The Gloomy and Crazy Criticizing Master Is Salivating over Me

The naughty and unconfident and cowardly Mian'er, the arrogant and possessive powerful snake, from beginning to end, Xiao Mian'er is the wife that Sheng Qing brought back by himself, and she belongs to Sheng Qing inside and out. Xiao Mian'er is simply a model of Ningba type lovers. This kind of stubborn person who is not sure about the other person's sincerity just meets a crazy and possessive beautiful snake who loves her enough. They achieve each other's achievements and redeem each other. Sheng Qing changes Xiao Mian'er's will. The ending of death, personally cultivated her into a strong person, loved Yu Mian unconditionally, and filled Xiao Mian'er's twisted heart with the love that overflowed from her head. Xiao Mian'er also used her kindness and innocence to influence Sheng Qing. It's all sugar and no knife. I have tried it for you. The plot is not boring at all and you will not feel bored.

Help, I really like this book. I haven't seen such a good book for a long time, but I really can't read it [crying]. Then I would like to express a small opinion: I can see that the author's vocabulary is very rich, but when describing a paragraph, he adds too many words with the same meaning and seems to be very connotative (I can't think of how to describe it, maybe this is the meaning), and it feels a little cumbersome. It just looks very gorgeous but seems to be a little bit inexpressive (no malice, just inner thoughts, the author's writing is really great and I like it very much) [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] Keep up the good work! It's really not enough. I really like the characters of the two heroines, they totally hit me! Master, she really dotes on me so much that I cry to death

The structure is clear, the writing is very good, and the characters are highlighted. Little Snake will not let his apprentice be bullied at all.

I have seen more than 20 pictures, they are very beautiful and sweet. Anyway, they are very, very beautiful [like] [laughing]

It's been a long time since I've seen an author with such good writing skills. I've seen most of the soul-traveling movies that are either monotonous or boring or the system is too close to see the protagonist's growth at all. But this step really allowed me to see the growth of Xiao Mian'er from the beginning to the fear and hesitation to the decisiveness at the end. The fight scenes are definitely written with heart, and the emotional line will not be skipped or too little. The foreshadowing and even the name of the heroine are very particular and will not be forgotten or skipped. This is an author who is really filling in the holes. Finally, I would like to ask the author to give me a big thank you. It's rare to eat too much and it's rare to eat fine rice. I can't bear to part with it. @RabbitFang

I won't watch it for three or four times. I have the completion syndrome and would rather endure the sadness and watch it. Friends who like the yandere x white rabbit character design must come and beg you. The plot and writing are particularly good, and there are no condescending characters or embarrassing plots. , All the emotional lines are extremely delicate, to the extent that you will remember and fall in love with everyone crazily, Mian Mian is promoted to the throne like porcelain moon, Qiong Fu Qingling Fu Shen Xuanxuan Wei Yan clan leader the little old man Feng Ling Zhang Feng Miao Jun Yin Li Lin Xiaohe Ning Yue (Fu Zhu and the dead dog are together) I don't particularly love them...), I don't know how to describe how moved I am by them. I would cry and eat the chaff that is too fine. Last night, I dreamed about someone who could take me into the Wanxian Sect... I know that the characters will continue to live a happy life in the future. But I really can't bear to part with it. To prevent me from crying, I will keep reading the Legend of the Snake... Anyway, I just recommend and recommend again and again. It would be nice to have a physical book. I will definitely buy many copies [crying] [crying] [crying] [love] [love] [love]

The characters here are whether the main CP is the arrogant and sinister Mo She Shengqing and the brave and serious Yu Mian, or the deputy CPs Yiguan and Lingfu, who are also Shuxiangxiang, or the eldest sister Gu Ruci who is like an immortal, as well as the tiger-headed Miao Jun, the righteous duo Yin Lin and Lin Xiaohe, the ambitious and lucky couple Zi Ning Yue, the funny old boy and the leader of the Immortal Sect, etc... There are so many perfect characters that I like every one of them. Every character who appears has his or her own story, thoughts, and actions. Every character is delicate, lively, and elegant, and the supporting characters will not be buried or used to complement the protagonist. The storyline is clear and not confusing. The author uses her rich literary talent to make each character in her novel memorable and likeable in different forms. The author reminded me of two poems "A gentleman's writing is like a shining star, with long meanings between the lines. A wonderful pen creates beautiful flowers and beautiful calligraphy, and a brilliant talent leaves a lasting fragrance." "My heart is filled with joy when I read your excellent works, and your literary talent is soaring. It's like the spring breeze blowing over the sea of ​​mind, and the wonderful sentences entering the heart. " This is my second favorite novel about cultivating immortals. I hope the author will be in good health forever and then he can finish writing this novel slowly and seriously. The author's writing is really good! ! ! But the body comes first! At that time, people did not know Yu Xixin's joy, and they would be called young people who took leisure time to study. May you not worry about the journey of thousands of miles, and the wind will come naturally! The previous emotional line, whether it is the main CP or the deputy CP, needs to be carefully scrutinized by the author. The author writes it very carefully, so don't worry, you will understand it later. Depend on! ! ! It's really good-looking and brilliant. You should all go and take a look. The writing is very good! The plot is really better than many books. It is not watery and the ending is not abrupt. It will not end immediately just because the story line is over. It is really good-looking! ! !

Although this book is serialized, it is a novel that people can follow. The author's writing style is very good and the characters are very vivid. I especially like the interaction between the heroine and the master. It is really worth reading one chapter at a time. As long as you don't supervise it, it is a high-quality novel.

OMG, I haven't seen such a good-looking book in a long time! Both heroines have mouths, it feels so good, and the author's description is the most literate (?) Among the online articles I have read recently. The writing is smooth and natural, the emotions are just right, and they are not brainless. I like the two heroines so much. They redeem each other... They are both lonely people. After getting to know each other, they warm each other up and pull each other out of the abyss of endless loneliness... How can they not mean that each other has found the meaning of living well? Author update soon! ! ! And the author is really good at writing about lingering and kissing... Is there any channel through which I can make an appointment... Good God...

With his excellent writing style and profound literary skills, the author successfully presents a world full of fantasy and reality to readers. Every page seems to be telling a touching story, and every word is beating the pulse of life. First of all, the author's writing style is extremely beautiful, delicate and contagious. She is good at depicting complex emotions and scenes in concise and vivid language. The author also shows extraordinary talent in character creation. Each character has its own unique personality and destiny, and their joys, sorrows, joys, loves, and hatreds are all portrayed incisively and vividly. Especially the description of Shengqing allows people to truly understand that her character is three-dimensional and multi-faceted. She has a desire to protect her apprentices, but also a desire to destroy, and also possessive. These emotions are intertwined, complex but not contradictory, and real. Human emotions are complex and impenetrable. This is well reflected in Shengqing (she has a naughty nature, but people will be soft-hearted for her. Isn't this a preference? What is it if it's not a preference?)

I didn't expect it, I didn't expect it. I thought it was just an ordinary sweet pet novel, but the setting and system of cultivating immortals are very reasonable. I have read too many articles about cultivating immortals. It is said that cultivating immortals is actually no different from martial arts. Fighting is all about fists and kicks, and there are no talisman formations, spells, or immortal skills. The details are also on point, making it a pleasure to watch. I read it all the way from the first chapter, and I felt so happy! It's just that the tie was a bit disruptive. This is the most reasonable one about immortality among the immortality novels I have been following recently. I can't help but want to see Yu Mian become stronger and stronger. Even the master just wants to make her a beautiful snake vase.

Small flaws at the moment: ① The mixture of ancient style writing and modern buzzwords is a bit fragmented; ②Sometimes the words are piled up with gorgeous words, which seems rather cumbersome. I hope it will be described appropriately in appropriate places; But the flaws are not hidden, the character design is very cool, and the shaping is successful. Except for the "sometimes" in the second point above, the descriptions in many places are great, and it feels like there is a lot of foreshadowing. If the rest of the article is filled with holes, then this is a well-structured and fascinating article. Come on author! [Love] Personal opinion

Such fine chaff, such an immortal product, taste it carefully. As for the writing style, there is nothing to say. In our lower realm, it is the pinnacle of transcending tribulation. The love story between Shengqing and Yu Cangtang gave me an intoxicating feeling. Each character's personality was fully depicted, and the plot was well controlled. A little bit, it felt like the pace was a bit fast in the Demon King's position. The love between Shengqing and Yumian is pure and beautiful. In times of crisis, they both wish to trade themselves for each other to survive. How many such pure feelings can we see in the 21st century? When I saw the word "End", my heart became empty. The story belonging to Shengqing and Yu Mian was over, but you, my friend, your life will continue. I also hope that everyone can meet their own Shengqing or Yumian as soon as possible. I also wish Rabbit more and more success in the future! It's best to give more benefits, make it look good, and love to watch it.

It is a very delicate and exquisite female channel about cultivating immortals, but it does not have the vulgar plot of ordinary female channels. For example, fighting relies on words rather than cultivation, and high cultivation can be muttered by low cultivation. It's a fine product that you can watch quietly, and it's not the cliché of male videos where you have to play with the protagonist and slap the protagonist in the face while wearing a book. I like it.

The writing style is very good, especially in this platform where the writing style of novels is either down-to-earth or down-to-earth (really, the books in this platform are either too down-to-earth or pure from the underworld, and I don't know if it's to take care of younger readers. It's very! Very! Very white, just that kind of formal. Pure vernacular that ordinary people can never speak, for fear of being incomprehensible), the characters are set up very well, and the emotional changes are in place. The only slight problem is that the pace is rather slow, but the daily style is also very good, so it is not obvious. Overall, it is a great article so far. Except for the lack of good rhythm control, everything else is great, especially the character design, which is very complete, but it seems to be about to be shot. Also, I hate serialization.

It's very beautiful, the setting is very touching, and it's hard not to love the crazy criticizing Beauty Master. The writing is also good, so go for the author!

The origin of the umbrella is emotional at first glance. There is no choice but to be relaxed and elegant. Talk about her being uncertain, laugh at her and make her tremble. Without wind and rain, it has been stained with blood for a long time. The grass fireflies are brighter than the moon, and the silver glow illuminates the clear night. The remaining heart desires warmth, and the ice body gradually melts. Afraid of gossip, afraid of change. In the past life and this life, the sleeping points must be the same. Who dares to tell the right and wrong of His Holiness, and who dares to mess up the dream of a real person? Hanging colors and wearing red, heaven and earth celebrate together. After all the hard work, the couple finally got married. I pity you for your racial hatred, and for your wandering and loneliness. I admire you for your brilliance and magnanimity, and I admire you for being able to dominate the crowd. Demons disappear and immortals flourish, peace and prosperity prevail. Long live a thousand years, peace and happiness.

It's very good. The writing is good. I hope the author will add a thousand more paintings!!!! It's nice to read, and it's different from the common titles. The author's writing is good, and the characters and emotions are also good. The plot is generally reasonable. The theme is not complicated but everything that needs to be described is written. Shengqing and Yumian don't have to force the appearance of work in order to advance the characters' emotions, as is often the case in novels of the same type. Ye Saccharin, the two people changed from the beginning of Shengqing's lust for Yu Mian and Yu Mian's uneasiness when she suddenly entered a strange environment to changing each other and finally becoming indistinguishable from each other. For me, it is worth watching and I feel lucky to see this good work on the home page. Cheers to the author [Like][Like][Like][Like]

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It's very beautiful, but the heroine is too kind. I hope the author can see it (^_-)

This is really a well-written article. There were no surprises at all. Shengqing was calm despite his crazy comments and had never done anything outrageous to Mian'er. The love for Mian'er is better than anything, but it is not doting. It is to help the partner grow up quickly and healthily into a strong person in his own right. Yu Mian, on the other hand, is smart and witty, has unlimited tolerance for her partners, and treats Sheng Qing with heartache and distress, tenderness and tenderness. The characters of Fu CP, Senior Sister and others are also well created. The author's various settings of the world of immortality in the book are also very innovative, and I kept reading for more than two hundred days. Moreover, Rabbit has buried a lot of holes in the article, written a lot of small details and foreshadowings, and the writing style is delicate, filling in all the holes one by one, making the article perfect. There have been so many chapters, and the author's writing style has never let me down. People like me who are extremely picky about writing are very impressed (I will look at the descriptions of various scenes in the article when I am not inspired to write, which is very useful [shy]). Here, I would like to thank Rabbit for never stopping updating in the past year, working diligently, and continuing to contribute happiness to readers. I will read every work of Rabbit carefully. I also wish the rabbit a happy new year and good health! ! ! In the new year, everything you get is what you want (please ask Rabbit to write a copy of the CP car, please [I'm about to cry]). I hope this article can be written longer, and longer... (I can imagine that I will burst into tears on the day it is finished) Finally, Rabbit, I love you [blowing kiss], dedicating the first long comment in my life to Rabbit [love]

This book is a very fluent writing style overall. The source and explanation of the cultivation of immortality are very accurate. I reasonably suspect that the author is a medical student. He is very familiar and experienced in writing. The logic is also very smooth. There are many Wanxing collections in Jinjiang. I think the writing is not as good as this article. Moreover, the author updates very quickly. I haven't seen such a diligent author for a long time (touched). (But I have a question: What did the author think when he set up this world of cultivating immortals? What a detailed setting. When I went to Jinjiang to read those articles about cultivating immortals, I would not go into such details at all. The author's detailed settings seem to make the world of cultivating immortals really unfold before your eyes. It's so amazing. My family is coming to see it. Don't miss it if you pass by. If you like yandere and crazy criticism, you must come)

It's really good and beautiful. I feel like there are a lot of personal details in it. For example, I really like one of them, the Social Fear Lord. He has two personalities in his body, one is fearful and timid, and the other is like a coquettish poisonous snake. , When the story about Sheng Qing and himself being jealous was written so wonderfully, Xiao Mian'er was also very good, they were destined to fall in love, but the author said that he wanted to write about a knife, and he didn't know what the knife would look like, which made him a little scared, but the author wrote, even if he writes about a knife, I feel that the writing is probably the best one. It is really the best article I have ever read in Tomato. Why is it only five stars? Isn't it good enough?

It's really good to read, and the plot is also very good. The author perfectly presents Shengqing's deep affection and single-mindedness. I like the character of Shengqing very much. In the author's writing, Yu Mian perfectly interprets a person who is calm and smart in facing difficulties, and will try to follow the footsteps of his lover. To be honest, this is my first time reviewing a book. In short, this book is worth reading. People who like dual heroines can read it. Of course, friends who like other types of friends can also read it. Anyway, hurry up! It's not a loss if you invest in shares [Send my heart] [Send my heart]

It's very interesting. There are some sentences describing characters in the book, and the sentences are also very good. Why is the book rated so low? I think 9 points is not an exaggeration. The master in the book is also very nice, very cute [admirable], very sweet, not bad. I commented after reading the existing chapters of this book.

It's super good. Damn, there's nothing wrong with it except that it's a bit long and easy to forget about the plot. There are 520 chapters in total and it's also very romantic. I feel that Mr. Rabbit is a very gentle person, because usually based on his character design experience, he will definitely be very sadistic, but Mr. Rabbit's writing is so good that it makes me feel sour but not uncomfortable. The writing is also very good, I feel very knowledgeable, and the world view and other settings are also very good. In short, it is a great and great article.

Oh my gosh, it's so beautiful. It deserves a rating of 9.6. It turns out that I read this book a long time ago, but I didn't continue reading it, and accidentally read it again and fell in love with the author. Didn't you really experience it yourself? You write so well, you're dying. Please tell me how good you are in Chinese. There are so many idioms and words. Oh my God. This is the most literary one I have ever seen. I feel like the others are not as good as you, and it has a strong sense of empathy. Who knows my family? It's really easy to be moved and empathize. You are the second best, right? The first one is the one who is abusive. The one I watched that was abusive, you made me cry first. [Blow kiss] I had a dream. In the dream, you wiped away my tears and said that you had not cherished me well in the past. Your tone was full of guilt. I couldn't stop crying in the dream, but the tears became more and more wet. Your fingertips were wet, and my cheeks were wet. In a daze, I raised my hand to touch you, but I was about to touch you with my fingertips. At that moment, the face disappeared like smoke. I woke up with a start and sat up suddenly, with tears still on my face. It was still dark, and the room was wrapped in a thick dark color. It was so quiet that I could only hear my own panicked heartbeat. I stared at the ceiling. Your appearance and your words filled with guilt echoed over and over again in the darkness. Let go, I wish this dream could be longer. It tastes like an illusion. You are back by my side, wrapping me gently with your tenderness. But now I am alone. The empty room is filled with longing and loneliness, making it difficult to breathe. I curl up and shrink deep into the quilt, hoping to find my way back. The illusory temperature in the dream only touched a coldness. Memories came flooding back at this moment. The streets we walked together, the dusk we watched, those arguments, tears and laughter became sharp fragments, piercing the softest place in my heart. It turns out that after so long, I have never let go of you. [Almost crying]

The author's writing style is very unique. I have never seen anything like this before. Every plot is grasped just right. If it were longer, it would be wordy, if it was shorter, it would be too brief, and the emotional line is also great! The development is quite natural. As the same saying goes, if you write deeply, it will be too boring. If you write briefly, it will be boring! Not only Shengqing and Yumian, the author also created other characters very well! The emotional bond between Shengqing and Yumian was also clearly told. After reading the whole book, I understood Shengqing's feelings for Yumian, the depth of their love, which even surpassed love. But when the finale was approaching, the author wanted to fill up the 520 chapters and wrote more about daily life. It was a bit too long-running. The ending of this book did not shock me. I couldn't calm down for a long time. I think it was probably the daily life in those 20 or so chapters that gradually calmed me down. In short, this book gave me a feeling I had never felt before!

Shengqing💗Yu Mian Lily Xiuxian he We are dependent on each other for life and death, and we must be you. We are each other's only one, irreplaceable, and tolerant of each other (the two of us are totally worthy of me) Shengqing: She is the supremely powerful Huaici Venerable, Yu Mian's hybrid snake. She is so beautiful and knowledgeable that she can be described as a walking encyclopedia (I envy Yu Mian, I also want such a beautiful sister who only loves me). In times of crisis, she is the most reliable Venerable, protecting everyone, but when she is safe, she is the greatest danger to others. Yu Mian: She is a child who received a good education and grew up under the red banner of the spring breeze. She has the clearest and most transparent soul. Kindness is her background. She is a talented and hard-working little boy. However, she was eaten to death by Shengqing. The longest road she has traveled must be Shengqing's routine (after being promoted to the movie, she acted everywhere, Lin Zizhen, she will not be able to escape in this life and the next life) It is a story about a bad woman who is beautiful and smart and deceives a simple boy to death. It is very sweet and can be read with ease.

After chasing it very devotedly for a while, I still have to say goodbye to it. My heart is very sad. In fact, I have always read articles in other software before, and I always felt that the style of foreign persimmons may not suit me. Recently, I started to explore here when I was in a literary shortage, and I accidentally clicked on this book. Now that I think about it, I am very lucky to see such good articles. The author's portrayal is very good and delicate. I like this writing style so much. The plot is wonderful and interesting. The main CP likes it very much, the deputy CP likes it very much, and I especially like the senior sister. [Crying] I feel that everyone is very vivid, and my emotions always resonate with the characters in the book. I thought of the sentence "When talking about happiness, words and laughter are combined, and when discussing relatives, we cry together." I will continue to support Rabbit in the future! [Almost crying]