I'm a Poor Dog, Can I Get Cash Back from Eating in the Canteen?

Although the novel is as short as the author, the early and middle stages of the plot are particularly delicate, and the later stages are a little sloppy. Overall, it is very good. I hope that the author will get better and better as he writes, and I also hope that all readers will become more and more awesome like the protagonist in the article! Come on, everyone

Don't be led by various comments. It's your own choice whether to read it or not. Everyone has different points of view. This is not the evaluation standard for traditional literary works. If you like this subject matter, it's not a loss to read it. The story of this book is quite complete, and some plots have some fantastic ideas. I think a complete plot is the basis for finishing a book, at least I have read a story. The author laid the groundwork well at the beginning, writing the psychological activities of the characters very delicately, and you can feel the emotional changes of the characters. But after my sophomore year, it suddenly disappeared and turned into a pure plot. This means that those who don't like to see details can't stand the front, and those who like to see details can't stand the back. The characterization is really not interesting. Except for the protagonist's roommate, who is somewhat memorable, the other characters are quite bland and have nothing to remember. The protagonist's growth process is also a bit stiff. It feels like there are no key events to promote it, and the transformation is a bit sudden, which sometimes feels unnatural. Although the overall framework of the story is fine, there are still some small holes that have not been filled in. Although it does not affect the main plot, it may be a bit regretful for readers who like a perfect ending. Overall, this book is of a passing standard and can be read successfully, but I won't particularly want to follow the author's other works. If the full score is 10, I would give it 7 points (6 points for being able to read it, +1 for unique creativity, +1 for characterization, +1 for plot setting, and +1 for writing. So I only added points for creativity). You can watch it, but don't expect too much. Recommended to readers who like complete stories and don't have high requirements for characters. If you care particularly about characterization and psychological description, this book may disappoint you.

Emnnn, I've finished reading it, and I'll tell you my thoughts. The overall process was refreshing. It's not a harem story, it's a single female protagonist, and there's not a lot of flirting, and the main plot is pretty clear. The shortcoming is that the author summarized many things and did not fill in the gaps. However, after reading it, I was still very emotional. The author's writing style is very delicate. The whole article contains happiness, sadness, family affection, and the thoughts of each character. It can even be said to be "human nature". It is very well written! Recommended to take a look. (Out of five stars, I give five stars) (Out of ten, I give 8.8 Points)

It avoids all the shortcomings of cool novels, and the overall evaluation is pretty good. There are no common things like licking back your ex, parents not listening to advice, and forcing yourself to show off. It's like giving you pleasure but not letting you feel that much. There are no big twists and turns, and it reads like a narrative. The system is not very useful. It is stuck between reasonableness and reality, but the effect is not bad. The ordinary description of the article is also very interesting. Suitable audience: Those who have been poisoned by fake cool articles, killing time and not knowing what to read. Money came too easily in the future, so the transition should be slowed down a bit, and there should be a process that reflects the system giving money. The pit that was dug before to upgrade the system experience value was not filled later. The system flow is indeed easy to write. When faced with inconsistent logic, the system can be used to eliminate unreasonable areas in one stroke. However, the system flow has a basic operating logic. In the early and mid-term, we are deeply involved, and the system release tasks have a sense of being follow-up. This book relies heavily on this system in the early stage, but in the middle stage it inexplicably turns into an unlimited cash machine. The system should be upgraded in stages, and then something should be unlocked at each stage. The mode of this mission should be based on the system experience value. Also, when writing professional knowledge in novels, don't write it just for the sake of professional knowledge. Not many people who are not Star Wars-themed are willing to read these. You can refine it to create a sense of conflict. The paragraphs at the back, especially about buying a car, are too written. On the one hand, it says that the pizza shop has a high turnover, and on the other hand, it has to be cash back for buying a car. But I like the BMW 7 Series even if I don't drive it, and then I used these cars in the wedding... It's quite speechless.

It's obviously a light-hearted article, but it's really pretty average. There's a bad guy here and there. There's nothing really poisonous about it, but the mood of the person reading it is inexplicably unclear. There's a very slight feeling of depression and grayness.

It's really good, the male protagonist has a good personality, and there's nothing in this book that looks down on girls. Compared with other male novels, this one is still very good

In fact, I think this book is quite good in Tomato, but it's a pity that it's not finished. I can't say what's good about it, but I just feel that reading this book is very fireworks. It's a pity that the author's writing power is limited and he can't write it out. Come on, it's really good. It's the first novel I've read in one sitting.

Seeing now, this is the only book with a male protagonist who has a powerful system but is so dedicated. I admire the author so much that the later system almost has no chance to appear.

I read a newly opened book in less than a day! ! ! Beautiful Ꙩ⌵Ꙩ! The author greatly requests an update! ! ! !

How can I put it this way? It's so fascinating that you can't wait to finish it all at once, but you can't bear to finish it. Highly recommended! ! ! [Like][Like][Like] This is the only book I have almost finished [smirking] I lost interest in the other books before I finished them [face covering] [face covering]

What can I say about this book? It has a refreshing and realistic tangled feeling. After the system cheat is turned on, all the money problems of the male protagonist are solved. But it is not like other great novels, where money can solve everything without thinking. It is rich and realistic, and it develops step by step, from the accumulation of personal abilities to the accumulation of connections. It is very enjoyable to watch. There may be some places that the author really doesn't understand very well, and the span is getting wider and wider. It's impossible to be as detailed as what was written before. It's a bit regretful. The ending is a bit too urgent. One more star for encouragement. It's still very good to read it in one sitting.

The writing is very good. The characters written by the author are vivid and spiritual, and the emotions are particularly delicate. It is really good. It is a little bit poisonous occasionally, but my poison resistance is okay. I can put it aside and read it. The main point is that the emotion is really well written.

Overall it's pretty good, a few sentences are quite touching haha But Chen's transition from poverty to wealth could be written more It feels like the change happened too fast, a little weird I can write a single chapter as a side story after it's finished. Cheers, author [Thinking]

The author quickly coded the words. This book is so suitable for my taste. The protagonist is not pretentious and has filial piety, and there are no disgusting plots. It is very comfortable to read [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

After reading nearly sixty chapters, the little character rises step by step, and the system is still steady and developed. The characterizations are quite vivid, and the inner activities of the people at the bottom and their thoughts on wealthy life are also realistically and delicately depicted. I think Shuangwen's single female lead is pretty good. Give me some support

A relatively pragmatic novel. The author also seeks to verify things that he doesn't understand clearly, which is rare. I was so fascinated by Yang Jie's story that I could even dream about it when I went to bed last night. I stayed up late and couldn't bear to put this book down. Because the ending is relatively quick and not too rushed, this may be the end of this novel's lifespan.

Goldfinger is so big! The protagonist is provided regardless of the cost. Fortunately, the protagonist has a good temperament and the female protagonist does not have much space. It is okay. The main idea of ​​spending money is to make money has reached its peak. It is cool. Thank you author.

I thought it was a systematic book at first. I found it quite interesting after reading it. I have been following it. It is my favorite type. It is a good book.

Overall, it's pretty good. The description of family and friendship is very brilliant. Especially Chen Bin's part is particularly touching. Personally, I think the description of the relationship between Song Qingrong and Song Qingrong is a bit abrupt. I always feel weird when I see them getting along later.

It's a pretty good work, with a smooth plot and self-consistent logic. The male protagonist is smart and hard-working and can seize opportunities. The emotional scenes are also described in detail and appropriately, but there are some pitfalls that I forget about after writing and won't mention them again. The business war plot is quite interesting. Readable at leisure!

There is no doubt that it is a good book. The characters are well portrayed. The title of the novel almost confused me. The feeling of opening a good book and seeing a wonderful book is the same as that of a person who loves reading.

I was attracted by the previous description of the pig's trotters arriving in the city and the first scene in the coffee shop. As a bookworm of nearly ten years, the previous writing was really good. Maybe the author's inspiration ran out later, but the writing was quite satisfactory and very good.

It's really good, but I just saw a reader comment saying that it won't be updated anymore, which scared me to death. I thought it wouldn't be updated, but it turns out it's not the author, so it's okay.

I love reading this book. It makes me daydream at night [laughing]

It's quite enjoyable. The story is also very cyclical and very entertaining. It's not like a bloody theater. I really envy the characters in the book and also the protagonist's own charm. I have such a mind and I can't make it work. . . I like it very much, but it's a pity that I didn't watch the extras.

It's not bad. The protagonist has always maintained his original character. He has not become arrogant because of the system. Instead, he pays more attention to improving himself. The characters in the book are vividly described. I didn't expect Yang Jie to die. It was really heartbreaking and hard to calm down when I saw it~

It's very interesting and addictive. I really hope the author will update it soon! !

This book is not like other Shenhao novels. This one focuses on writing about life and daily life. It doesn't want the others to be all about business wars. It doesn't have a very realistic sense of family affection, and it's very numb.

A very good article, close to real life, the system is average, and it expresses more rich emotions. Please support it.

It's not bad. It's a clean and refreshing novel. Although there is no driving plot, it is still very comfortable to read, because poor people are thinking about how to become rich! Haha, it's hard to even dream about it. The only thing is to read novels! [Laughing] [Admiration] [Laughing] [Like] The key point is very inspiring. How this poor student can make a fortune in the city depends on the system! What are you thinking about? How can this be done without a system these days? Still the same sentence: It's hard to come across in your dreams!