After Accepting Orphan Care, He Was Attacked by a Sickly Girl

Why is there no book review? Then I will be the first. The subject matter is good and not too toxic for me. I still like it.

The plot is okay, the writing is not strong enough, and there are occasional awkward moments. I can give it 4 stars. Ah, that's it

After reading Chapter 182, I am happy that the affair between Chen Xi and Yan Feng has come to an end, but also recalling the departure of Gu Qian. The character of Gu Qian is perfectly created, and she dares to love and hate. I think Gu Qian is not stupid. On the contrary, she is too smart. She understands her feelings for Yan Feng just like Yan Yanfeng treats Chen Xi. She is rational and measured. She has long been relieved of her feelings for Yan Feng. Just like Yan Feng once treated Chen Xi, she only hopes that she will be happy, healthy and happy. "I plan to travel around the world while I'm still young, what do you think?" Gu Qian seemed to be taking chances. It's like someone you've loved sends an invitation, and it's like waving to your own youth. Although she already knew that Gu Qian was just a supporting role, she still couldn't help but feel sad secretly at her farewell. She was really relieved. He only hopes that Yan Feng will live happily, nothing more, Gu Qian is not Yan Feng. The authorities are obsessed with it, but she sees it clearly. This is also what I think is a good point in character creation. Did she lose? I don't think so. She just gave up the person she loved to someone who loved him more than she did.

I have only read the first three chapters, but professional readers dare to make judgments. The characters are well created, the settings are interesting, and the writing is not awkward. It has a bit of a Japanese feel. It will be a good book.

The number of times may be unreasonable due to review reasons. But in the field of love, I would like to call him God. The pinnacle of supreme love. It shouldn't be said to be the pinnacle of love. This is a masterpiece that may appear in my dreams This book only exists in heaven.

The writing is very delicate, and the description of emotions is also very good. It is just that in the early stage, it really tricked people into killing people. Seeing that the pace in the early stage was so fast, I thought I would be able to eat sweets soon, but later on I started to do Tai Chi, and I also used a knife from time to time. Really, there is a slight gap between the front and the back, and it is also a personal reason. I personally like the faster ones. The male and female protagonists are two extremes. The male protagonist is too slow to accept emotions, and the female protagonist is too fast. It is in line with the setting of a woman chasing a man, but she is a bit speechless. The male protagonist's behavior is normal, and he has fantasized feelings about Bai Yueguang for the female protagonist. This is the basis for the female protagonist to win in the end. I don't think the male protagonist will accept Chen Xi only when he completely forgets Bai Yueguang. The male protagonist is impossible to forget. Then I think not only the female protagonist is paranoid, but the male protagonist is even more paranoid than the female protagonist. I can only say that they are a perfect match. Finally, there is a little hope that the author can make a side story about the male protagonist's life after accepting the female protagonist's affection, and also describe the emotions of other supporting characters. The child just wants to eat something sweet. I wish the author great success and prosperity

First of all, the opinions are my own, please don't comment if you don't like them (contains spoilers) The plot aspect is particularly fascinating and non-toxic, but the male protagonist is too stubborn and unwilling to accept the female protagonist's feelings (as of the current plot), but the male protagonist is slowly accepting it in his heart. Overall, it is still sweet enough. As for the plot abuse in the paragraphs, I can only say that the perspective is different, and I hope it will be sweetened soon. In terms of character design, the female protagonist was gradually attracted to the male protagonist from the beginning of the aloof cat girl to the current one (feeling yandere?). The male protagonist is indeed a piece of wood, but it is this kind of wood that can attract the female protagonist, right? In general, the concept of this book is novel (for example, the heroine misremembered the date of the performance, which made me laugh) and the writing style is excellent. There are also clues throughout (such as the heroine's feelings about going home, "going home" almost appears at the end of the previous chapters, which also implies the changes of the heroine) I won't say much else. Seeing is better than hearing. If you are interested in romance novels, this is definitely worth reading. I also wish the author better and better (PS: It is best to update 100 chapters every day. I can't help but watch the heroine and the hero having sex with each other every day! Hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe)

This is a story that is not taboo, but is more than taboo. The author is really great. The heartbreaking, overwhelmed, and struggling emotions that overflow the screen even though they are written in words are very enjoyable. I especially like how the author wrote the emotions in some scenes, just like a silent movie. The acting and pictures are worthy of full marks. The plot that foreshadows it is really not cruel or violent, it just makes people sympathize with it so much that you can feel flawless even if you are involved in it. If someone calls you a knife because you just can't accept the feelings temporarily, then there are the sharpest knives everywhere in the world. Like everyone else, I prefer reading sweet stories, but after reading this novel, I realized that it's not the sweet stories that make people laugh, but the shock of the sincere emotions pouring out of the screen and the respect for feelings. I prefer the catharsis that hits my face, rather than the human skin filled with the word love, those superficial ones, those that are easy to obtain, those that are the same, just like the original melon seeds, you can't stop knocking them, they are just melon seeds, not as deep as the soul, they only stay in actions and habits. After reading the current plot of this novel, it is very worthy of the five-star review.

This novel is very good, especially when the heroine confesses her love to the hero and the hero panics, I think it was particularly well written at that time. In these more than seventy chapters, we also see the growth of the heroine. From the cold school beauty at the beginning to the jealous yandere with paranoid attributes who is even jealous of her mother and wants to imitate her mother for the sake of the hero? One thing to say, this novel is very well written, but it's a pity that not many people have read it.

Although there are some plots that are unreasonable, such as the heroine falling in love with the hero and the character changing too quickly before and after. I think this should be a gradual process, but overall the author's writing style is not bad, the plot is tightly connected, and the previous and later episodes are mutually supportive. I guess the author went to school to study liberal arts, and it was quite interesting to read. I just hope that Chen Xi and Feng will have a good ending.

It's very well written, and my friend was a bit off guard. He said that he seemed to see his own shadow in the characters in the book, and his thoughts became more solid after being polished by the author's language. I won't say any more, I'm going to comfort my friends. Interested book friends can just read it on their own. (Turn around and run backwards, fell down, had no time to stand up, rolled and crawled away)

The writing is very good. When I first read this book, I even had the feeling that I was a wild boar eating fine chaff. The author is very skillful in laying out foreshadowing and comparing before and after. It can be seen that it is a carefully written work, and there are no poisonous points in some big trends, it is very smooth. It is a novel worth reading seriously. The transformation of the female protagonist is very huge and thought-provoking, and the most noteworthy thing is that the image of the male protagonist does not have the bad taste in popular literature, which can be said to be very rare. Due to personal problems, when I read some ordinary literature before, the male protagonist's performance was too ugly, which made people unable to stand it. I naturally thought about whether this person is worthy? As a result, my expectations for this book were greatly reduced, but the male protagonist in this novel is a very perfect character. He is a truly masculine character who can make people find some minor flaws in him, but upon closer inspection, he is cute and very strong. It is worth reading.

To be honest, this author's writing style is really good. Many of the inner descriptions and small details are just right, and the description of emotions using scenery is also very good. The last time I saw a novel with such good writing style, it was still that one, "It's Raining in the World of Cats".

It's a very good book, both in terms of writing and emotion, but I can't accept Gu Qing's hasty exit. Since it's a single heroine, why create an image of an unrequited lover that makes people uncomfortable? Reality is already hard enough. Reading novels is all about pursuing a smooth mood.

The following is my personal opinion: I feel that the early pace is a bit too fast, which mainly refers to the fact that the heroine's feelings for the hero change too quickly and are too natural. However, I personally feel very good about the content in the book. I hope that the author will have more space to write about the subtle changes in emotions later on. Try to give the heroine a step-by-step guide as much as possible. After all, in the author's description, the weight of Bai Yueguang in the hero's heart is too great [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking] I wrote this paragraph after reading Chapter 38, but now I realize that it was sloppy and progressed too fast [laughing awkwardly] [crying with laughter] [crying with laughter]

The plot design and character settings are very good. The writing style really makes people feel comfortable. I hope the author will continue to enrich it. It seems to be a very good work so far.

Quite exciting, bah! It's quite novel and beautiful!

It's so good. I transferred it from Douyin. The content is really fascinating. I have rarely seen such good-looking novels. The author also updates very quickly. The author also doesn't want to rest. I'm addicted. Quack update.

As expected of Lao Deng, your level is beyond ordinary. You are the only one who can write such a pure yandere. I like such a loving and realistic writing style. Lao Deng, the most important thing now is to retain your current writing style, and continue to innovate on the original basis, that is, add different routines, use different models, form different results, keep up with the times, readers can write whatever they want, don't blindly follow the trend, don't be self-reliant, keep updating every day, stick to it, it will be good\^O^/

I feel that the author's writing style is very strong. The main characters are vividly portrayed and I feel they are all quite likable. The plot does not involve bitterness, hatred, intrigue, etc. (Although there seems to be a heavy hidden thread), but watching it now gives me a rare and relaxing feeling. I like it very much, thank you to the author

The book is very good, and the plot is very attractive. Come on, the author. Every time I read it to the end, I always want to see the story of Bai Xi not dying and coming back to find the male protagonist. Bai Xi should not be emotionless at all. This is such a pity for the male protagonist [I almost cry]. The author can make an extra story at the end. Rebirth flow, parallel world [Salute]

I couldn't understand this book, this forbidden love, and it made me feel inexplicably depressed. It was too advanced for me, and I felt like I was being raped. But I have to say that the author's writing style is very good, his emotions are very delicate, and his descriptions are vivid. Maybe this book is not very relevant to my thinking, but it does not prevent it from being a good book.

Uh, how do I put it? This book is definitely a low-quality saccharine that crushes 90% of tomatoes. First of all, the setting is quite novel. The underage + mildly ill girl + mutual redemption is very interesting. The settings of other female supporting characters in the book are also remarkable. The author digs holes and fills them in well, and the emotional route is clear (really) I'm fed up with Tomato's mindless books that love mindless candy. My toes can't stand it.) The next few dozen chapters may give me a bit of a stomach ache. No matter how you say it, you definitely need an opportunity for the male and female protagonists to change their minds, and then they can start giving candy openly [Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Blow kiss] There are still some minor flaws in some places. For example, the description of the male protagonist's childhood is a bit weird. It feels not as smooth as using a diary in the early stage. There is no way to complete the setting. There is also the male protagonist Bai Yueguang who remains anonymous and is finally arrested for marriage. This seems a bit cliché. There is also a super big hole in the whole book, such as Bai Yueguang's transformation. In the later period, the male protagonist should take the female protagonist to fill in the hole and untie the knot in her heart.

The characterization is rich and full, highly recommended, I hope this book doesn't involve eunuchs! It's just that the pace is a bit fast, and the female protagonist gets excited too fast. It would have been more fun to play Tai Chi with the male protagonist more often.

Yes, the writing is very warm and the characters are good, but the male protagonist said that he is too obsessed with Bai Yueguang, and some details are not handled well, but I really knock the uncle and the girl. Come on, author, try to downplay Bai Yueguang. It's even more annoying. Everything is his Bai Yueguang and everything looks like her mother's face. I'm really speechless.

In fact, if you read this book lightly at the time, your acceptance level will be very high. After all, this kind of subject matter is quite normal among Japanese readers. From this point of view, the early opening of this book is not bad. There are no problems with the plot, background and characters, and the rhythm is also well grasped. I'm going to log out first. If you don't log out, I'm going to call the police.

I have read more than 170 chapters, and the beginning is very interesting and interesting. But the further you get to the back, the less likely you are to read on. The main reason is that there are no contradictions or suspense in the back. The entire text above focuses on the love between two people who are trapped by worldly morality. It is well written and interesting. This sense of betrayal is very similar to "Love Stops Like the Rain" and "My Daughter's Friend". In fact, I think this book can be finished after Yan Feng accepts Xiao Xi's love. Although it has a happy ending in the end, I still can't stand it. Summary: A novel worth reading, I can give it 7 points [laughs]

After reading Chapter 14, I still can't help myself. To be honest, the writing of this heroine is really good, but a single heroine will eventually regret it. If possible, why don't the author give some thought to the idea of having an unparalleled heroine [crying] After seeing Chapter 32, I couldn't hold it back. Can Gu Qing really let go of his kindness in saving his mother? In the end, I feel that this is not a double heroine, so it will be difficult to end. The author really wrote the female supporting character so well [facepalm]. It's not that I can't accept novels with a single female protagonist, but this is all when the other female supporting characters are just supporting roles and don't have much of a role for readers to know about such a person. The author has written Gu Qing so well. I really think that dual female protagonists should be considered.

Front row drug sweeps Tomato is a good love story, but it won't suit most people's tastes. The writing is good, the emotional descriptions are good, and the plot has ups and downs. The shortcoming is that the yandere heroine is over-described. Lies and truth are mixed into the heroine's feelings. Too many heroines pretending to be pitiful not only makes readers tired, but also makes the description of the heroine too sinister. The writing style that favors women will make the male protagonist look very indecisive. Overall, it's average. I gave it four stars because there's a big knife at the back, and because the heroine's love-hungry and yandere nature may lead to scandals or even cuckoldry, so I'm waiting to see.

It took me four days to read the whole book (without skipping), because it is really attractive. Although all the characters have some problems, the descriptions of each character are very vivid. This is a serious yandere novel. You can read it if you like it. Personally, I think it is serious, so don't read it if you don't mind. The whole book is very depressing and tense. There are sweet but also implicit expressions of love. It is not pleasant to read. The most sweet thing is after chapter 250. The female protagonist is not yandere, and the male protagonist learns to let go of himself to express love. The sweetness is beyond the limit. Rather than being a single heroine, I think it is more like a 1.5 Heroine. Bai Xi, who carries out the whole story, is actually more like a family relationship. (Secretly, the yandere heroine is as good as the yandere Mita)