The Modifier Player's Journey

It looks okay, but if the dialogue between the male and female protagonists is not marked, you really can't tell who is talking. In fact, this book is not like one soul and two bodies. It is better to define it as narcissus. It would actually be better to have a separate paragraph for character dialogue or interaction. Finally, I hope this book won't be piggyback!!!

These two bodies that share everything are two bodies, right?

Can the author change the name Anqi Anqi? After all, the names pronounced when listening to the book are basically the same. The two pronunciations sound almost the same. Although the words are different, there is no difference in the pronunciation. Please reply after reading it.

There are so few people watching.

Very good. You can see that the author is working hard 👍

Not bad, good, keep going