The Outcast: At the Luotian Grand Ceremony, I Summoned Zhang Huaiyi

I give salt to myself [give my heart]

The title of the book needs to be changed, but the chapters have not yet been titled. Because the plot of "I Become an Immortal by Shocking the World Under One Person" is okay, you can read it in Shuhuang.

Very nice! As long as you don't engage in stallion tricks in the later stage, don't open a harem, and keep heading towards the road to immortality, it will be fine! Let's just forget about the ambiguity... Otherwise it will be difficult to wrap things up...

The best Under One Person fanfic I have seen on Tomato so far. The protagonist's ability to reincarnate in the dirty land is a perfect match for Under One Person. The older generation is really charming. Secondly, it's good that the main character is not sexually promiscuous. Men should pursue the high road. They can't stand harem stories written by men. They don't know how to write emotional scenes and forcefully accept the harem. It's like collecting figurines. The female characters are all OOC and worse than tools. (Actually, the female characters in this book are also OOC, and almost all fall in love with the protagonist at first sight, which is too much. Fortunately, there is not much ink, so it is tolerable.)

Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Sun Wukong waited for Tang Seng for 500 years, and Yuwen Tuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years. Year, Huacheng waited for Xie Lian for 800 years, Feng Qingxue waited for Baili Tusu for 900 years, Long Kui waited for Long Yang for 1,000 years, Bai Zi waited for Xu Xian for 1,000 years, Yi Xiaochuan waited for Yu Shu for 2,000 years, Su Jiuer waited for Feng Xi for 3,000 years, Xiyao waited for Feipeng for several thousand years, Huo Ling'er waited for Shi Hao for millions of years, and Zixuan waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives. And I have been waiting for your update. One day, one day, one month, a frail young boy was lying beside the bed, with a slight smile on his lips. Her outstretched hand trembled slightly, and tears shone in the corners of her eyes. The hoarse voice murmured: "Don't forget to update..."

This book offers interesting worldviews and interesting values, so I give it a five-point rating. The essence of Nadu Pain Company is actually similar to reality. The rules are made for strangers without backers. Strangers without backers who are more outstanding will either be absorbed like Zhang Chulan, or enter the bunker like Chen Duo, or be destroyed and disappear like Biyou Village, but they have absolute Strangers with powerful powers are either individually incomprehensible, or like the four major Wang families, no one cares about any evil deeds, just like the news about the second and third generations that occasionally breaks out, or any truly unfavorable history, disappears within a few days. In the interconnected world, human memory only lasts seven days.

The writing is pretty good, but a little lacking.

Well written. Although the previous system settings are a bit "chaotic". At least it's filled in. Remember to complete the system construction or introduce it completely in the next book. Otherwise, many people like to shout "Suppressing the fighting power, shouting to suppress the fighting power" 🤭

A very good work, you can look forward to the follow-up work.

The author's writing is very good, it is refreshing and makes people want to read on. Although Qu Tong's Golden Armored Hercules seems to be suppressing the protagonist's combat power, it will not suppress the protagonist's ability to fight back, nor will he feel aggrieved. I will give 9 points from 1 to 10 💕 Come on 😄