As a Villain, Stop Giving Off So Much Charm!

It's pretty good so far. There's nothing too bad about it. I just hope that the heroine can also practice together. Instead of making a vase, I can arrange for the protagonist's parents to be members of a certain hidden family. This will allow the protagonist to move towards a bigger stage. Otherwise, the protagonist will definitely go to the big stage now and let the heroine follow. Otherwise, once the protagonist leaves, the two heroines will slowly leave the novel or take the college entrance examination. The two heroines will go to the same university together to expand the main line and lead to the protagonist's parents' family. I hope that the girl will not be given away or missed, so that the heroine can also practice and stay with the protagonist.

Second picture, you actually think the villain plot is good? Negative review Licking the dog? [Spit][Spit]

This novel gives a truth that people must not be licking dogs. Even if they change their souls, have plug-ins, and have abilities, they are still just licking dogs.

Too much nonsense, dispensable inner drama, settings that are of no use to the plot, bragging about appearance, reactions of passers-by. These contents are repeated over and over again, taking up an extremely large amount of space.

Personally, I think it's pretty good, but there are bugs in the plot. Since the protagonist's memory is restored, he won't forget all the knowledge about his original body, right? It fell directly from the middle to the bottom. Although this situation has no impact in the follow-up, it is a plot bug that still needs to be corrected. The original plot that the author compiled for the original character is too bloody, and the several operations in the original plot of "The Son of Luck" feel impossible to implement. It is simply rubbing other people's IQ on the ground. Although I know that the original plot has no impact on the main text, but the author should at least write it normally. I see that many people in the comments and posts seem to have quit there. However, the author has good lightning protection at the back (in the Dragon King plot, the author hints at the back that Jiang Qin is taking the blame for her sister, and her daughter is also raised by her sister, and she is still a virgin. Let me mention it in advance, lest readers see it and quit immediately), and the driving speed is acceptable [laughing], there is no eunuch plot, and the protagonist's strategy does not show any obvious wisdom or saint manipulation. Moreover, the initial strategy is based on profit, which is in line with the villain's style, which is good. To sum up, from my personal point of view (Stacked Armor), although there are two poisonous points, they have no impact on the main plot. You can basically skip it. There are no problems with the subsequent plots. The writing is not a noob. Overall, it is good. I originally wanted to give it four stars. But I saw that the author is good at avoiding lightning, so I will give it a five-star support. After all, there are many authors who just ignore it. However, it is still recommended that the author change those two poisonous points, otherwise it will affect the perception even if the readers will not quit there. Finally, cheers for the author 👍!

There are too few cool points. Anyway, it's still the same old routine of heaven's protection and luck that needs to be worked out slowly.

I don't understand. Are you talking about falling in love? (What kind of charm do you want? Just change the setting to be a licking dog, and a diaosi travels through time to become a rich, handsome man?)

I didn't have the desire to read this book when I saw the title and introduction, but I took a look at it after reading it several times. I didn't expect it to be that bad. Not to mention how good it is, at least it doesn't have any bad points. It's okay, but it feels a bit slow.

This is a story about a green tea scumbag guy wearing a villain's skin to pick up girls. The so-called three views follow the five senses, and with hundreds of millions of plug-ins, anyone can be invincible.

It's pretty good. The female protagonist is not disgusting, and the male protagonist is quick to act. There is an original protagonist in Chapter 60, and the male protagonist should be pushed as needed. If no one reads it, I think it may be because there are too many homogeneous novels. Although there is nothing wrong with your novel, there is nothing outstanding or innovative.