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Primary school students all write better. If Silly Zhu commits a crime, he will not be imprisoned. Others will be imprisoned. The first sentence is still in the labor camp, and the next sentence is at home.

The author who whitewashed the Three Great Masters is hard to figure out!

It's a mess with no logic at all.

It doesn't feel very good. Luo Ji's thinking is a lot worse. His salary is wrong. He's on the railway. You should write more about things on the train.

After looking for the protagonist's job for a long time, where is the policeman traveling from north to south?

Mark points. . . . If you meet a homeless woman, you can take her back to your bed and rest, right? Can't feed outside? A man and a woman alone, having random relationships. There's even a police officer on board. Speaking of which, the police's law enforcement scope should be on the vehicle... Was there such a thing as the law enforcement scope in those days? [Chigua]

Very pretty.

It's written too freely

I'm a new author. The writing style is a bit too white, like a narrative. I encourage 4 stars.