Magic Awakening, My First System Is the Auxiliary System

It's not bad, but the pace is a bit fast, and some of the plot lines are not explained clearly. In addition, I feel that the description of Goldfinger's appearance is a bit brief and blunt. However, the flaws do not hide its flaws. On Tomato, this book is considered a good book, and the writing is not bad. It is one of the few good novels that I can read on Tomato. (Because I've read too many of JJ's two-male protagonists, I'm not quite used to Tomato's writing style and writing style) Finally, I hope the author will continue to write. If nothing happens, I will keep chasing it. Come on!

It still looks good, but two contradictions have been discovered. The first one is the first magic saint in mankind, Emperor Xi. Although he is a superpower, his ability is a bit too heaven-defying. After death, he can make the two protagonists go back to the past. Compared with other magic saints, it feels like it is not on the same level. But he was so powerful and died. There is also Little A. Little A is relatively the highest-tech product in the protagonist's plane, but he is as advanced as the mechanical race in the mechanical plane, and the technological civilization of the mechanical race is much worse than human civilization.

🈚️Poisonous and delicious, come on! It's a good read. I'm the kind of person who likes to save a few hundred chapters and wait until the author has more chapters before reading it. I've read this book twice (the first part has more than 800 chapters). There's nothing too shocking, and it's a little bit refreshing. I feel that the biggest shortcoming for me is that the early stage of the relationship is a bit unnatural, mainly the confession part. It was indeed a bit critical at that time, maybe because there wasn't much description of Song's feelings in the early stage, which made Wen's confession a bit stiff. It'll be better later on, the emotional line should be relatively fast, after all, this book is quite long. Another point is that the plot is rich. For someone like me who has always read short stories before, being able to read it shows that the plot is quite good. I'm now going to finish reading the book three times, so I'll leave a book review before that. Finally, the author, please swear to me: I will update 10 chapters every day, and I will continue to update unless there are special circumstances, and I will never be unfinished. I want readers to eat the best articles and the best meals. Come on, the author [sends heart] [shy] [shy] is waiting for you

Big cheers for the author! Love it!

The writing is a bit immature and there are some bugs, but the overall plot is still okay. The plot doesn't have too many twists and turns, so I'll want to keep watching it, and it's more of an upgrade. Five stars for the author's hard work in coding.

It looks good, but the author doesn't seem to know how to use periods. All sentences end with exclamations [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

After searching for a long time, I finally found a novel I like. I think this one is really suitable. It doesn't have to be too high-profile or outrageous, and it's logical. Most high-scoring golden fingers are too outrageous, and love comes suddenly. This book has a buffer for love. I really like it. Every team member is unique. I really like it, really like it, really like it. I say the important things three times. I hope the author writes more books

I just saw Chapter 122. Well, I just feel that any opportunity is there. Give it to Song Yaohui. Well, if there is a mercenary group, it is better to cultivate forces. It is good for each team member to increase their strength and have their own characteristics. We will grow together and become two strong.

I really, really wanted to see the fighting scene, but when it came, they all flew away.

The writing is pretty good. I really like this type of book. It took me a long time to find this book that is more in line with my taste. I really hope the author will keep reading more.

It's nice to read, but many of the unimportant places that can be brushed off are written in too much detail, making it very tiring to read. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Maybe the author's writing style was not very good at the beginning, but I saw that the writing becomes more and more fluent later, and the world view is very large, the plot rhythm is compact but not perfunctory, and the characterization of the protagonist and supporting characters is also very complete. It feels like I am accompanying the growth of the protagonist and the author.

Very good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking. The plot has ups and downs, and the content is also very colorful. It belongs to the category of refreshing writing. That is, the transition of emotional development is not very natural, but the overall writing is relatively good. I recommend it [Love] [Like] [Like]

Very beautiful! Big cheers for the author! I want to see more clips of the protagonist Jiang Jiang Niang Niang...

This book is super good. Don't be discouraged by the ratings because there are too few people who have rated it. The two male protagonists are really in love, and the one with the golden finger is so thick, hahahaha, it's so cool [blowing kiss]

The setting is very good and the plot is smooth. Some details in the text need to be polished, but overall it is a very potential novel. I also wish the author a nine points for this book. In fact, what I said above should be too early. Some of the plots in this book are based on the plots of Journey to the West, and the function of the mechanical heart contracted by the protagonist (it should be) is a bit unnatural. There is nothing new in the plot, and it can be used as an embellishment when used appropriately, but when used in large quantities, the content becomes tasteless, making me feel like I am watching something I have seen before. The writing and style can become more vital. Of course, this novel has been finalized. I wish the author's next novel will be better. The above personal comments may be deleted if they cause adverse effects. The language can be made more poetic, and the author's name is fine. Best wishes and apologies again.

Come on! Very nice [admiration]

Double male protagonist version of full-time mage [smile]

I very much approve of this book. The world view of this book is very novel, and the subject matter is rarely written. I have persisted until now, maybe because of the two male protagonists. Not many people like to read it. If I don't look at this aspect, I think 8.5 Points is a more objective evaluation of this book.

It's pretty good. I'm a book listener, so the punctuation marks discussed in the comment section don't have much impact on me. Moreover, this subject matter is really rare. I happen to like this category too.

I don't know if you have a plan for how many chapters it will be completed. So far, the world view and system are generally complete and novel until I have seen Zombie Nation. The writing style is a bit plain, but it fits the work very well, so the score is not so low.

It's good to watch, the plot is ups and downs, the characters are rich, not too brainless, and the CP is also very good.

Good-looking, super good-looking.

Good luck to the author!

The male part of this book is so-so, and the relationship between the male protagonists is too vague, but the fighting part is really good.

Personally, I quite like this type of writing. It's a cool novel, and there's an emotional line. The two of them make progress together, but the later updates are so-so.

It's pretty good, it's a bit buggy but I can accept it. The main reason is that there are very few articles of this type. I hope the author will work hard and never stop updating [full]

Looks good, come on!

Very suitable for my taste [love] [love]

Looks good, cheers sir