Dungeon Survival: Starting with a Huge Debt

It's really good-looking, the emotional lines are very delicate, and the plot is full of imagination. There are many places where you can see it. The author is also very careful in depicting a new world view in different scripts. It cannot be said that every character is very real, but the main characters all have a "human" feel. The disadvantage is that some monster information is not well hidden. As a result, when I read the monster encyclopedia later, I would not feel a sense of loss and lacked a bit of fun. Just like in the second script, the protagonist killed some Sulley monster and double the number of Sulley monsters appeared. After several encounters with the Sulley monster, he failed to kill him and escaped from the range of the Sulley monster, and double the number of monsters appeared. Later, when he saw the monster encyclopedia, he already knew what was going to happen and completely guessed the information about the Sulley monster. It's also about the Heart-Drawing Ghost that it exceeded my expectations and I'm a little happy (●°u°●). Later on, the pace of the protagonist became faster and a bit overwhelming. It made me feel like I was in a dream. The changes were a bit too fast. To sum up, the writing is very good^ω^, but it needs to be improved. I look forward to the author's progress. Just like the author said that he is a medical student, I am also a medical student. I hope to learn more about the description of the human body and learn more from my predecessors. ∠( ᐛ ∠)＿

1. There is a lot of original content in the dungeon, which shows the author's intentions, but the writing style is rather complex. It is recommended that each dungeon have one of the three themes of upgrading flow/horror and supernatural/wits reasoning. For similar infinite flow cool articles, you can refer to "Doomsday Paradise", "Thriller Paradise", "Colorful" "Egg Game". For group portraits, you can refer to "Earth Redemption", "Midnight Owl" and "Earth Online". For horror, you can refer to "The Scary Joke" series "Identity Number 019", "Hell App", "Mysterious Earth Sea" and "I Become a God in a Thriller Game (First Half)" 2. The monster illustration setting is rare, but it is not recommended to have it in every copy, because it is okay to see this setting once or twice, but it feels a bit lazy after seeing it too much, like patching the settings/holes that have not been shown. You can try to learn original/new original mystery novels, so that the protagonist and the player get the same amount of information, increase the complexity and rationality of the rules, and work hard on the sophistication of the copy. If you write a well-written story, each copy will be like a short mystery novel. Of course, the Monster Manual is still very fun and can be kept, but it would be better to weaken it appropriately. 3. I like the character design of the protagonist, ordinary hanging silk, and occasionally have a flash of inspiration. I hope to retain the good parts of the protagonist's humanity until the finale! There could be less of the part about being obsessed with beautiful women, because there are too many of the same kind and it is no longer popular. Even the wording lowers the B-level of the article, and the look and feel is very old-fashioned. Appropriate selling fu, lily or even four loves will make the article more popular and interesting. If you want to write more novel content, you can try adding trace amounts of meta or radio wave elements. 4. The author's writing style is excellent compared with other authors of the same type. The writing is plain and smooth, with an occasional hint of humor, and appropriate jokes. There are no exaggerated writing methods and secondary settings. The plot connection is smooth and natural, making it easy to read. Moreover, the dungeon world/prop settings are very concise, and the characteristics of the characters are easy to remember. I hope the author can increase the enjoyment by appropriately adding some highlight moments of the characters, rather than by obtaining various props, which will be more enjoyable. 5. There are too many typos. It is recommended to rework and modify the entire text when you have time, as well as some grammatical errors, which will greatly affect the perception. Five stars for encouragement, I hope to see the update of the unfolding of the raging waves in the future, write the finale, and become the gold mine in Tomato History! It is also recommended to refer to "Fraud Game" to join the battle of wits between players and become a masterpiece. It only needs to evolve from simple cliques. I am good and you are bad.

It is a very good novel. The author has his own ideas and will not be interfered by the outside world. However, the current environment cannot help it. All walks of life seem to have entered a bottleneck. Luck is really important, but you will be handsome if you persevere. Come on! You must keep your promise to finish after 1000 chapters!

The plot is a bit slow, but it's still very good. There are some dungeons where the ending is a bit hasty. I say I don't want to write too long, but I feel that if a good copy is long and complete, there will be no problem. The overall content and plot are okay.

This book is a treasure book that has not yet been discovered. I believe it will become popular in the future. Unlike the stories on the market, they are all stories that have not been read before and are not brainless. It's very good to have a clue and clear thinking. I hope the author can keep writing in this state and don't be discouraged. Gold will always shine.

It satisfies the requirements, and it's not bad. The characters are quite funny, and the plot is not bad. It suits my taste. I prefer this type, where the protagonist fights wits and courage with others. It's not bad.

I really like the author's writing style, it's very interesting, I can't stop laughing, and the plot design is very novel, but the author always doubts himself, I hope you don't get discouraged, there are still many people who like you

The plot of the dungeon where the protagonist lives is very novel. Although the writing style is not particularly good, I think this book is still very well written. I can read it and read it. I hope the author will not give up and continue to work hard.

To be honest, these copies are relatively new, better than those old routines, but the author thinks they are a bit wordy, and they are okay. I feel that after reading a lot of novels, I like to read more novel ones, and I am tired of the old routines.

It is different from the novels I have read before, although the writing style is not as good as that of other novels. But it's rich in imagination and the plot doesn't drag on too much. It's much better than those big-ass words that only pay off. It can be seen that I really put my heart into it [crying]

The quality is still there, the plot is very original and not very similar to other books of the same genre, and it doesn't feel like a cookie-cutter book.

I've read 100 chapters, and the copy is so good that I wanted to stay up late at night. It is indeed a human-written AI. Nowadays, all AIs are the same, almost the same. Right now it's 5 stars, it's quite nice, I'll talk about it later.

A book with great potential🤩🤩🌹(＾-＾)📚(✧∀✧)(✧∀✧)(✧∀✧)(✧∀✧)( ✧∀✧)(✧∀✧)(✧∀✧)(✧∀✧)(✧∀✧)The author, please come on ٩(๑^o^๑)۶

Except for some places where it's a bit awkward to read, overall it's pretty good. But the update speed, um, is similar to that of most authors, right? Just as short and weak.

How to say it? It is a good-looking book, and the protagonist is not a dog-licker. He will do it when it is time to do it. But to be honest, it seems that not many people read this book. The latest update is less than 20.

It's pretty good. The score of 7.6 Is a bit low. Every story is interesting, and there are no unreasonable settings. It doesn't have any bad points for me. It's still a very good book. It's really uncomfortable if it's neither popular nor popular. Alas, the author said that he wants to finish 1k chapters. Come on, come on.

The dungeon is quite interesting to write, very detailed, and each character has a rough idea of ​​their thoughts. The protagonist is a slightly smarter ordinary person. Unlike most rule streams, the protagonist sees through everything early.

It's great. I hope you can support the author. It's not easy. The writing is really good. I'm not a bastard! ! ! I have also read a lot of novels on Tomato. To be honest, the writing in this track is not bad. It is more interesting than AI. I support it.

Every character has a brain, and the writing is very detailed. Now it seems that the characters are vivid and smart. Anyway, keep going!!! [Send heartfelt] But there are too many scenes and too many words. There is no sense of crisis when life and death are at stake, and it seems very relaxed? The main reason is that I am short of time and talk too much.

7.7 Points is a relatively reasonable score, and it even feels high. Novel with a score of 9 or above has no major poisonous points and few or no minor poisonous points. The novel with a score of 8-9 has no major poisonous points, but many minor poisonous points, but the minor poisonous points will not affect the main plot. Novels with scores below 8 have big poisonous points, or small poisonous points occur in or around the protagonist group, affecting the main plot.

This book is much better than those with high ratings, but it's a bit hard to find. Come on, author, don't stop reading. Good books shouldn't be buried.

After reading this book, I found the meaning of life. People should not live numbly. It is a very good book. If you feel unhappy in life and have troubles, you can read this book. You may find unexpected inspiration. I sincerely thank the author.

I think this book is very well written, although it has a few flaws, but what kind of book is without flaws, but why doesn't anyone read it? As long as the author keeps updating, I will follow it to the end. If the combat power becomes unbalanced in the middle, just pretend that I didn't tell you. Before the game started, the amount of poison was so high that I couldn't understand it. I almost wanted to run away. There was also the price of conscience. If it was used less, it felt useless. Also, the protagonist should not just want to die. There was also the protagonist, why the protagonist couldn't be beaten and didn't choose to run away. As for this option, find a small corner to squat, wait for his condition to subside, and then come out and kill him.

The story is told well, and the characters all have their own ideas. It's worth reading when you're in a book shortage, and the overall feeling is better than the previous book.

Overall, the writing is okay. It's not poisonous but not refreshing either. After reading 200 chapters, it feels logical and a good book. I feel that the score is a bit low. It should be around 8.5. I'll give it 5 stars. It's a little bit toxic, but I can accept it. The author can canvass for votes every few pictures, which may be of some use.

It's a bit interesting, it has its own innovation, and it's not particularly depressing. It looks good. It's not particularly scary. It should be more scary. It's not very scary.

So far, it is considered to be a very good one written in the unlimited text in Tomato. The settings of spiritual objects and monsters are also good, and the concept of the dungeon is also very exquisite. Keep up the good work, and hope that the combat power system will not collapse.

The reasoning behind the copy is very profound, and it is indeed good to ignore some of the writing and details. The coherence and narrative of the copy are not as good as those of a masterpiece, but it is still an excellent work. The writing should be polished to make the article more mature.

It has been recommended. I got it from the recommendation. Stop Eunuch. It is rare to find a book that I can read. Although I know that the copy is so long only for foreshadowing, I suggest that two chapters be combined into one. This way there will not be a book with forty or fifty chapters. Also, I want to read a single or double version. Hold on, hold on, hold on, hold on, Stop Eunuch.

Arresting parents is an extremely vicious point. Shuangwen even threatened his parents when they were arrested, and it went on for a hundred or two hundred chapters, which is amazing👍