One Person: the Dirt Is Reincarnated at the Beginning, and the Ten Guys Break the Defense

I give salt to myself [give my heart]

The title of the book needs to be changed, but the chapters have not yet been titled. Because the plot of "I Become an Immortal by Shocking the World Under One Person" is okay, you can read it in Shuhuang.

Very nice! As long as you don't engage in stallion tricks in the later stage, don't open a harem, and keep heading towards the road to immortality, it will be fine! Let's just forget about the ambiguity... Otherwise it will be difficult to wrap things up...

The best Under One Person fanfic I have seen on Tomato so far. The protagonist's ability to reincarnate in the dirty land is a perfect match for Under One Person. The older generation is really charming. Secondly, it's good that the main character is not sexually promiscuous. Men should pursue the high road. They can't stand harem stories written by men. They don't know how to write emotional scenes and forcefully accept the harem. It's like collecting figurines. The female characters are all OOC and worse than tools. (Actually, the female characters in this book are also OOC, and almost all fall in love with the protagonist at first sight, which is too much. Fortunately, there is not much ink, so it is tolerable.)

Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Sun Wukong waited for Tang Seng for 500 years, and Yuwen Tuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years. Year, Huacheng waited for Xie Lian for 800 years, Feng Qingxue waited for Baili Tusu for 900 years, Long Kui waited for Long Yang for 1,000 years, Bai Zi waited for Xu Xian for 1,000 years, Yi Xiaochuan waited for Yu Shu for 2,000 years, Su Jiuer waited for Feng Xi for 3,000 years, Xiyao waited for Feipeng for several thousand years, Huo Ling'er waited for Shi Hao for millions of years, and Zixuan waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives. And I have been waiting for your update. One day, one day, one month, a frail young boy was lying beside the bed, with a slight smile on his lips. Her outstretched hand trembled slightly, and tears shone in the corners of her eyes. The hoarse voice murmured: "Don't forget to update..."

The writing is pretty good, but a little lacking.

This book offers interesting worldviews and interesting values, so I give it a five-point rating. The essence of Nadu Pain Company is actually similar to reality. The rules are made for strangers without backers. Strangers without backers who are more outstanding will either be absorbed like Zhang Chulan, or enter the bunker like Chen Duo, or be destroyed and disappear like Biyou Village, but they have absolute Strangers with powerful powers are either individually incomprehensible, or like the four major Wang families, no one cares about any evil deeds, just like the news about the second and third generations that occasionally breaks out, or any truly unfavorable history, disappears within a few days. In the interconnected world, human memory only lasts seven days.

A very good work, you can look forward to the follow-up work.

Well written. Although the previous system settings are a bit "chaotic". At least it's filled in. Remember to complete the system construction or introduce it completely in the next book. Otherwise, many people like to shout "Suppressing the fighting power, shouting to suppress the fighting power" [laughing]

The space under one person is too small. Let's take a few old men to see other worlds for a long time. It just so happens that Lang Yi Bo Mi Er has also been updated. This space is here again. Author, don't you think so? By the way, several thugs who were reincarnated in other worlds were brought back to Zhao Fangxu for a long time.

The stars twinkle, the moonlight is like water, A fairy dances gracefully, The wings flutter, light and agile, The moonlight is shining, and the feathers are flowing. The pure white skirt is looming, Flowers in hair, soft and charming, Holding a bouquet in hand, dancing gracefully, The moonlight is my companion, and the fairies dance. Dancing across the stars, crossing the sea of clouds, Fairies dance, dance miracles, The moonlight pours down and fills the earth, Fairy dances, dances life.

The author's writing is very good, it is refreshing and makes people want to read on. Although Qu Tong's Golden Armored Hercules seems to be suppressing the protagonist's combat power, it will not suppress the protagonist's ability to fight back, nor will he feel aggrieved. I will give 9 points from 1 to 10 [send heart] Come on [laughs]

It's actually pretty good-looking, but I've always been fascinated by the time in Dirty Land. There are four battle powers that rank first, but it's still a bit too frustrating.

You are a little poem, lyricism is your essence. I believe that your future will be filled with bright flowers and exude the most charming youthful atmosphere.

It took me half an hour to read it. It's well written. Keep up the good work and don't stop. [Adoration][adoration][adoration]

The pace is a bit slow, but the plot is interesting, the ideas are novel, and the characters are vividly described. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Is it because I didn't give five-star reviews for the book, that's why you only update two chapters a day? At this moment, at 12:50 on August 3rd, I will give you a 5-star review. Can you update it more? Don't force me to send you a blade.

It's okay, there are some problems, but it can be watched normally. As long as you don't care about the time limit before the reincarnation, and it speeds up a bit later, the rest is okay. The ending is good and acceptable, but the best situation is that the protagonist and Chen Duo are together? It's a bit vague and I don't understand

It's good to keep writing with this momentum, keep up the good work!

So far, I still think it's pretty good.

I feel it's okay. There are new introductions to Wu Gensheng, Qu Tong, Jiashen Rebellion, No One's Ascension, etc. It's a matter of opinion about combat power, but the protagonist has never suffered a loss, it's just that he's not invincible. The golden light at the back can super control metals within dozens of miles, and is immune to all modern weapons. With the addition of the Reincarnation of the Evil Earth, the Heavenly Group is truly invincible.

Is it okay to read Shuhuang? Let's forget about it.

Not bad. You said that if the protagonist goes directly to the Wang family's ancestral tomb to summon the Wang family ancestors. What will happen to Wang Ai's expression?

This ability is better for writing behind-the-scenes and entertaining stories, and it's a bit uncomfortable to rely on intimacy to show your strength.

How to say it? It looks pretty good to me, but that's just for me.

Personal opinion, how should I put it, although the system control the original route, it is still ok, at least you can only eat half of the beef But I feel that there is a direct control route later on. As long as a lot of changes are made to the original work, the punishment for the pig's feet will be heavier, although the pig's feet have not been changed yet. Hmm~ Overall, it's a bit boring. Cheers to the author later

The update is quite stable and the subject matter is novel. Next time I suggest writing about the Eight Wonders of Sharingan Copying Techniques.

Very nice(✪▽✪) This book by the author gives all the characters a reasonable ending, allowing regrets to be made up for [shy]

It's awesome. I think this truth is so real that even Mi Erxian couldn't write it down. That's awesome, I'll definitely collect this

Thank you for this book that put me in the midst of the book shortage [sending my heart] [sending my heart]