My Sister, One Is Naive and the Other Is Cold!

So did the protagonist's daughter later know that her mother and brother were the same person? Yinli is 13 years old now, is she still breastfeeding? Hey hey hey

If you don't update me soon, my life will be short of a lot. [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] Think I don't have an author

I don't know how to put it, but except for some logic problems and lack of description of certain situations in the early stage, everything else was okay. I'm looking forward to the story behind it.

They are all from the male protagonist's perspective. I want to see the mother's perspective! ! ! Everything feels good, but somehow it feels so narrow, hahaha. I saw from the novel that this book is so narrow. Maybe it's because the author didn't describe the environment very well. Also, the protagonist written by the author is quite ruthless. Except for his own daughter, maybe the author did it on purpose, and the plot is right! It feels like the plot is narrow! ! ! The past of the protagonist is overshadowed and I am curious about what it was like before. Besides! ! ! The most important thing! You have to listen carefully, we readers watched the plot after the protagonist turned into a woman and gave birth to a child! I'm not here to see your brother-sister drama! How is this different from a simple story about raising a sister? I suggest that future plots be all about women, but I think it's very difficult to write like this. There were too many plots about the sister and the brother, making the sister too dependent on the brother. The point! ! What we are watching is a plot about women looking after children, not about the brother and sister, which is not interesting at all. Look at the female portrait. Say important things three times! (If neither the author Lily nor Married Man can choose, then both sides can take it all, or both sides can take it together or change the order) Forfeiting two stars is because the author has let down the readers, but this book has not yet been published, and it is full of books for the author, but it is also disappointing that this is not the author's debut novel and it is written in such a mess (｡•́•̀｡).

One update a day is too little. I'll read more when I have more. Author, your book won't be eaten by me, right? I hope the perspective of the second part will focus on the wife

Looks good, but a little lacking [blowing kiss]

Good looking, I like to see it

Will the author write a second part?

Come on author, the book is good

It's so beautiful, I love it so much [love][love][love]