A Stall Selling Box Lunches in Another World Makes the Vampire Princess Cry

Well written, but it ended too early This book is closer to Japanese light novels than domestic online novels. Readers who do not have Japanese light reading habits may not be comfortable with it at first. The food descriptions can be more detailed, and the background and environment settings should be more substantial and not too templated. The author may have read "Online Shopping Skills Open a Gourmet Journey to Different Worlds". Some places are quite similar. However, if you have read it, you should have seen the comic version or animation version. Different cultural carriers have different needs for content. In order to adapt to comics/animations, the original text of the novel will be trimmed, and then filled back into the text carrier, it will easily appear thin. It would make sense if these two versions were used as a reference before.

It's not bad, why doesn't anyone watch it? There is just no emotional line. When I finished reading it, the vampire princess had not yet met the protagonist.

In fact, the places where the food is cooked are not particularly detailed, but reading the whole book gave me the feeling of watching an anime, as if strange and vivid images of other worlds appeared in my mind. For example, the imaginary baby slime is very cute, and the scary appearance of the giant is also very vivid. I really like that the protagonist makes good friends in various places. The ending is a bit rushed and the story is not finished yet. But I still like the first part.

Favor your own writing! [Think]

The pace is fast, and I guess it is a small-scale story, probably at most 300,000 words. Very nice!

How to get the author's attention? [Looking] No How to get the author's attention? [Look] back What inspired the author? [Look at] me How to attract the author? [See] How to cause action? [See] people How to cause it? [Look] all How to lead? [See] change How? [Look] bald What? [Look]

The writing is relatively good, but can the ridicule be deleted?

It's quite to your liking, it feels okay [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

The plot is good, I love watching [Chigua]

I like it very much, very beautiful

Well written, good luck to the author.

Overall it's okay

Overall it's pretty good, there are some typos

Generally speaking, maybe I have read too many articles about decisive killing recently. I saw that the Elf Kingdom did not follow the rules, and the protagonist did not want to read it because he was still thinking about the game.

It's okay, at least it's not too watery like the others.