Ji Taoist

I think the writing is okay, but the rating is so low, so few people are watching, and there is no traffic at all. Of course, it may also be because the setting is too annoying, the plot is too wordy, and many other reasons. At the moment, I think it can be watched. It's very complicated, confusing, boring, and the system is slightly unreasonable. It's understandable that few people insist on reading it. I found that the author likes to write plots in which the protagonist works hard but fails in the end. In another book written by the author - "The Evil Spirit", there is a plot in which the protagonist works hard for a long time but fails to get the dragon bone. And there is a similar plot in this one. How can I put it, it is not satisfying, but it can still be watched. It feels like the author wants to create an idea that even if you put in a lot of effort, you may not succeed. Yes, but I feel that something can be changed, just like "The Ancient Master" failed but also made people feel happy. I can't stand this book. It's too lengthy. I still feel that this book is a decent dark novel. Please read it slowly.

I asked why it was so beautiful, and it turned out that it was written by an evil author! (It's not the evil spirit written about dancing)

It's okay and pretty good. The book gets better and better as you go to the end. However, the traffic of this book is terrible. Others have more than 130 comments and 50,000 to 60,000 people have read it. Author, you should buy some traffic like others. Otherwise, if this book doesn't make money, I'm really afraid that you will run away someday. Like the author of Eternal Life in the End Times, you are a god who persists in hard work. Come on, author, don't run away, the plot is getting more and more exciting now.

It's good-looking. Everything the protagonist does is just for himself. It's a truly dark novel, but it's destined not to be popular. It's okay to kill your wife, but not to marry your daughter. There won't be many people reading this book.

The protagonist is a person who does whatever it takes to achieve his goals, similar to Mr. Jin Yong's "Let Me Go". I always feel that when the protagonist becomes stronger, he will be like a martial arts leader with a kind face and a dark heart.

This is definitely a good book, but it also has a lot of foreshadowing and a relatively slow pace. In today's fast-paced era, there may not be many people who can calm down and read slowly. It is also dark, so the score may be a bit low.

So far, it's pretty good. The protagonist has a very charming personality and a lot of elements, including immortality, martial arts, Gu Dao, superpowers, and various series protagonist settings. I hope it can be maintained. The writing is good, but the rhythm of the plot is chaotic. Overall, it feels like the people around the protagonist are taking care of him like a nanny. The protagonist does not make full use of these network resources, but is timid. If a mortal has no blood, it will be difficult to achieve great things. It can only be said that the growth of the protagonist mainly depends on luck.

Flawed, but okay

There is definitely a gap between Gu and Gu. Gu's writing is not that uncomfortable, and Fang Yuan is not that dark. Fang Yuan's indifference and persistence give him a lot of points, and the author does not write much about ethics. In short, although the wife is killed and her daughter is given away at the beginning of this book, the writing and prose are fine.

Good-looking, this is the uncompromising means to achieve the goal. It is much better-looking than some people who are trying to sell sheep and sell dog meat. How can anyone not pay the price for the goal? Will the protagonist be changed later? No one is watching. Did the broken jar break?

Come on, come on, come on

Lao Deng, I will stop the will-o'-the-wisps. Looks good, I gave you all the gifts

The protagonist is decisive in killing, and the world view is also very novel. I personally like this slow-burning feeling of being promoted step by step. The protagonist is also willing to do anything for profit. He should be willing to abandon anything for the sake of immortality. Come on, I almost finished it in a few days, and I couldn't bear to finish it.

There is no ruthlessness in order to cultivate immortality. What makes me feel the most is that the protagonist is really amoral and understands the rules. Unlike some novels where he is grateful to the protagonist just because he helped him. It makes me feel like a real person, rather than the protagonist of the novel who is inexplicable for something.

I have read Chapter 100 so far. I can only say that it is a bit too ordinary. It is difficult to imagine when the foundation will be established.

I have read dozens of chapters. The writing style and content are very good, and it is a rare dark novel, which is even more rare. But the point I want to complain about the most is that the author wants to write something novel, but it feels a bit weird. If it is about the classic cultivating immortality genre, I will definitely be able to read it, but it is not pure. The essence, especially the accumulated beast weapon [face covering], this one is really unsatisfactory. I read the text comments and did a double break for martial arts, which is even more boring. I recognize the strength of the writing, but I can't accept the sudden whims for the time being. Overall, it's OK. I just want to express my disagreement. Come on, the author.

A good book. The protagonist is too decisive and has deep secrets. He likes to pretend that he is a good person to achieve his goal. I like to watch this kind of dark protagonist, because it is more logical, unlike Shuangwen Zhuji who acts recklessly every day and eventually becomes an immortal. Most of these people could only be at the bottom in ancient times.

I have traveled back in time, and I have good news to tell you. When the book has reached one million chapters, the protagonist has finally established his foundation [laughter]

I thought back to the Immortal Master again, but it was a pity that I could no longer see him when I looked back. The book was still too overwhelming for the protagonist, but it was acceptable.

IQ is online, a super good-looking villain novel, I feel a little tired in the early stage (I read this novel before and felt sleepy while reading it [sneaky laugh] [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile] But later on, the more I read it, the more interesting it becomes [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile], very good, I gave this five stars. (It is recommended not to read too fast when reading this novel, there are some small details)

The protagonist is ruthless and will do anything to achieve justice. Ok ok

The overall content of the book can be called a high-quality book, but the author is asked not to add some modern elements in the future, such as the high-rise buildings on the Shura side, where people can travel through, but try not to add modern elements. It is really awkward. In other parts, I think this book is a slow-burning high-quality work. It is a good book and I look forward to subsequent updates. [Praise]

Come on, this book has the quality of a masterpiece This is the real mortal novel. It is not like "Mortal Cultivation of Immortality" in that the protagonist does not have strong luck. In this book, with all the resources the protagonist has, he can only sacrifice everything he has to become stronger. But the world where the protagonist lives is not the heyday of immortality, which makes the protagonist's journey in the world of immortality difficult.

Why did the protagonist change?

It's still pretty good-looking, but it's still too cruel to give it to my daughter. Later, it was said that he was born with a woman who could barely be considered an enemy.

Killing is not a mos. There are thousands of ways to embark on the path of cultivating immortality, but I have chosen the most difficult one, the basic knowledge of cultivating immortality. Several people I met have not understood it yet. They are all masters of heavenly beings. It can be said that they can create exercises.

You lamented that life makes people mature, but also makes people afraid to grow old.

Author, you are a genius and beautiful. Compared with the evil and awe-inspiring, you are much improved.

They're all old foxes, talking about sour grapes

The protagonist feels quite like an immortal.