[Mingchao] [Fan] [Same Timeline] (Front row reminder: There are brain-fresh articles, a collection of Mingchao plots, and the plot of Mingchao advances on the same timeline. The 1.0 Main line starts from chapter 1 to 32, and the 1.1 Main line starts from chapter 51. The setting is complete, and the foregoing and the foregoing will not affect the reading experience)
What if the trajectory of history deviates, if there are variables in the prophecy of Sui Zhu's "horn", if she is not the only one who falls from the sky.
Everyone's eyes were focused on her, and he came to a corner that no one cared about, and saw more secrets about the world, Suizhu, and Mingshi.
And then, he inexplicably became Long Aotian, a "villain" who pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger? (Gradient)
Reader comments
They are all good, but the author obviously doesn't know how to write more excitingly. After reading more than 20 chapters, I felt that the protagonist had to fight with all his strength to fight anyone, and was seriously injured and on the verge of death. I understand what the author was thinking, but the author may have put the focus on the wrong place. It is good that the protagonist does not follow the original plot, but there is no need to weaken the protagonist. The main thing should be described as another drifter (the main character). The actions and stories of the character outside the plot, what choices he would make and how he would feel when looking at the problem from another angle, but when I looked at it, I only saw that the protagonist felt that so and so was dangerous and unfathomable in his heart. Every time he encountered a crisis, his inner activities were like "Is this the end?"
In fact, I am an undercover agent of Genshin Impact, not because I like to watch [laughter]
The plot content is good, but the only drawback is that the protagonist is the drifter himself.
In the original plot, even if the drifter lost all his memory, his IQ was still very high, let alone his combat prowess, he just came up and fucked his big brother.
I haven't read much yet and have only read Chapter 14, but judging from the current situation, with the IQ of a drifter, if you meet a person who obviously has the same dress style and even the same voice as you, you will definitely make further guesses.
But Yongshuang didn't. As a fellow wanderer, he didn't notice that the location of the stigmata on her (the wanderer's) hand was exactly the same as his own.
I hope this can be improved in the future and I will give you four stars [eating melon]
I have read more than ten chapters so far and I think they are still interesting. However, the protagonist seems too weak at the beginning. I don't know how long it will take for the protagonist's strength to improve qualitatively. Will the author keep writing? There are so few Ming Chao articles. I still hope that the author can keep writing. After all, I think Ming Chao's modeling is good-looking and the story is exciting. The author can continue to enjoy writing another protagonist, right? I still hope that the author can polish this work well, and I will give you gifts [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
Generally speaking, I feel that the subject matter is interesting, but the plot is not comfortable enough. There is no pretense or anything like that. It just feels normal and not enough for Long Aotian. The main reason is that I can basically guess the content just by looking at the catalog. I hope there will be a female protagonist later, and the protagonist should be the real Long Aotian, who is relatively invincible, so that it will not make people feel uncomfortable.
I hope there will be more female protagonists [laughing]
It's really going to be hard to write later, so update slowly. It's okay to stop updating before the version is updated, but don't leave it unfinished. [Praise]
I bet that even if this book is not finished in the end, it will become an important milestone for early Mingchao fandom. It is worth remembering.
The plot of 1.0 Is much better than that of Clow, and the connection in 1.1 Is also very natural. According to the author's writing skills, even if Clow's plot gets sick again later, the author can still write it well.
(It's a pity that Kuro's background is not as rich as that of Mi Jia next door, otherwise, Ming Chao's fans wouldn't be so scarce.)
It looks great. After playing Mingchao, I completely forgot the meaning of travel. Now all I can think about is my Jinshu.
It looks good. There is no main story. I remember that there are quite a lot of big and small tasks in Mingchao.
I really like my grandpa, I really like it, I really like it, and Changli
Collected Come on Author
70 draws long distance. 30 Draws more. 30 Draws less weapon. Is the author out? [Laughter]
I dance very fast. If I take Changli away, I will give it 5 stars [Adoration]
Currently, there are only three Mingchao novels that I can read on my bookshelf. The other two are at Certain Point and the other is on Tomato, but I don't think they are as good as yours, so they are ranked first for the time being.
Give me a five-star review. The summary of this book is very good, and there are very few books about Ming Chao. This book also suits me very well. I hope the heroines are Chang Li and Yin Lin @ wanqinghuan
Author, if the heroine is Chang Li, then what about Yin Lin and Jin tide? (Supplement: The author is too short)
As long as there are stickers and the plot isn't too outrageous, it'll be fine!
By the way, I suggest the author write more. Children will love to read [sneaky laugh][sneaky smile][sneaky smile]
We readers only need to give a five-star review. The author has many things to consider.
It's beautiful, I love watching it, I watch it every day! [Laughing evilly][cool][learned][smile]
Hmm... Come on, it's still too short
Come on, come on, come on
It's great. It's the best book I've read so far.
Author, is there a female protagonist in this book?
Much better than Mingchao Planning.
Still very good
It's okay initially, worthy of praise
Although this novel is not a masterpiece, it is still very good in terms of the interweaving and novelty of the story and plot in the writing. The author has unparalleled creativity and imagination, portraying another protagonist from another angle, and interpreting the protagonists of countless timelines through time differences without any sense of division. It's a good and excellent work
The people in the author's works all have their own souls, which is very healthy
Although I don't play Mingchao and only have a rough understanding of it, I really like this book. The character relationships and plot are all to my liking and it satisfies my fantasies about Mingchao! Come on, author!
It's really good-looking. Even though I don't play Mingchao, I'm attracted to it. The author is very good [please update]
It's so beautiful, both Zhuanwu and Jinxi are available
They are all good, but the author obviously doesn't know how to write more excitingly. After reading more than 20 chapters, I felt that the protagonist had to fight with all his strength to fight anyone, and was seriously injured and on the verge of death. I understand what the author was thinking, but the author may have put the focus on the wrong place. It is good that the protagonist does not follow the original plot, but there is no need to weaken the protagonist. The main thing should be described as another drifter (the main character). The actions and stories of the character outside the plot, what choices he would make and how he would feel when looking at the problem from another angle, but when I looked at it, I only saw that the protagonist felt that so and so was dangerous and unfathomable in his heart. Every time he encountered a crisis, his inner activities were like "Is this the end?"
In fact, I am an undercover agent of Genshin Impact, not because I like to watch [laughter]
The plot content is good, but the only drawback is that the protagonist is the drifter himself. In the original plot, even if the drifter lost all his memory, his IQ was still very high, let alone his combat prowess, he just came up and fucked his big brother. I haven't read much yet and have only read Chapter 14, but judging from the current situation, with the IQ of a drifter, if you meet a person who obviously has the same dress style and even the same voice as you, you will definitely make further guesses. But Yongshuang didn't. As a fellow wanderer, he didn't notice that the location of the stigmata on her (the wanderer's) hand was exactly the same as his own. I hope this can be improved in the future and I will give you four stars [eating melon]
I have read more than ten chapters so far and I think they are still interesting. However, the protagonist seems too weak at the beginning. I don't know how long it will take for the protagonist's strength to improve qualitatively. Will the author keep writing? There are so few Ming Chao articles. I still hope that the author can keep writing. After all, I think Ming Chao's modeling is good-looking and the story is exciting. The author can continue to enjoy writing another protagonist, right? I still hope that the author can polish this work well, and I will give you gifts [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
Generally speaking, I feel that the subject matter is interesting, but the plot is not comfortable enough. There is no pretense or anything like that. It just feels normal and not enough for Long Aotian. The main reason is that I can basically guess the content just by looking at the catalog. I hope there will be a female protagonist later, and the protagonist should be the real Long Aotian, who is relatively invincible, so that it will not make people feel uncomfortable.
I hope there will be more female protagonists [laughing]
It's really going to be hard to write later, so update slowly. It's okay to stop updating before the version is updated, but don't leave it unfinished. [Praise]
I bet that even if this book is not finished in the end, it will become an important milestone for early Mingchao fandom. It is worth remembering. The plot of 1.0 Is much better than that of Clow, and the connection in 1.1 Is also very natural. According to the author's writing skills, even if Clow's plot gets sick again later, the author can still write it well. (It's a pity that Kuro's background is not as rich as that of Mi Jia next door, otherwise, Ming Chao's fans wouldn't be so scarce.)
It looks great. After playing Mingchao, I completely forgot the meaning of travel. Now all I can think about is my Jinshu.
It looks good. There is no main story. I remember that there are quite a lot of big and small tasks in Mingchao. I really like my grandpa, I really like it, I really like it, and Changli Collected Come on Author 70 draws long distance. 30 Draws more. 30 Draws less weapon. Is the author out? [Laughter]
I dance very fast. If I take Changli away, I will give it 5 stars [Adoration]
Currently, there are only three Mingchao novels that I can read on my bookshelf. The other two are at Certain Point and the other is on Tomato, but I don't think they are as good as yours, so they are ranked first for the time being.
Give me a five-star review. The summary of this book is very good, and there are very few books about Ming Chao. This book also suits me very well. I hope the heroines are Chang Li and Yin Lin @ wanqinghuan Author, if the heroine is Chang Li, then what about Yin Lin and Jin tide? (Supplement: The author is too short)
As long as there are stickers and the plot isn't too outrageous, it'll be fine! By the way, I suggest the author write more. Children will love to read [sneaky laugh][sneaky smile][sneaky smile]
We readers only need to give a five-star review. The author has many things to consider.
It's beautiful, I love watching it, I watch it every day! [Laughing evilly][cool][learned][smile]
Hmm... Come on, it's still too short
Come on, come on, come on
It's great. It's the best book I've read so far.
Author, is there a female protagonist in this book?
Much better than Mingchao Planning.
Still very good
It's okay initially, worthy of praise Although this novel is not a masterpiece, it is still very good in terms of the interweaving and novelty of the story and plot in the writing. The author has unparalleled creativity and imagination, portraying another protagonist from another angle, and interpreting the protagonists of countless timelines through time differences without any sense of division. It's a good and excellent work
The people in the author's works all have their own souls, which is very healthy
Although I don't play Mingchao and only have a rough understanding of it, I really like this book. The character relationships and plot are all to my liking and it satisfies my fantasies about Mingchao! Come on, author!
It's really good-looking. Even though I don't play Mingchao, I'm attracted to it. The author is very good [please update]
It's so beautiful, both Zhuanwu and Jinxi are available
Much better than most brainless second creations
This is Mingchao's best novel so far.
It looks good, good luck to the author [Chigua]