When I traveled to the Spiritual Beast Continent, I thought I could live a good life surrounded by hugs, but I found that the little fat man next door actually let out a arrogant laugh. . . . . When the soul awakened to level 1 spiritual power, I felt even more chilled. When I walked out of the village, I discovered that there were various spiritual tools? ? ? Then various time travelers appeared out of nowhere. Is this a dungeon that has entered the hell difficulty? It's so difficult!
Reader comments
Come on, author, I really like your setting. It's very to my liking. It's a good group portrait article (it feels like a Douyi comic)! ! ! !
It is said that the author is based on Douluo novels. Is there a female protagonist? (I don't really want to pinch it~ After all, the protagonist wants to go home.)
Overall 4 points (given 5 points)
The plot is 5 points. The brawl between multiple time-travelers is quite fun. In addition, there are few Tomato Douluo fans, so extra points hahaha, but it may be unfinished (removal from review? No way, it's a pity)
The character design is rated 4 points, because there are many characters, and the protagonist is currently not eye-catching (of course, it may also be because the plot has not been fully developed yet)
The writing style is rated 4 points. This does not mean that the writing in this book is gorgeous. The writing style here refers to the smooth progression of the plot and not being stiff. It is already pretty good.
Good, good, good
If the protagonist has good things, he will share them with the world. . .
Holy Mother, maybe half of it
Come on, author, I really like your setting. It's very to my liking. It's a good group portrait article (it feels like a Douyi comic)! ! ! ! It is said that the author is based on Douluo novels. Is there a female protagonist? (I don't really want to pinch it~ After all, the protagonist wants to go home.)
Overall 4 points (given 5 points) The plot is 5 points. The brawl between multiple time-travelers is quite fun. In addition, there are few Tomato Douluo fans, so extra points hahaha, but it may be unfinished (removal from review? No way, it's a pity) The character design is rated 4 points, because there are many characters, and the protagonist is currently not eye-catching (of course, it may also be because the plot has not been fully developed yet) The writing style is rated 4 points. This does not mean that the writing in this book is gorgeous. The writing style here refers to the smooth progression of the plot and not being stiff. It is already pretty good.
Good, good, good
If the protagonist has good things, he will share them with the world. . . Holy Mother, maybe half of it
Looks good(ง •̀_•́)งCome on