Reiki**********

Keep your original intention in mind, since you have decided to write about changing marriage, then write about changing marriage well.

This book has a strong lily flavor. The author must not forget his original intention and keep his mission in mind. Is the book good?

It is recommended to listen to the song Requiem (Emotional Cover) while watching this The character's IQ is not very good

The author. This is a marriage change. Write more about the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. This is not to exclude Lily Tie Tie, but this is a bit too much. There are too many poisonous points, and there are many pitfalls in every place. It is really uncomfortable to watch. Yu and the heroine don't recognize each other. They are like brothers since childhood. There are many thunder points and many poisonous points. They have always been lily-like. The emotional line is pitiful. The more I watch, the more uncomfortable it becomes. The heroine's portrayal is not good. Anyway, there is too much poison. I will see how you can continue to give you high marks in the later stage. I've finished watching it, it's very poisonous, and the male harem is quite impressive. I have read the first 70 chapters or so and skimmed through the rest. I can only say that there are too many poisonous points. The story about changing the marriage to City Lily is also written as a harem. Okay, okay, you don't say who the protagonist is, but who is the male protagonist? Excuse me, is it Lao Yu, Bai, or who? Every time I write a bad point, I will take it back in the next two sentences or so, which makes people uncomfortable. The protagonist is also portrayed with two arms and repeatedly jumps across the screen. What kind of article am I reading? I didn't even write an introduction. In July, you also mentioned what kind of label Lily should be. I'm a little confused as to what kind of article this is. I watched it from afternoon to around 11 o'clock in the evening, and it made me feel itchy and very uncomfortable, really. Why do you have to write so many poisons? The male protagonist is still saying that there are only so many male protagonists? The female protagonist accepts a harem of men? That's it, abandon it. There are so many poisons, and you won't change them and you feed them so much*

Give it five stars before watching it

Don't worry, keep reading and writing After writing so much, I review and then block it. Will the tomato review only bring about the author's mentality? [Face covering]

Please update it more, it looks good, but the update feels a bit unstable, it will be good if it is stabilized.

Come on, it's pretty good [blowing kiss]