Dressed as Daiyu's Brother, the Whole Red House Is Taking CP

It's really interesting to see two male protagonists in the same genre, and the author's writing style is also good. It's not the kind of writing that has no logic at all. It can be regarded as a dream come true for me. After all, when I watched Red Mansions, I wanted to go back in time and tear those people apart. I was left to favor Sister Lin, especially Jia Baoyu, which annoyed me to death.

The author writes well. Everyone's characters are very good. The plot is interesting, novel and not boring. The author should update it quickly [smirk][laugh][shy][shy] When did those two people surnamed Zhao go offline? I was so upset. I don't understand what fun the protagonist has in keeping those two people... ╮(. ❛ ᴗ ❛.)╭ Those two people surnamed Zhao are a bit disgusting.

Very very beautiful! I wanted to comment after reading the first chapter but endured it for more than thirty minutes. Come and see everyone! Woohoo, I hope it becomes popular and the author can update 20 chapters a day. I'll keep my original review, but I just can't stand it anymore. The protagonist should stay in the world of the first half and be sweet.

I feel like the plot is pretty good... It just jumps from ancient times to zombies, and then travels together to modern times. [Eating Melon] The connection between the zombies in the middle is a bit strange... I can only say that the elements are quite mixed. I feel that the image of Jia Baoyu and that guy named... Jia Yuanchun are a bit broken again, (if you are advised to read with caution in the original work), but I have to say that the theme of the Red Mansion is quite small, very novel... Then the young couple is really sweet~[Shy] There are a lot of cars (with a look of exhaust), I really like Sister Feng and the eldest brother~The family relationship is really happy. You can give it a try (the author continues to work hard [sending heartfelt wishes])

Chengyu has an arrogant temper and is smart, Xuanzheng is slimy, loyal and cute, she is really easy to spoil, she has a lot of dog food, full of candies, she is crazy! They are really going in both directions: Lin Chengyu felt that her metaphor was correct. Xuan Zheng really looked like a big dog. Too clingy. According to Lin Chengyu's Xuanzheng breeding manual, it is necessary to beat when it is time to beat, and when it is time to smooth the hair, it is necessary to smooth the hair. Xuan Zheng was very good at this moment, and Lin Chengyu followed his hair naturally. Xuan Zheng felt happy. In fact, his hand didn't hurt at all, and that little force seemed to him like a tickle. But this cannot be said, nor can it be shown. Be tough when you should be tough, and be soft when you should be soft. Of course, you should act like a baby when you should. Although Lin Chengyu didn't say it, Xuan Zheng knew that he was soft-hearted and not strong-willed, and he had no resistance to his own face. Although Xuan Zheng is a grown man and doesn't care about looks, little bastards like him, so he can always take advantage of this. This is Xuan Zheng's Lin Chengyu breeding manual.

It's very good, please give the author a big boost [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

So sweet, really sweet, Xuan Z really dotes on Cheng Y, and is obedient. When two cruel characters come together, they can really have a double power. The cultivation style is really sweet, and they change their faces very quickly. Daiyu and Minma are also very kind and loving to Chengyu. The emperor really likes this younger brother Xuan Z. He loves him very much and cares about his brother's safety. Gao Tian performs "The Overbearing Prince's Little Wife" Jia Mu also really understands

Very beautiful, very beautiful. It's just that after I saw more than 300 pictures, I no longer wanted to read any more. Where did the zombies come from? I can't complain anymore, it's just edible with the tail removed.

It's okay, it's quite thought-provoking, and many places are really strenuous. There are also some highlights, such as Zhao Yurou. What I see is that she appears from the time she appears to 300 chapters later. She is a very scheming character. She is relatively successful in shaping, but she is not likeable.

It's good-looking, the subject matter is novel, and it's very interesting. Xuan Zheng and Cheng Yu's CP is really good. I really love this kind of bamboo horse. Dai Yu is also very good, and her martial arts practice is really great! It has always been my first choice among Red Mansions fans. After reading it, I felt that the others were not very interesting and boring.

Overall, it's pretty good. It incorporates a lot of materials and is relatively novel. At first, I came here for the Red Mansions fandom. The content in the world of Red Mansions was good, and then it became apocalyptic. But it just so happens that I quite like apocalyptic novels, but there are not many apocalyptic content, so I went back to the real world. The first 300 or so chapters are about the Red Mansion fandom, and it is a wise decision not to let Baoyu and Daiyu be together. The dozens of chapters describing the end of the world should be to pave the way for returning to the real world. In fact, they don't need to be written. The last 100 or so chapters are about the real world, and the plot in the real world is relatively slow. There are too many cannon fodder male supporting characters. Huan Xuanzang, in fact, if there is not much to write, you can just end it, just write a side story together. There is no need to write so many times that the male supporting actor likes the protagonist. It is a bit too wordy and repetitive [Thinking] But overall it is worthy of five stars. It is one of the few longer novels on Tomato that I can finish reading. [Praise]

Although I feel a bit frustrated in some places, it is good to chat with young lovers. After more than 300 chapters, Mrs. Wang was offline and suddenly a zombie king came. It felt so disconnected, so I could just continue to sweetly write about Chengyu and Xuanzheng's daily interactions with their families.

(Personal thoughts, don't criticize randomly): The storyline is very interesting and the protagonist is well portrayed. But the teacher, the villain feels very one-sided, for example: Mrs. Wang, this character makes me feel like my head is full of water. Only Jia Baoyu is the best in the world. Whoever blocks her limelight is targeted at her, and she is very jealous. She doesn't even seem to be worthy of stupidity in doing things, and the comment of stupidity feels like a compliment to her. In short, teacher, everyone has many sides. When you created the villain, you only talked about how he would hinder and contrast with the protagonist. But at the same time, the villain is like a code, without a sense of three-dimensionality and unable to allow readers to immerse themselves in the character. So I think you can explain it from foreshadowing, side description, life background, and social background, so that people can understand the reason why he did what he did and can reflect on it, instead of being confused and unable to understand. Overall, I still like your book very much - it is my first book into the "Dream of Red Mansions" fan fiction! The emotional lines of the protagonists are also very exciting. (By the way, every time I see what Mrs. Wang does, my blood pressure goes up)

Dream of Red Mansions fanficArchive The author's writing style is quite interesting. Lin Chengyu x Xuan Zheng, Emma, tsundere and little bitch? X Gentle and loyal dog? The two of them get along so sweetly, they are so doting [face covering] [face covering]

It's okay, I prefer the first part of Red Mansions World View. Because Lin Chengyu has special powers, he will behave in some ways that may be very wanton in the eyes of others. They may think that he is arrogant and arrogant, and that he is a little unclear about form. But I personally feel that he may be arrogant and arrogant, but he should still have the confidence given by himself. Later, in modern times, it became a bit more "coquettish", so babies who can't accept it should be careful. Also, you may not see the protagonist for a long time in some chapters. Sometimes you may feel that the things you encounter are very disconnected from their identity, which you think is outrageous. All in all, there are shortcomings, but it's not bad. And the most important point is that the world view of Red Mansions ends with a series of zombies. I personally don't like watching this kind of thing very much. If you feel the same way, you can jump directly to modern times.

The author's writing style is very good, and the writing is also very beautiful. Who knows? When I first read the title, I didn't expect Dream of Red Mansions. I thought it was about being reborn in a brothel. When I read the introduction, I was very confused. How did he level up and fight monsters in the brothel (this is just an adjective). When I read the text, I was thinking about why my head didn't turn around. I was a little embarrassed [awkward laugh] [awkward laugh] This article written by the author is really good. I want to read it, love to read it, like to read it [please update]

It's so beautiful. Xuan Zheng also loves Lin Chengyu so much. It's so cool. I haven't seen such good writing in a long time.

Super, super, invincible and beautiful! ! ! It was the first time I saw the theme of "Enter the Red Mansion", and I was really shocked. I love Chengyu, Xuanzheng and Daiyu so much. [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

In summary, it's okay, but the author's writing style is a little immature, which is more in line with the tone of the original work, and the characters are a bit broken. However, the description of the protagonists is very good, and it's very easy to fight, and there are also some laughs. It is recommended not to use the words "thinking" too much, and not to have so many elements. You can try to focus on describing the protagonists when they get along, and don't mention the villain in one stroke.

Overall, it's okay. It's pretty good. It's a story about zombies with superpowers and modern wealthy families. The author is very bold in writing these different elements. The writing is very interesting, the plot is not confusing, and the writing is relaxed and sweet. I really like watching the main characters get along with each other, it's very sweet and enjoyable. There will be many chapters that will be moved to other characters later on.

It's very beautiful. Come on, don't stop updating! (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

It looks so good, it makes me so happy to see it! I really like the characters of Cheng Yu and Wang Ye. It's so poignant. I like it so much! Please give me more updates! ! ! Great update! I can't wait for you, Dada! I will always follow you Dada! I rarely insist on reading serialized articles. In fact, I have several serialized articles on my bookshelf that I don't bother to read anymore, but! I will always follow you!

Nice author, please publish others soon.

If nothing else, this book is beyond my expectation. There are not so many tone of voice and convoluted words in the original Dream of Red Mansions, and Lin Daiyu is not so squeamish. I prefer the emotional scenes between the two male protagonists, and I guess there will be more commotion after the two are exposed.

So pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty [Sending Hearts]

Very beautiful, very tasty, very sweet [like], I hope there will be more updates [blowing kiss]

The emotional description is quite good, just like a long and steady flow, and the way of communication between the two protagonists is also very good. Anyway, it is quite interesting. And then when I tear up Mrs. Wang with my hands, I quite like it anyway.

It can be seen that the author writes seriously and his writing style is very good; you can feel it after reading about 20 chapters! [Like][Like][Like] But when it comes to the latter part, I think the style is strange; it's a little different from the title. Overall, I can only give it 3 stars; the first part is very well written, so I can give it 5 stars! [Cover face]

Nice character design, I like it very much

It's so beautiful, and I'm really looking forward to their story when they grow up [laughs][laughs]