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Finally, I saw a normal person walking through the red building. Every time I see a maid who has traveled through time, she still wants to save Daiyu and Jinchai, and feels pity for her, so I just want to laugh. The most pitiful person is you (the time traveler). How could those young people from the new era who were young and prosperous become slaves through time travel? How could they change so quickly? Normally speaking, it would be interesting enough if they did not rebel.

It is relatively rare to write about Red Mansions with respect for the characters. Wang Xifeng was sharp-edged and intolerant of sand when he was young, Leer was a money-loving and smart person, sober in the environment at that time, and obeyed the rules of the backyard. I've just read Chapter 27, and I'm looking forward to the follow-up.

It's beautiful and well-written. I like the heroine's character. She's ruthless but has her own principles. The plot is not watery at all. Fortunately, it's over. Otherwise, it would be too uncomfortable to follow. I wanted to give up the article after reading about 20%, because I felt that the heroine I saw now was a little more servile than the previous heroines, but I still couldn't bear to part with it. It was so good-looking, and the dialogue between the characters was to my liking. The author later gave an explanation. The heroine is a very strong-willed person, and she gradually realized that she had to integrate in the feudal society, so she did a lot of things that, well, made readers feel like they were enslaving themselves. Anyway, I think so. I am so sick of spending so much time reading this novel. Starting from around 20%, I feel that the heroine is making wedding clothes for others, which has changed the ending of many people in Dream of Red Mansions. Their lives are getting better and better, but the heroine is becoming more and more like a slave. The most important thing is these human lives. After their luck was changed, Wang Xifeng and her uncle had to exchange for the heroine. They were really speechless to the heroine. She knew what kind of virtue these people were, but she still planned for them wholeheartedly. I don't know what the author was writing. Why didn't the heroine plan for herself earlier? Was she specifically going to change the fate of these people? It's completely different from the author's previous heroines, very conflicting and contradictory. Doesn't it mean that the heroine is absolutely egoistic? Ever since he had been stuck in the mess of Dream of Red Mansions and changed the fate of others, but he was still a slave, I couldn't figure out how she was self-serving. Seeing the heroine plotting against the Chen family, I really felt that it was too stupid. Even if you wanted to find helpers, why would you tell the Ni Er couple you were meeting for the first time about your plan? Diaphragm can't respond well The first 20% is so good, but I really can't stand it anymore, so I just jumped to watch it. I feel lucky that I didn't waste my time reading it. Later, the heroine actually went to practice immortality. Oh my god, as long as the author can't continue writing, he will definitely get into fantasy.

This maid article is very interesting. I looked at the author's homepage and saw a familiar article about feudal maids. That article is also very interesting. It is indeed a familiar author. It's great.

It's really good to read. I didn't even think there would be such a high-quality book in Tomato. You can tell from the introduction that she is a sober heroine. I hope the heroine will not get married. Men in ancient times were not good at it. It is good to be a powerful and wealthy maid. Anyway, if you have space and money, you can't be robbed. When you get old, you can leave slavery and adopt two children with good character and find a place with good scenery to retire.

Nice! Finally, we no longer share the same sorrow, we must resist the beautification of death! Don't feel sorry for yourself and say that all I lost was my limbs and my life, but the other person lost me. From now on, my heart is empty and I live a long life with my new love. I let others get all the benefits! To die is to die! Don't die beautiful, but live!

First of all, I have the impression that the author mentioned no cp before. I have been raising it for a while and today I found that the introduction seems to have been changed to marry a background tool person. Personally, I don't dislike the male protagonist with a background, but I can't accept that the female protagonist is sold by the master to a man who looks down on her for a small profit, especially since it was previously foreshadowed that the master treats her well, values ​​her, and thinks she is ambitious and capable. If the same point is here, you may consider whether to join the trap. This is also the reason why I gave it four stars. Although I was stabbed in the back together with the heroine after reading it for so long, it is undeniable that the writing style is really good and the writing is good. I read other comments that the author's previous two maid stories also suddenly married the heroine... Well... I have no chance to follow the author's novels. I wish the author better and better. I can only say. The writing style is really good and the writing is really good. I don't mind my strong recommendation on this point! ! ! ! Not watching is definitely a loss! ! Don't get involved in any comments or arguments. It's just a bit of a snarky reminder. If you don't agree with my point of view, you don't need to reply to me. Please read the article in a civilized manner and be grateful.

A very good-looking Red Mansion fanfic. I read the original work many years ago and have almost forgotten it, but it does not affect my reading. I really like the perspective of the heroine as Wang Xifeng's maid, giving advice to Wang Xifeng, and working hard to gain power with Heping'er, hoping to give them a better ending. The lawsuits between the characters are written very delicately, making people sigh that none of them are simple characters. Although the heroine is not a pure and kind person, she has her own bottom line and principles, is smart and aware of current affairs, and fully integrates into the Red Mansion environment. Looking forward to no cp The pace is not fast, and I have just entered the Jia family as Wang Xifeng's maid, and I look forward to the follow-up plot.

The characters have distinct personalities, the details of life are very attractive, and it doesn't seem sluggish. It's the only book that I keep reading. Let's forget it when we see that the heroine is married to a businessman with poor moral character. No matter how capable a woman was in that era, she could not surpass her husband's parents-in-law. After the heroine worked for a long time, she was not as good as an ordinary person. Why bother.

Very beautiful. It's so beautiful. I can't get enough of it. It is uncomfortable for the heroine to design Xiangling as Jia Lian's concubine. Xiangling is still Baochai's maid at this time, so what's the point of casually asking someone else's maid to be Jia Lian's concubine, and it seems that this is Xiangling's best A good place to go, this sense of déjà vu, it seems that Xiangling being Jia Lian's concubine is already her best destination [Petrochemical] Even Jia Huan can make progress, so why not write Xiangling's ending better?

It is a very different Red Mansion novel, with a very unique entry point. Wang Xifeng is a good entry point, with high status and high means. In the original novel, because Mrs. Wang is an aunt, she was fascinated by the pie painted by Mrs. Wang. In fact, she is an authentic heroine. In this article, the heroine is a good helper, and the subsequent plot should be very exciting. As for the character of the heroine, it is a normal character. Some portray the maid heroine as too true, kind and beautiful, and she must also have some capable relatives and brothers who are good at reading. The heroine's family has not been described much in the article, which makes the character of the heroine more prominent. I hope that the heroine with no CP and a career is the most handsome [Adore][Adore]

It gives me the feeling that it is very real and close to the original work. It has golden fingers (portable space) but is not outstanding. I feel that the details are well controlled. What impressed me especially was the selection of maids for Wang Xifeng. The intrigues in the inner house were really written in detail without deliberately blackening or biasing. Which character, the description of the heroine's promotion path is also very reasonable. I am looking forward to the follow-up plot. I hope she will not get married in the later period, and she will not be Jia Lian's concubine (of course, with the heroine's character and methods, this kind of thing should not happen). This is really my favorite among the Red Mansions fans on Tomato.

This is the best Red Mansion fanfic I have ever seen. It feels like it could even be made into a TV series on its own. I can only say that the author is awesome! This book is highly recommended! First of all, both the protagonist and the supporting characters have their own distinct personalities. Even if there are differences from the original work, the author added background and they fit the original work very well. For example, Jia She and Li Wan are different from what I remember, but the author's adaptation is very reasonable, which makes me think that maybe Cao Gong set it up like this, but he didn't write it out. Secondly, the author's writing is fluent, and each stage is well connected. There is no boring part. Although it is a female fanfic, the various strategies, calculations, layouts and plans are not inferior to serious Machiavellian writings. Moreover, the author combines a lot of knowledge in historical psychology, which benefits a lot as a reader. Finally, I think the author's writing style is very good. In the later period, due to the layout of the protagonist, the main plot description of the article was transferred to the protagonist's daughter. However, the author did not delay and go astray. In the end, he gathered all the clues very smoothly to help the heroine become a fairy. It's simply not too awesome [like]

I've looked for a lot of them, and this one is really good. I haven't gotten into the original line yet, but you can still see the skills and the author's understanding. The heroine deserves to have been there, it's really good~ The characters of the other maids are also very full. He is jealous of the heroine Heping'er but doesn't harm anyone. In fact, he just wants to be valued by Feng Lazi. It's very novel. Although there are cases where the spirit has passed through the body of a certain maid, this is the first time I've seen this kind of opening. From what I have seen, all the characters are Sister Lin, brothers, sisters and even stepmother, belittling everyone in Baochai, Baoyu and Jia's family, completely losing their character. It's really uncomfortable. Thanks to the teacher for saving my eyes [Send Heart], this book was recommended and it was the first time I read it unintentionally.

It is indeed a maid story at the beginning. The author has done a deep research on Dream of Red Mansions and the plot of each character is very detailed and vivid. The author seems to be studying psychology and has learned a lot about the world from the author's books. What I like most is the novel concept of this book. The rise of Xu Le is like a flag. Since then, tens of millions of women, tens of millions of women who were deeply oppressed in the feudal era, have stood up. This is the if line of history. Even if there is no if, women are still struggling to get out of the quagmire. The plot is reasonable, has a good grasp of human nature, and is enjoyable to watch. Every five hours after school in high school, I must read it. I originally wanted to save it for the winter vacation and eat it slowly, but I didn't expect that it would be gone after Xu Le got to know the police fantasy fairy. Looking forward to the next work! ! ! Author, this is what you eat! ! !

It's super good-looking, and it's a great story about a super heroine. What surprised me the most is that the heroine actually became an immortal in the end, but Red Mansion itself is also a work with many fantasy colors. Also, I feel like the characters in it are not OOC. What touched me the most was actually the relationship and comradeship between Wang Ziteng and Mrs. Wang, which made my blood boil. Also, the author brought the endings of those miserable women to life, which really moved me. I felt very sorry for them when I read the original work. Moreover, Xi'er, An'er, and Jia Zhu, who died early, who did not appear in the original work, were also written out. And it was also because of Jia Zhu that the younger generation of the Jia family had the opportunity to rise up.

So far, the writing is really good, especially the handling of interpersonal relationships. It is useless even if the introduction says that the protagonist is uniquely beautiful, but the main text says that there is too much money to protect it. So I hope that the author can reasonably write the heroine's strengthened background in the future. After all, setting up a female household is not that simple. To be able to maintain it, you need to have a background to avoid being bullied. Recently, I have been both a fairy and a god. Alas, the plot is also very boring. It is gone [face covering]

The protagonist has a very lovable personality, a personality that never suffers, and can detect subtle details. The plot of the novel is substantial, the structure is compact, and everything is well thought out. The content of the novel will not make readers feel disgusted, but rather appreciate it. Push push push!

The author's grasp of the characters is very accurate, and the plot of the original work is very clear, which is really rare in fan fiction. Especially in the early stage of the Wang family, the setting of Wang Xifeng's childhood background is very good. Wang Xifeng's character in the original work can be seen in his childhood. It just feels like Wang Xifeng occupies the heroine's ecological niche. The story is all centered around her, and the protagonist's halo is also given to Wang Xifeng. The real heroine Xu Le, on the other hand, disappeared from everyone, and it was not felt that she had any irreplaceable role in promoting the plot. And the author's understanding of the feudal family feuding obviously comes from Zhifu. The later the story goes, the more profound the influence of Zhifu is. Zhifu's description of feudal family relationships is wrong in itself, and it is even more inappropriate to place it in the Jia family. It feels like an emperor using a golden hoe. It is understandable that the author sacrificed some of the original character settings in order to create interesting stories and plot conflicts, but it is still acceptable.

Very well written! Although there are not many words at present, the writing style is smooth and the character portrayal is also very vivid. The maids are fighting openly and secretly in lawsuits. As the maid next to Wang Xifeng, the heroine is smart, capable, eloquent and cruel. The writing about the trivial things in a wealthy family is naturally interesting. I look forward to the next article. I have seen Wang Xifeng and Jia Lian Xiaoding so far. I recommend it.

This is one of the best novels written by Red Mansion fans. My favorites, Lin Daiyu, Wang Xifeng, and Baochai, all jumped out of their original experiences and had different endings. The heroine traveled through time and became Wang Xifeng's maid. She did not view the natives with the attitude of a superior. Although she was not frightened at every step, she was always cautious. Strong people never complain about the environment, they just adapt and change. The heroine is doing quite well, and even getting married will not stop her from moving forward. The main thing for women is to live a better life and not be addicted to love. Especially in the end, it has a bit of fantasy color, which I think is very good. It breaks out of the red building and has a different kind of excitement.

It's very good-looking. In it, Wang Xifeng, Ping'er, several elders, and various maids are all well-characterized. Da Da's interpretation of Red Mansions is very profound. At first glance, it seems that he has read the original work carefully. I hope Da Da will read more Red Mansions. Good-looking Red Mansions are too scarce in the market now. The setting of the protagonist's accounting skills is simply wonderful. With this ability, it is conceivable that the protagonist's future life will be magnificent.

The writing is very good, it is really rare, and the intention is to seek status for girls in the feudal era. The heroine has strategies and ambitions. You can also see some details. For example, when Sister Yang attended the palace banquet, she only felt that the heroine and other women were like lifeless statues. I was deeply impressed. The nature of feudal cannibalism was undoubtedly revealed. Therefore, maybe only by climbing to the highest place can we Can change, the heroine and the others fought for it, and were inevitably assimilated. I just hope that in the end they can remember their true intentions. In the finale, Wang Xifeng, Lin Daiyu, and the heroine could still sit and chat together, with their descendants around their knees, calling the old lord (but it seems impossible with the heroine's current state. Is this the price that pioneers who want to change the times have to pay)

A very nice fanfic of Dream of Red Mansions. I have read a lot of Dreams of Red Mansions. This one can be ranked at the top. The first half is delicately written and has clear logic. It feels like a Dream of Red Mansions. The second half is a bit too unreal. The author's writing style is actually more suitable for writing about the efforts and struggles of an ordinary person. However, in such a big background, it is really difficult for a woman to be a slave. At this point, let alone leading women to come out, it is a bit too idealistic, and it still has to rely on the setting of cultivation, but this setting is too large. The fantasy in Dream of Red Mansions is still vague, false or not, similar to the mythical stories passed down by the people, rather than the real fantasy in this book, which is very fragmented. It would be a pity if you read this book without thinking, and it would be too disconnected if you read it with your brain. But it is indeed an innovation and worth recommending. It feels like a Dream of Red Mansions + Journey to the West hahahahaha

I finished reading it, it's really good. In fact, I read the author's other book first, but after reading this one, I realized why the author would write another one. The heroine is very motivated and wants to be more for herself, and have a kind of life in the feudal society. Impossible Life. For this reason, the book has more than 8,400 pages. She has been groveling in front of people with a higher status than her for nearly 7,500 pages. As the saying goes, those who flatter the superior will bully the inferior, but the heroine did not choose to do this. When she could, so, This is the reason why she can succeed. When she sees those maids and maids who are like her, what she thinks in her heart is that they look very similar to me, so she should be smart and give them some time to grow up, instead of thinking that everyone should be like her just because she has gone through that journey. In the end, she becomes an immortal and can have more possibilities and a broader world. I also think that this is what Leer deserves. It is really not easy for her to go through this journey. The author's views on children's education, views on aristocratic families, speculation on people's hearts, and distribution of interests are also the highlight of this book. It is really well written, and the bustling world is all for profit, and everyone is for profit.

It's a good read. My favorite Red Mansion fanfic. The girls in the Red Mansion are all good, but the plot later is a bit too fantasy. The ending where the heroine kills the Chen family and his son and becomes an imperial merchant is actually very good.

This is a Machiavellian novel, with a strong female protagonist and a careerist. The heroine plans to conquer the world step by step. She has both IQ and friendship. The heroine has a very big picture. She would rather give up her path to immortality, but also plan for her earthly power. None of her children are her biological children, but she loves them very much. She knew that she was not good at cultivating immortals; business and strategizing were her strengths. She wanted to strengthen the country through business. She wanted to change the world. He tried his best to change social rules and people's values ​​by seeking imperial power, but his original intention was to improve women's living environment and social status. It can be said that she was selfish in the early stage; but when she was in a high position, she had pursuits. It is worth saying that "if you are poor, you can benefit yourself; if you are rich, you can help the world." [Praise]

My favorite fanfic of Dream of Red Mansions. The plot, word choice, and character creation are all very careful. Wang Xifeng's character is not broken, and the relationships between various characters are clearly sorted out. The image of the heroine is very transparent, eloquent, and understands all kinds of worldly affairs, which is consistent with her identity and makes people like her very much. The space golden fingers are also opened very comfortably for convenience and safety. In the earlier period of the timeline, I am looking forward to what Jia Baoyu and others will look like before they have grown up. The author incorporated his own thinking into the plot, and seemed to have a plan for the heroine's final fate. Anyway, I will continue to chase, come on 🥰🥰🥰🥰

A dream in Red Mansions, when I wake up from the dream, I am full of poetry✨ Once in time, he became a child of the Wang family, from a young maid who planned step by step to a highly trusted dowry maid beside Feng Lazi... In the deep courtyard of the Red Mansion, daily struggle! The writing is rigorous and the plot is precise, the characters are delicately drawn, and it is wonderful and beautiful [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

This book is not bad. From a maid to a capitalist, Wu Wen has some elements of becoming an immortal. In the end, he supports his daughter to become the emperor. But at the end, the author makes an inexplicable comment about the daughter's lack of father's love... Although the explanation later is that the daughter feels that there is no one but me, but it is really difficult to say this from a third perspective... The front is really beautiful! Very detailed and well-detailed, not suspended. There are pros and cons, but the comment section should be more serious, and it's good to read critically with them (critical here means: there are good and bad parts of this book, you don't have to force yourself to like it completely, just praise the good parts and discard the bad parts. If you feel that you can't stand it, it's fine not to read it)