Urgent! the Yandere Junior Sister Is [Greedy] for My Body! !

It's very interesting. This is a protagonist with a goal. He just wants to return to his hometown on earth, and he is willing to be a clown and lick the dog, and the selfishness of human nature is completely written. He has been abused since the beginning of the book, and the protagonist has never stood up. It was not until Chapter 268 that he felt like he could stand up and become the master.

Originally, I didn't like system stories, but after seeing the explosive introduction, I came in and read it. It was quite appetizing, but who knew that there would be a multi-person story in the middle, and it would become a dual-system story! This book was so full that I read DeBuff of novels, so I took it off the bookshelf. But I couldn't find anything to read in the past few days, so I came back to read it. After reading it, I thought it was quite good. The dialogues and psychological descriptions of the characters are quite down-to-earth. The ending is one of the most imperfect ones I have ever seen, at least worse than a bad ending.

This article is also called "The Temptation of Going Home" starring Li Changping, the Immortal of Returning Home, together with Wen Yihan, Chu Jiaoran, Jian Wuxiu, and Yan Chenyu. Go Home Immortal Lord once said: His head was severed in the Valley of Desolation, and the young man returned after being told by the system. The Qing dynasty sent people to tears, and the laborers wandered around endlessly. On the wedding day, he faked his death and escaped, but his love was lost and he cried. Once the heart is cut off, the iron will be cast, and I will work hard to plan a plan. Nowadays, the circuit of planning is revealed, deceiving people, deceiving monsters and even deceiving immortals! Overall it's pretty good.

One star for the female protagonist, -1 for the male protagonist, and +3 for prison temperature. All in all, this is a must-read masterpiece! ! ! Everything about this book is good, except that the male protagonist has a bit of a character flaw. My evaluation of its birth level is: half step Fang Yuan level. Like Fang, he has done countless things on his fingers. As long as it is beneficial to him, he can do anything. However, this half step is only half a step away from the protagonist feeling guilty. Unfortunately, this guilt cannot change his code of conduct. Don't talk about the heroine at the end. I just wanted to cut off my own hand. This is a human being. It's a bit off-putting at the beginning, but I think it's just a screening, because there are some plots later that are more serious than that, so I won't spoil it. As a review, I also want to give everyone a shot in advance to avoid affecting your mentality. The essence of this book lies in the delicate emotional entanglements and the male protagonist's birth story (you have to try it), and the most important thing is that the heroines' characters are irresistible and they can do anything. I think most people who read yandere novels come here because of this. If you like it, then please read it. Sufficient description of the environment results in a sense of atmosphere and fragmentation that overflows the screen, creating what I personally consider to be the pinnacle section of the book, the airship. The three female protagonists gathered together and the protagonist Kazuma was heartfelt. I can only say that it was amazing. Finally, the most important thing is that Lao Wen is cute, so cute. The author is going to let her break the dimensional wall and kill everyone else. She will be trained day and night, hehe.

Alas, I was so excited in the early stage that I read it in three consecutive days. I admired Lao Li for his perseverance, fell in love with Lao Chu's cute gesture, and felt happy for Lao Yu's awakening. But the one that touched people's hearts the most was Xiao Wen. The author portrayed Xiao Wen's experience in such a cruel way that at the age of 16, he came through alone, and he didn't dare to mess with others, so he was manipulated by the system. Forced to use them as NPCs to numb themselves. When I was bullied by my peers as a child, I just cried silently. He was deceived by the system and could not go home even though he was the most powerful. He was also used by the protagonist to deceive his feelings. A person was dismembered and sealed in the darkness for thousands of years. He felt worthless for Xiao Wen. The ending was not to really go back, but to appear as an electronic girlfriend. None of this was in direct proportion to her experience. In the last few dozen pictures, she was praised as wonderful and given five stars. They were obviously characters in the book, but she resonated with them. She was happy to see them happy, and sad to see them abused. Long-term companionship, things have feelings, let alone people? ? Therefore, when I see that the protagonist can use the emotions of various heroines to achieve his goals without any burden, I still feel that it is not worthwhile. I read this book for yandere and Shura field, but I saw vivid heroines being used one after another. Alas, maybe I am more emotional. I hope the author will work hard and polish the ending better, and I also wish the author and other readers all the best.

This book is really touching. It has both the madness of sitting and forgetting, and the feeling of love. The author's touch on emotions is still very delicate, and the portrayal of the protagonist is very good. There is no jam in the setting, and the overall content is smooth. I really recommend everyone to read it [Note] @ lonewolf

I've read Chapter 88 and am ready to start saving. So far, there are no problems. The writing is quite good. I don't read many books, so this book is still novel in my eyes. I'm looking forward to the follow-up, but there are too few chapters, so I won't read it without reading. The rating is also a little lower, only 7.8. Tomato ratings have always been quite confusing. After the male protagonist was eaten by his junior sister, he has always been relatively cold to senior sister Jian. I don't feel particularly sincere towards Empress Wen, and I treat the whole process as a game. Judging from the conversation with the empress, I feel that the follow-up should be that the male protagonist goes back, then abandons the female protagonists, and comes back after a while, and then all the female protagonists become sickly. Only 15 days have passed since the sect leader's three months, and the drama will come later. Judging from the current plot, I really like the Empress, and I hope that the subsequent plots will help the Empress reshape her body. Later in the article, it was pointed out that the empress may have a performing personality, and she has become a little crazy after more than 1,000 years of loneliness. But I still like it, so if I can't have a harem, I hope the empress will be the main harem, but this kind of article is basically a harem article. Come on, author

After reading it, I feel that the story is quite coherent, mainly due to the pull between the characters. The Immortal Master of Returning Home is well-deserved, but Lao Li still cannot escape from the Shura Field in the end. At the end, I feel it's not as exciting as I imagined, but at least it's not a bad ending and has a beginning and an end😌

It's so good. I finished reading it in one go. I especially like the scenes between Yi Zhen and Bu Xiu. It's really good. I watched it again and again. I think Yi Zhen and Bu Xiu are so sweet. Why doesn't the male protagonist permanently become a girl and fall in love with Chunqing Bu Xiu?

It's very interesting. It took me two days to read it. The female protagonist is quite novel. The gluttonous ghost junior sister is so greedy that she ate the protagonist twice. After the first meal, the protagonist became a homecoming immortal. The protagonist only invested affection in her, and then treated the heroine as a tool. The love-minded senior sister loves the God of War. The part where the protagonist changes his gender is quite interesting. The green tea and the flowers of the high mountains. Looking at the tea art of the male protagonist, I have the highest favorable impression of the protagonist. The scarecrow leader was too arrogant and turned into a licker after being defeated by the protagonist using a child ticket. The first one to succeed is also the best one to defeat. Unfortunately, his character was too bad in the early stage. The protagonist did not want to become a substitute and gave up the strategy directly. The most miserable one among the fellow female immortal emperors is the protagonist's childhood sweetheart, who was betrayed three times by the protagonist, treated people from another world as NPCs, was refined, and was finally sealed. There are some minor flaws in this book in the early stages, such as substitutes and the like, and the main character is too cs-like, but other things are fine.

It's very interesting. Boys and girls who travel through time and space need to complete tasks before they can return to their original homes. The fragile girl needs to become strong before she can go back. In the end, although she has strong strength, she is still fragile at heart. A boy who doesn't understand love needs to let another girl who doesn't understand love fall in love with him. Even if I have 100 favorability points, is it really considered love? Looking forward to the follow-up…

Although the title of the book is so cliche and warm, the character of the protagonist is actually very promising. On the surface it looks like they are in love, but in reality it is not. It is actually a story about four insane female protagonists and two demon kings who are gradually starting to go crazy.

It looks good. I have been looking for a female protagonist who falls in love with a female version of the male protagonist. The one in "Lectures Until Dawn" is so touching. I hope the author can improve the senior sister's favor faster and have more scenes where the senior sister is jealous [laughter] It's best to find out that the male protagonist is Yizhen and think about the dog-licking behavior of the male protagonist before, and want to change the male protagonist into a female forever [laughter] [laughter] [laughter] It's been a long time since I've seen a male protagonist with such a strong will. I don't know how it will end up, but except for the virtual world, which is a bit slow, everything else is to my liking. This is the one that I've read so many yandere novels that kept me entertained from beginning to end [Like]

From the first chapter to the end, overall it's very good. You can read it with a little more brains. Brothers, it's a pure sadistic novel. It's really not the kind where all kinds of pulls and pulls are not broken. This is definitely a hundred times better than those [laughing]. The main theme is to avoid arrogance and impetuosity and have a firm belief. The story is positive, sunny and cheerful.

It's awesome, not toxic at all, I haven't seen this comfortable for a long time😋👆

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It's BE, kids, the ending is BE! ! ! (At least that's the case for me.) [Cry][cry][cry] To sum up, the writing is smooth, not too redundant, and the characterization is also very good (only the clan leader is not full enough). Finally, the ending is a bit rushed. In fact, I prefer the dumpling ending. I think Wen is the pathetic character. He has been deceived all the time, deceived by the system, deceived by the male protagonist, and deceived by the world. In the end, he was sealed and turned into a cyber villain. She also wanted to go home, but was imprisoned for thousands of years in this hypocritical world of intrigues. When she finally got her wish and returned to her hometown (Blue Star), she was deceived by the system and said she could not go back, then went on a killing spree, and was sealed away for tens of thousands of years. It turned out that the male protagonist (Old Blue Star) My hometown, my childhood sweetheart) came, I thought it was redemption, but I didn't expect that she would be used by the male protagonist and then deceived severely. I think she is the one who deserves a good ending. She also wants to go home, and she also wants to be loved...[Cry][cry][cry]

Good-looking, it means sweet torture as promised, the torture is coming to me, where is the sweetness? ! [Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry] My stomach hurts, my little junior sister, my senior sister, my little fish, my old Wen [Cry][Cry][Cry]

Alas, it's a pity. The protagonist is indeed very rational, but this does not prevent readers from wanting to see him be. In the end, his wish was fulfilled. He thought he would die on the road. It is a pity. The author's control of emotions and characters is very powerful, very in-depth and humane, and it can be clearly felt that the author is satirizing the love of yandere, treating people as objects, and getting nothing in the end, and the reality that in the face of danger, you can only do whatever it takes to have a chance of success. And although this book often uses complaints and Internet buzzwords to write narrations, it seems that it wants to create a harmonious and happy atmosphere, but its essence is full of deception, betrayal, and distortion. The tragic setting of the yandere is also perfect, but it is not soft-hearted at all. It is designed to be so accurate It's not easy. Unfortunately, I still suffered the loss of ending too early. Many things were not explained clearly, including the biggest behind-the-scenes driving force and the Gou system. It's a pity, it's a pity. I'll give it four stars. What's even more pity is that the author's new book was in a dark room and he didn't give a response. I hope nothing happens to anyone. Another point is that the system actually gave the most tragic heroine Wen Yihan a chance to return home, but it was impossible. At that time, she refused to give up her power, and her love was twisted. She always treated Li Changping as an object, which did not meet the requirements of the system at all. Otherwise, a passage could be opened. The fact that the other three heroines can go back is the best proof, but There is a problem with Wen Yihan's system. Li Changping's system meets the conditions and can go home, but hers cannot. The driving essence of this behind-the-scenes tragedy is caused by the forced retention of this system, because the novel where she traveled essentially needs a character like her. All of this was planned, but it still suffered from the tight rhythm. It would be great if there were more links to expand the explanation of the system.

Hello, author! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to urge you to update it. Because of the situation, I believe that I can see its ending in my lifetime. Please write carefully. It doesn't matter how long you write. As long as you don't give up and don't get sloppy, everything will not be a problem. I will wait with your loyal readers. I really appreciate your writing style, which is both humorous and profound. To put it bluntly, if you are included in the article, you are a senior performer. I am the audience who appreciates the video. Your performance has reached a fascinating level. Just like Jian Han's state of watching "The Fifteen Days of Leohard", one more episode leads to one less. I want to read it, but I can't bear to do it. The contradictory and complicated emotions drive me crazy. I am just a bored idler, and I clicked on this novel aimlessly, not in the mood to finish reading it. But you succeeded and made me "half" finish it. Now, I can only express my emotions! Only leaving a message in the comments can stabilize my mood at this moment. With a sense of luck, I hope you can see it. Come on, author, I look forward to every "next chapter" of yours To you dear readers

In the middle and later stages, it has the style of a light novel. However, the writing is good and the visuals are very strong. I finished reading it in one go [face covering] It is now 5:45 in the morning. I recommend reading it during the day.

The previous book review was too flat, so I will write a new book review You can read through hundreds of chapters in one go, the writing is smooth, and the plot points are just right. In the previous plot, Chu Jian and Yan were under too much pressure, and Wen's appearance was like nectar. I figured it out by suppressing it first and then promoting it. Conflict resolution, plot connection, and all aspects are well grasped. Although the previous settings of Chu Yujiao, Jian Zhongnv, and Yan's double are all cliche, the additional polishing of details made the characters three-dimensional and concrete as if they were alive. The appearance of Wen in the back simply made my eyes shine. The idea of Immortal Tomb is so interesting. People who cannot distinguish reality will always be immersed in Izanami At present, it seems that the gentle male protagonist is going crazy in order to go home and escape from this cruel world of cultivating immortals. To put it simply, jelly grass is highly recommended.

I've read half of it, so I'll give it a review first, add some heat, and support the author [note] At present, it seems that the characters' personalities have not collapsed, and the plot is not clear yet. After all, the world view has not been mentioned. If nothing else, Chu's scenes are really well written. I can't stand it anymore, can you please update it quickly? [Smile][smile][smile]

This book uses simple words to write very delicate emotions. It's good. I'm very pleased [thinking about it]. I highly recommend it! ! ! I didn't expect the ending. I can only say that the protagonist is really not a human being, he is selfish and has nothing to say, and the holes that should be filled are not filled. . .

Damn it, I love reading articles that describe delicate emotions. Whether it's a novel about human nature becoming distorted and perverted through constant pulling, or a sweet love story between a boy and a girl with a girl next door who is just coming of age, or a novel about the Holy Virgin and the White Lotus in the true sense of God's love for the world, or a novel about a bad woman with a succubus style that plays with people's hearts, or a novel about a great hero who abides by his own moral bottom line and infects others. For example, I used to like reading transformation stories, and I didn't know why. But later I discovered that I wanted to see the male protagonist give in to the pressure again and again, and have to give in, thus distorting his psychology. As long as I focus on using pen and ink to outline the complex and wonderful emotions between people, and allow both parties to have heart-to-heart collisions, good or bad, in constant contact, that is my XP. So my favorite anime is EVA, and no other anime can replace its place in my heart. Play with people's hearts and end up being played by others. Become someone else's white moonlight and then die. After being hurt by the other person and being riddled with wounds, teach the other person what love is. I think the author is well versed in this, and he is actually a member of my generation. Okay, I won't say any more, I'm going to go somewhere else to get XP energy, Jie Jie Jie!

The character creation in the book is remarkable, especially the core role of Chu Jiaoran, which is extremely vivid and vivid. She has a cute and innocent side under her lolita appearance, with small actions and expressions that make people feel affectionate. But at the same time, her yandere inner qualities are fully displayed. Her extreme possessiveness towards the protagonist, her paranoia and madness when she loses control of her emotions are all vividly depicted, allowing readers to truly feel the complexity and danger of this character, as if she is standing on the page in front of us. The protagonist also has a clear character arc, from the initial strategy with a certain purpose, to the inner entanglements and struggles in the process of getting along, to the various psychological changes and coping measures after the death escape. The multi-faceted character, growth and transformation are all displayed naturally and smoothly, making it easy for readers to become involved, share the same destiny with the protagonist, and feel his joys, sorrows and joys in this special experience.

The best bj book, a masterpiece First of all, the rhythm, the rhythm is very good, the details are appropriate, the detailed parts are extremely detailed, and the sketched parts are never sloppy (for example, a stroke was written a few years later) Furthermore, the excellent writing style and endless writing techniques, whether it is micro-expressions, psychology, scenes, or actions, are described exquisitely. As well as the foreshadowing and reversal in various places, it is really enjoyable Then, a distinct personality and clear emotional lines. For example, the male protagonist's egoism appears throughout the entire text, and the younger junior sister's awakening to the emotion of love Finally, the yandere, the yandere written with the most extreme contrast, the description is weak, move to the main text

The plot is very good and coherent. There may be some people who only read tomato novels who can't stand the early stages (weak people). The male protagonist is well portrayed as a selfish villain (like the returning version of Gu Yue Fang Yuan), and the other female protagonists have their own characteristics. Except for the heroine Wen's system pitfalls that are not filled in, there are no other poisonous points in the whole text. Some people can't accept the heroine's background, but I'll actually add more to it later, and it's quite satisfying. The male protagonist picks up girls because he has no talent or opportunity. Who wouldn't do it if he could become Long Aotian? He can only survive in this way.

It's been a long time since I've been able to read a novel continuously. This is a novel, but it still has its shortcomings. The ending is not ideal and leaves a lot of suspense. I don't even know whether Wen Yihan can go back. The hero's character is like a fusion version of Ben Jiesun and Fang Yuan. He will do whatever it takes to get home. There is obviously a better way to deal with it, but he still chooses a worse way. That one, but I can feel that the author has tried his best. This novel is overall a good work. A lot of ink was spent on the process of the heroine developing feelings for the hero, making it very reasonable and not embarrassing. This is rare. Finally, if it is updated, I hope to give Wen Yihan a good ending, becoming an electronic pet or something. I really can't accept it.

First of all, I am standing in the perspective of the whole article. Two love brains: the pure-loving senior sister [the mainstay in the late-stage senior-sister line], the affectionate sect master [the mainstay in the mid-term sect line] (there should be no controversy between these two heroines) Two sickly girls: the little centipede who doesn't understand love and pursues vain eternity, who finally understands love, and the red-clad Qingmei who knew from the beginning that she was cheating but refused to let go (these two female protagonists are controversial, some people like them and some people hate them, I pray to let them go) The four of them all have one thing in common. From the very beginning, no one was really good to them (lack of love?). They deceived, inadvertently, and faked their kindness. They fell in love with him, and they were willing to never regret it. "Li Changping, you have no heart." The Immortal Lord back home is so terrifying. What you thought was about guarding against arrogance and impetuosity is actually just a talent point that he hasn't tapped yet.