The Second Most Beautiful Girl in the Class Became My Military Advisor

At present, first of all, the protagonist's personality is not clear in the first three chapters, but it soon becomes apparent, and then the emotional line develops too fast (it will be patched later). Secondly, there is no highlight. Advantages: ① The plot development rhythm of the article is very well grasped (anyone who has read Qingli should know this, I stayed up late for 3 days to read the whole book, it was amazing) ② The writing is online, and some golden sentences appear from time to time ③ The characters are well created, the male protagonist can often hit unconsciously, and the other female protagonists have different settings and have their own characteristics Generally speaking, as long as the standard is maintained, the results will definitely not be low, but it depends on how the author collects the harem (don't write him as an unconscious scumbag like Qing Li, md, it was painful to watch for me at the time)

Hello, author, I have copied your book and published it on other platforms. The feedback from readers has been very good and the income has been good. Recently, there have been a lot of requests from readers for more chapters. I hope the author will add more chapters so that it does not affect my income. Hope to know

Hello everyone, my name is Song Tiancheng. It's a bit shy for people like this to read my diary😋

The writing style is still as good as Qingli's I wrote a comment for Wangdong, take a look Moving like a wave, turning back to Sichuan Quiet as the flowing wind tracing the light of the white snow Just like six dragons returning to the sun As soft as a flute and a sheng The writing is like silk, the brushwork is like water In a word, good!

After reading it, the open ending is really a bit unfinished. The youth in this book conquered me, an old bookworm, and the author chose to end it at its climax. Maybe this is the reason why this book has a slightly low rating and poor profits, because of the story behind this book. There is still a lot more to write, and I really want to see the ending of the protagonist and the three of them, but if I continue writing, there will definitely be knives. Maybe the author doesn't want this youthful book to have knives, so he chose to end the story at its climax, leaving us to imagine the rest of the story. We can supplement the story of youth by ourselves and come up with the ending we want most.

People who read it will probably like it very much. It has the flavor of a romantic comedy and light novel. A cute goddess, a arrogant military advisor, and a talented school girl It should be because I really don't know how to clarify the emotional line later (no matter how unfinished the love affair is, we can't imitate Brother Cheng's decapitation, right?) Although this article is cut in half, it is highly recommended

Come on, I want to learn the self-contained writing style, but I can't. The author still has a way of describing the poisonous tongue and arrogance. Come on, someone will watch it

It's still pretty good-looking. In my opinion, what Military Master Li did is the so-called act of trying to steal the boyfriend of your best friend? One sentence. You don't know whether Chu likes music or you? I'm so confused. Isn't music the right thing for me? If none of my talents belong to me, then what does? This is actually a poisonous point. To be honest, Military Master Li said she was a military counselor. In fact, the author unintentionally portrayed her as jealous. She wanted the heroine to get along well with the hero, but she was controlling and unwilling to give up the hero's image. She was quite contradictory and I personally think the portrayal was not good. Is this article an afterthought? It shouldn't be. Is this reasonable? [Laughing awkwardly]

Support the new book, come on, author!

I suddenly came across Teacher Wang's book on a sudden day and read it in one day. First of all, it shows that I love the writing style very much. At the same time, I am not too dissatisfied with the sloppy ending. On the contrary, I not only learned how to tease the heartstrings of my "friends", but I was also deeply attracted by the smoothness of the writing and the beauty of the lyrics. I objectively and impartially think it is a good book that can inspire and recollect readers in the corresponding field. I can partially resonate with the author. Having graduated from college, I have gained some understanding of my own experience in the Shura field of love, and I am deeply inspired. At the same time, the theme of "love" is also full of emotions. I can receive encouragement and encouragement, and have some real fun in the days when I stop. I will not completely give up on myself when I am trapped in life, and I can hold on to the slightest hope in the gaps between life and life. As for the author's talk about his own feelings that prevented the book from being truly completed, what I want to say is that time traps us. Yes, I am also trapped in my past relationships. Both sides have faults, no matter how big or small, and everything they point to is ultimately a dead end. The relationship of six years is inseparable after all, and so am I. Whenever I think of the past in college, it seems that they are all memories left for one person, which makes people dare not think too much or think carefully. Sometimes I know how to grasp the moment, and sometimes I think that my ex has some shortcomings that are intolerable. If I am not too bad, I can always live a better life. Sometimes I feel that these are all illusions and just thoughts in my head. Anyway, I hope Teacher Wang will have a better life! ! In fact, I haven't figured out what I want for more than 20 years. I just do it when I am passionate and indifferent when I am calm. But at least when I read a book, I know that I love reading, and the same is true for e-books in this era. That's enough!

Hello, the author of this book is that I stayed up late to read this book. It is very interesting, but as I saw, this book is very depressing. I know that this book is related to your livelihood. I hope that if you can't finish it, you can write the final ending in the last chapter. After all, I really like reading this book. Thank you for adopting [Love] really good

Please, please update more, Mr. Wang, it's really hard to read if you don't have any books.

It's Qingli, good review, I hope this one will be the same

I turned it off and couldn't help but look it up again. I saw some clues in the middle and later sections, but I didn't expect the ending. But that's okay, there's no need to chase books. Overall, it's very appetizing. I just wanted to drink some sweet water. I don't like eating knives. Although the ending is very abrupt, I didn't see the plot development that I wanted to see. Maybe it's just the helplessness of reality. That's it, the five-star right is just a sign of affection, and by the way, I'll trick future readers into appreciating this yogurt-covered novel. Huh? Where did the yogurt go? I don't know? My hand slipped? But you are also a big shot who drinks yogurt and only licks the lid. Isn't this super cool? [Cool]←[OK] [Cry]

I like this book The protagonist is growing up and the heroine is great Moreover, the male protagonist is not the typical male protagonist in Tomato Tokyo novels who is shady, coquettish, abstract, cold on the outside but hot on the inside, and passively accepting. He is quite sunny. If you like it, you will actively pursue it. It is great [sending heart][sending heart][sending heart]

Why is it over? I, I, I, oh, oh, oh, so I didn't see regrets in the book at the end, but I saw the ending of regrets in reality. I don't know if they will be able to see them express their feelings to each other, but Song Tiancheng will not let them down. Although we can't see their stories, they should continue. This book should make me think of it again and be full of regrets many years later. We don't know the name of the last song.

No ending? It's really sad, because I like the characters in the book very much... It's quite sad, and there's so much I don't want to say. Maybe no ending is the best ending. They are only sophomores, and their youth will never end. To be continued...

I like the author's book very much. I have been reading it for a while. I have been in school this month. When I came back, I suddenly found that the update was interrupted. In fact, I feel a bit regretful. After all, it is my fault that I like this book. I really don't know what to say. I hope the author can come back when he has time to appease the expectant readers. Thank you. I really like this book.

It's really beautiful. But, author, who can read enough of your one update a day? Everyone else updates three times a day. It's just that the knife at home is a bit rusty. Do you think it can have the effect of tetanus? Be careful that the military advisor will take revenge on you.

The five-star praise is that I hope Teacher Wang will continue to persevere. The writing of this book is also very good, and the plot is also very exciting. Even if the ending is not satisfactory, how can there be no regrets in life. For this reason, Wang (hope) the author will continue to retain the original intention of Qingli and write more excellent works. We will also become loyal readers of Teacher Wang (although I am a new fan) [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

To be honest, this book is really good. If you feel it, I recommend reading it. The characters are very vivid, but it's a pity that we can't see the back, but everyone behind is the author. Feel free to play out the ending you want! ! !

The book is very interesting, but I would like to ask whether I should accept one or both in the end. I don't want to accept one and then others will deal with it. I always feel that this will make me feel uncomfortable [I almost cried]

The light novel style is destined to have a slow pace, so many people will find it boring, but the author actually controls the pace well. As for the creation of the character, I think it is relatively clear.

Teacher Wang's book must be given five stars [cool] It looks good, I love watching it [licking the screen]

Damn it, I finished it in two days. Breaking up is painful, but as you wrote in your book, you are realizing the ideals of many people by writing this book, so there is no need to give up. The ideal state suddenly disappeared. Pastor Yueyue Xiaolu suddenly disappeared. How regretful and desolate it is? When you are in good condition, I will wait for you to come back and update this book again in a few years, the future King of Sungar.

Last night, when I was bored, I suddenly discovered the author's new book. I read it all night and just finished it. Good, please cheers for the author [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

It's quite good, a campus science fiction book [note]

Author, I hope it will be hundreds when I come next time [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

Teacher Hundan, the heroine sent me [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry]

The old man is right about one thing. Light novels are really his comfort zone. It's so damn comfortable.