Multiple male protagonistsBeast WorldSystem
Accidentally traveled to the beast world and was bound to the system
I had to do tasks in order to recover my abilities and return to the Immortal Palace.
The heroine is neither weak nor silly and sweet
Reader comments
It's pretty good to watch. I like the setting. There are many beautiful men, strong female protagonists, and the system is smooth. But the plot is too fast in some places. It doesn't have enough details and just feels like that. In some places, the pace should be slower.
It is a really good-looking article and setting. The only biggest shortcoming is that the author writes some parts too sloppily, which is inexplicable. If you can be patient and write the emotional part more carefully, it will be perfect. If readers don't like it very much, they will abandon the article. It's just a very inexplicable feeling.
I can't understand it, it's so messed up, it's always about how beautiful the system is, and it feels like there isn't much text, it's too much. It's not an inexplicable feeling to see the connection behind
There are no punctuation marks between paragraphs, which makes it look very tiring, as if it is not finished. There is also no clear distinction between person and person, which makes it look very tiring. There are also attributes of the heroine and male ones. They appear many times in one chapter. Although it is free, it is troublesome to turn pages. I can't say whether it is good or bad in terms of word count. In short, one word: tired
It's pretty good to watch. I like the setting. There are many beautiful men, strong female protagonists, and the system is smooth. But the plot is too fast in some places. It doesn't have enough details and just feels like that. In some places, the pace should be slower. It is a really good-looking article and setting. The only biggest shortcoming is that the author writes some parts too sloppily, which is inexplicable. If you can be patient and write the emotional part more carefully, it will be perfect. If readers don't like it very much, they will abandon the article. It's just a very inexplicable feeling.
I can't understand it, it's so messed up, it's always about how beautiful the system is, and it feels like there isn't much text, it's too much. It's not an inexplicable feeling to see the connection behind
There are no punctuation marks between paragraphs, which makes it look very tiring, as if it is not finished. There is also no clear distinction between person and person, which makes it look very tiring. There are also attributes of the heroine and male ones. They appear many times in one chapter. Although it is free, it is troublesome to turn pages. I can't say whether it is good or bad in terms of word count. In short, one word: tired