [Sneaky smile] [Sneaky smile] The heroines have distinct personalities and are all described, and Sese is more of a help to the protagonist. I feel like I need to criticize the combat aspect. The protagonist's various methods of dealing with beasts are okay, but the training team seems to have developed a little too fast. I don't know if the author accidentally wrote that he could only write that the enemy can bring various beasts to deal with the protagonist's tribe with overwhelming combat power, or I feel that the combat power of the various beasts in the latter part is a bit high, and it is inconvenient to develop without mentioning the protagonist's combat power. There will probably be intelligent enemies later on, so let's wait and see without going into details. I wrote a system at the beginning, which should be purely an explanation of time travel. Some people say it is poisonous. Whether it is poisonous or not depends on the follow-up.

I stayed up all night reading it, and I always have regrets when I say goodbye. Overall, it's a good article.

Good book. I remember I also read a book about primitive tribes before. They were quite good.

I hope the male and female protagonists have immortality settings. Decades are too short. Combat power is a bit fantasy. I can only say that there are powerful creatures and powerful people outside the earth.

The creativity is good, and overall it's very good. Tu Teng Warrior is a bit lame, so I'll give it four stars.