My Confession Was Rejected and I Chose My Senior Sister. Why Have You Become a Yandere?

At the beginning, the writing style was a bit rusty, and the narrative was a bit strange, but as time goes on, I can see that the author's writing power has begun to increase. The content of the article is good and in line with my perception. The two female protagonists are very good and there is nothing particularly shocking about it. In fact, there is no need to write about the emotional story of roommates. It seems very abrupt and strange, with a sense of blurred priorities. , The character creation is quite good, but the male protagonist seems a bit weak now. I hope the male protagonist can be tougher. Qingmei is also very miserable and can give some sweets from time to time. There must be two female protagonists. The author, please come on, I will wait for you to update five times a day [Like] [Like] [Like]

The writing is very good, with good style and ideas, and it is very interested in the readers' viewing experience, but unfortunately it is not popular. You can write a cool article that is popular and has your own unique ideas. I believe you will get better and better. I have basically read all the chapters, and it is quite good, an objective evaluation from a bookworm who has spent nearly 5,000 hours. I also want the author to reply

It's good to read, I love to read it. Good luck to the author for the college entrance examination. This is the most important thing.

Well, so far it's pretty good👌, there's a lot of sweets, and the two heroines have very distinct personalities, but maybe I'm a little rushed to catch up with the progress, and there are some flaws in some places, but everything else is pretty good! Come on, author! [Sending Hearts]

The first part looks a bit like a story about tsundere ruining one's life, and the later part looks a bit like a redemption story. A girl who only sees black and white meets the only person with color in her life.

Okay, I just want to know how the protagonist handles the relationship with the heroine in the book

From an objective evaluation, everyone is a good author. He will correct typos in a timely manner, listen to the opinions of the book, and then adjust the later development. Moreover, the subject matter, character and heart of the article are all very prominent. It's very clear and interesting, and the plot content is very clear. The content is also very interesting. There are bracket speeds, but they are not particularly fast. It's good to read, but there are too many branches. I could separate the book and create another branch.

Bring them all back to me! My sister is not dead! Come back and read all of them!

I can only say that it's good-looking. I finally found a novel in which Qingmei didn't leave, and the author left us a choice. No one would argue about who is the final heroine, Shen or Bai, so that the story can develop in the direction of our own choice. It's not easy. Thank you for your hard work. I hope the author will work hard! Keep updating!

Invincible, the author, that nemesis and Qingmei are together

The writing is very good. I hope there will be two heroines in the future.

It's not that the book is good-looking, it's that the colorful light is good-looking [you taste it carefully]

The reader's writing is very nice, I am new to this.

I have been reading it for two days. It may not be the sweetest yandere novel in my mind, but it is also the most acceptable yandere novel with a little bit of razor in the sweetness. Personally speaking, Shen's character is not likable, but his performance in the if line is a bit surprising. Qiao's appearance is not abrupt, but her redemption of Wang can be seen in the if line. The most striking character is Bai, who fits the basic impression of a yandere. Although the personal IF line is a bit sloppy, some of the psychological descriptions are particularly touching. Especially the description of the ending in each if line, the character of each character is very vivid. In addition, I am also looking forward to Lin's if line and a good ending for adolescent girls.

If you haven't read Tsundere, you can try this one. I like it very much. The characterization is concise and clear, which is very consistent with the feeling of reality. The characters are not blindly portrayed to be perfect. The article is not cumbersome or boring, and the plot progresses well. Overall, it's worth watching

What is the author doing? Two hours a day to code is enough to get enough sleep [cover face] [OK]

How to tell this novel? Whatever you write is fine, I just don't know if it's a single heroine or a double heroine.

Dr. Ai, why is the score so low? This is my favorite thing to watch, or there are too many normal people.

Not bad, come on, author! I will save the book for a month and then read it.

I have read a lot of novels. The author's writing is very good, but it is easy for the eyes to get sand. Qingmei is so miserable, the male protagonist should have always known that Qingmei really likes him [almost crying]

The male protagonist looks a little uncomfortable, but give it five stars.

Not bad, to my liking

All I can say is that it tastes right.

I really like this book [adoration][adoration]

It's beautiful, thank you to the author!

Okay, it's very well written.

Ok ok ok ok ok

There are more yandere childhood-type books out there, this one is really fun to read [laughing]

Yes, it's good to read. I like to read yandere articles the most. Come on, author, write more yandere articles.

It's very beautiful, I like it very much, the author is quick to update [sending heartfelt messages] [punching hard]