I Was Rejected, So I Chose My Senior. Why Did You Turn Into a Yandere?

At the beginning, the writing style was a bit rusty, and the narrative was a bit strange, but as time goes on, I can see that the author's writing power has begun to increase. The content of the article is good and in line with my perception. The two female protagonists are very good and there is nothing particularly shocking about it. In fact, there is no need to write about the emotional story of roommates. It seems very abrupt and strange, with a sense of blurred priorities. , The character creation is quite good, but the male protagonist seems a bit weak now. I hope the male protagonist can be tougher. Qingmei is also very miserable and can give some sweets from time to time. There must be two female protagonists. The author, please come on, I will wait for you to update five times a day [Like] [Like] [Like]

The writing is very good, with good style and ideas, and it is very interested in the readers' viewing experience, but unfortunately it is not popular. You can write a cool article that is popular and has your own unique ideas. I believe you will get better and better. I have basically read all the chapters, and it is quite good, an objective evaluation from a bookworm who has spent nearly 5,000 hours. I also want the author to reply

It's good to read, I love to read it. Good luck to the author for the college entrance examination. This is the most important thing.

Well, so far it's pretty good👌, there's a lot of sweets, and the two heroines have very distinct personalities, but maybe I'm a little rushed to catch up with the progress, and there are some flaws in some places, but everything else is pretty good! Come on, author! [Sending Hearts]

The first part looks a bit like a story about tsundere ruining one's life, and the later part looks a bit like a redemption story. A girl who only sees black and white meets the only person with color in her life.

Okay, I just want to know how the protagonist handles the relationship with the heroine in the book

From an objective evaluation, everyone is a good author. He will correct typos in a timely manner, listen to the opinions of the book, and then adjust the later development. Moreover, the subject matter, character and heart of the article are all very prominent. It's very clear and interesting, and the plot content is very clear. The content is also very interesting. There are bracket speeds, but they are not particularly fast. It's good to read, but there are too many branches. I could separate the book and create another branch.

Bring them all back to me! My sister is not dead! Come back and read all of them!

I can only say that it's good-looking. I finally found a novel in which Qingmei didn't leave, and the author left us a choice. No one would argue about who is the final heroine, Shen or Bai, so that the story can develop in the direction of our own choice. It's not easy. Thank you for your hard work. I hope the author will work hard! Keep updating!

It's not that the book is good-looking, it's that the colorful light is good-looking [you taste it carefully]